CLAIMS- URBIE

This passage is mainly discussing the impact of trauma on the behavior and well-being of children, specifically in the context of veterans with post-traumatic stress disorder and Holocaust survivors. These claims have four categories.

The first one it’s Children of veterans with PTSD and Holocaust survivors may exhibit signs of secondary trauma or psychological distress. This claim her main point is recommending for children who have parents or grandparents who have experienced significant trauma, has war or the Holocaust, may themselves show signs of trauma or emotional distress. The passage references studies conducted on the children of American World War II, Korea, and Vietnam veterans, as well as the children of Holocaust survivors, to support this issue. These studies report elevated hostility scores, psychiatric treatment needs, difficulties in establishing friendships, and other symptoms in the children.

The second claim and is the behavior of children in traumatic situations may mirror the behavior of their traumatized parents or caregivers. The passage implies that children defined to traumatic situations may imitate or “mirror” the behavior of their traumatized parents. For example, it suggests that Katie, a young girl mentioned in the passage, mimics her father’s overreacting and yelling, which are likely manifestations of his post-traumatic stress disorder.

The third case and is the intergenerational transmission of trauma may not always be supported by rigorous scientific evidence,like we can see in the paragraph is representing a counterclaim by referring to a 2003 meta-analysis conducted by Dutch and Israeli researchers. This meta-analysis found no evidence for the intergenerational transmission of trauma when more rigorous controls were applied. In other words, it suggests that the relationship between trauma experienced by parents or grandparents and the psychological well-being of their descendants may not be as straightforward as previously thought.

The last issue and is the differences in coping mechanisms and resources may affect the transmission of trauma across generations. The passage raises the possibility that differences in the coping mechanisms and support networks available to Holocaust survivors compared to veterans may explain varying outcomes in their descendants. It suggests that Holocaust survivors had more resources, wider family and community support, and were not expected to “man up and get over it” as much as veterans. This difference in external support may influence the impact of trauma on subsequent generations.

In conclusion to recap everything the passage presents a complex and brief picture about of how trauma may affect children and grandchildren of individuals who have experienced traumatic events. It also opens the eyes and attention on both evidence suggesting a potential impact on the well-being of descendants and the challenges of establishing a clear causal link between the trauma experienced by parents or grandparents and the behavior and mental health of their progeny.

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1 Response to CLAIMS- URBIE

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    There’s a lot of good work here, Urbie, and some nice language about the passage. You’ve clearly followed the logic and rhetoric of your section and understand it. But the format you’ve chosen to communicate your findings makes it hard to evaluate whether you’ve identified the claims, named them, and isolated them as discrete elements of the sentences as the assignment instructs you to do.

    For example, I don’t know what words the author used to communicate that surviving the Holocaust or combat CAUSES symptoms of severe trauma. I can’t provide examples of what I mean since you haven’t quoted any of the material you read. All of your classmates did, following the models I provided.

    Just as importantly, the language you DO use leaves too much open to interpretation, since your claims are vague. Consider this paragraph:

    The last issue and is the differences in coping mechanisms and resources may affect the transmission of trauma across generations. The passage raises the possibility that differences in the coping mechanisms and support networks available to Holocaust survivors compared to veterans may explain varying outcomes in their descendants. It suggests that Holocaust survivors had more resources, wider family and community support, and were not expected to “man up and get over it” as much as veterans. This difference in external support may influence the impact of trauma on subsequent generations.

    Compare it to the same paragraph with SPECIFIC CLAIMS inserted to replace VAGUE LANGUAGE:

    Today’s combat veterans have FEWER NATURAL coping mechanisms and resources to ALLEVIATE trauma THAN OLDER GENERATIONS. The passage MAKES THE CLAIM that social support networks for Holocaust survivors may explain why today’s veterans SUFFER MORE, even years after their original traumas. It claims that Holocaust survivors had more resources, wider family and community support, and were not expected to “man up and get over it” as much as WE EXPECT OUR COMBAT veterans to do.

    Does that help?

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