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Causal Argument – Tenere84

School Shootings: Searching for a “Common Profile” of Perpetrators is a Mistake, but Reducing Mass Media Coverage of Them Could Work Despite decades of experience dealing with school shootings, neither the left nor the right can really agree on how … Continue reading

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Causal Argument-Harp03

Rob Manfred, Put on Your Thinking Cap Each year, baseball fans preemptively get psyched for the upcoming MLB season. From the second the World Series concludes until Opening Day, a large majority of baseball fans have hope, both for a … Continue reading

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Causal Argument-a1175

The One-and-Done Rule Degrading College Education The one-and-done rule became apparent for the NBA in 2005. The reason for this rule was to give high school seniors a chance to mature before entering the pros. Once this rule was implemented, … Continue reading

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Definition Revised- J6128

The Comparative Career Trajectories of Soft-Skill Candidates vs STEM Degree Candidates In the 21st century, Science, Technology, Engineering and Math (STEM) degrees have been the center of attention in terms of whether or not they are a good investment for … Continue reading

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Causal Argument Revised-J6128

The Lack of STEM candidates in the Workforce Due To The Skills, Racial And Gender Gap Today many policymakers and industry leaders have agreed that the U.S is in the midst of a high-tech talent crisis due to the growing … Continue reading

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Definition Argument – ShaquilleOatmeal

What Really Is A Nutritional Lunch? Thesis: Promoting the consumption of modern school lunches will benefit student health and education better than modern homemade lunches because of the well-balanced and variety being presented to students at school. A school lunch … Continue reading

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Definition-sixers103

The Evolution of “sport” through the ages When you think of the word “sport,” usually people think of something that involves multiple people competing against each other in a physical activity. Sports first began in 776 BC with Olympic games … Continue reading

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Stone Money Draft – Tenere84

Money: Humanity’s Greatest Collaborative Illusion While civilization has grown and become more advanced over the years, many thinkers have begun to question the reality of everyday concepts we hold dear to us such as beauty, morality, truth, etc. What if … Continue reading

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Stone Money Revised Draft-J6128

                                    The Essential Role of Trust in the Global Economy  Trust is, and has always been at the foundation of the global economy. That trust has been tested, strengthened and weakened for hundreds of years and its importance prevails amongst societies … Continue reading

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Stone Money Draft- StripedSweater21

An Abstract Concept of Wealth In retrospect, the currency used in society is worthless. Whether it is digital numbers on a screen, bills of paper or stacks of copper and other common metal coins, the value of the material itself … Continue reading

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