Rebuttal Rewrite-hockeyplayer

Better Stats Mean the Best?

When we think of the best players of all time do we think of their stats? Or do we think of these achievements these players made throughout the years they played, or is it how these players changed the landscape of the game. Stats have caused many to have different opinions on who they believe is the best players, but how do you take one statistic from the hundreds that there are to declare that one stands above the rest? Stats can also be used out of context for example a player that played the game in the past may have scored less three point shots then todays player because of a rule change that brought the three point line closer to the basket to make the NBA games more high scoring. If a player has missed more shots then another does that mean they are worse then that player, or if a player has score more goal in more games does that make them better.

In the article “Are We Becoming Too Obsessed With Stats In Sports?” its explained how people today, are taking these advanced stats and comparing every player with them, the problem with that is these advanced stats don’t include everything that goes into a player for example the stats could be comparing the points per game and the assists per game between two players and only using these to compare the players when a players may be better in other major areas then these two fields. Its explained how stats are being overvalued and cant truly show how dominant a player is. The article also goes into how people may never watch these players play and just go to the stats section of the players career and use that to define them, this leads to many people believing another player is better then another.

In my next article, “LeBron James vs. Michael Jordan: How their careers compare” this was a summary of the two player overall careers and who hold the better statistics and how threes so many different ways to compare the players. The first statistic was Lebron has had the longer career, going into his 21st season while Jordan played 15 seasons. Many people could use this stat to say Lebron was more dominant over a longer period of time, or someone could say Jordan was more dominant in his years played the Lebron. The next stat was all time points scored LeBron’s has 38,799 while Jordan had 32,292. Lebron currently holds the record for most points scored of all time, this stat can be a major one used to say Lebron was better then Jordan, or you could use another stat which shows Jordan who averaged the most points per game of all time was better. The final stat the article would use was championships won which has Jordan currently ahead with his six championships won while Lebron James has 4 championship wins, However Lebron has been to the championship ten times total compared to Jordan’s six unfortunately for Lebron he lost six of those finals while Jordan never lost a single NBA final. The article’s overall conclusion was how do choose which statistic makes a player better when there are so many different ones to choose from.

In my final article I chose “What is the average points per game (PPG) in the NBA by year? Looking at the last decade and evolution of scoring” In this article is goes over how the 2022-23 season was one of the highest scoring seasons ever in the NBA. Due to the new rules that they did not have in the past which has led to the explosion of the three point shot, the game is played much different in todays game of basketball then in the past. This is yet another example of how the best statistic cause people to think players are better then other, due to more scoring this means there will be a higher assist average and higher points per game averages for everyone. A player back in the day before these new rules would average around fifteen point a game and be treated as a superstar however in todays game this kind of player would be what you hope for from a sixth man. In 1996 around 16 three point shots were being attempted per game while in 2022-23 the average is 34. My purpose for choosing this article is to show the effect that stats don’t mean everything when comparing players.

In todays world with all of this technology players stats are being more used now then ever before, and the effect of this is causing fans to have all different kinds of opinions on who is the best, but they are consistently downplaying the past players and their greatness and what they brought to the game of basketball.

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4 Responses to Rebuttal Rewrite-hockeyplayer

  1. hockeyplayer's avatar hockeyplayer says:

    This was orginally made as my causal draft, Im not sure if I wrote it like a rebuttle

  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    HockeyPlayer, we have just a few days to correct a semester’s worth of writing problems, so let’s make good use of our time, please.

    I’ve made myself clear on Rhetorical Questions, I think. They are deadly weapons that should be wielded only by trained, licensed professionals. I haven’t seen your license, so I’m going to prohibit you from using them. You ask SIX in your opening paragraph, although not all of them are identified with question marks.

    Here they are:
    1. When we think of the best players of all time do we think of their stats?
    2. Do we instead consider their years of achievement?
    3. Do we instead consider how they changed the landscape of the game?
    4. How can we decide which statistic is most important?
    5. Is a player who missed more shots than another a worse player?
    6. Is the player with the highest goals-per-game average the best?

    The trouble with Rhetorical Questions is that your reader will answer them before you can. As soon as she does, you have reinforced her answer, she will dig in to resist your argument, and you’ve put yourself behind. Bad start.

    What you WANT is to command the argument, not let some random reader conduct it for you. I will turn all these into bold clear claims if you like. But you should do it yourself if you can. Is the answer to any of these questions: Yes!?

    If the answers are YES, make bold claims about those.
    If SEVERAL criteria need to be considered to determine the GOAT, make THAT the subject of your Introduction.

    Remember, this is a REBUTTAL argument, so you need a strong opponent. NOT JUST LeBron is better. Somebody who bases that argument on ONE criterion, maybe, whereas you contend that NO SINGLE STAT can begin to encompass the broad determination of who’s the best ever.

  3. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Putting the argument aside for a moment, you’ve made a dozen or more Fails For Grammar errors in your first paragraph alone. Several involve making comparisons with THEN instead of THAN (Rule 8).

    I’m highlighting and then correcting the obvious grammar errors. When I do so, I’m not endorsing the corrected sentences. You should still radically revise the paragraph to make it a bold and compelling Refutation Introduction. But I want you to see the corrections before we lose the opportunity. Here goes:

    When we think of the best players of all time do we think of their stats? Or do we think of these achievements these players made throughout the years they played, or is it how these players changed the landscape of the game. Stats have caused many to have different opinions on who they believe is the best players, but how do you take one statistic from the hundreds that there are to declare that one stands above the rest? Stats can also be used out of context for example a player that played the game in the past may have scored less three point shots then todays player because of a rule change that brought the three point line closer to the basket to make the NBA games more high scoring. If a player has missed more shots then another does that mean they are worse then that player, or if a player has score more goal in more games does that make them better.

    When we think of the best players of all time do we think of their stats? Or do we add up all the achievements these players made throughout the years they played? Or, is it how these players changed the landscape of the game? Stats have caused many to have different opinions on who they believe are the best players, but how do we take one statistic from the hundreds that there are to declare that one stands above the rest? Stats can also be used out of context; for example, a player who played the game in the past may have scored fewer three-point shots than today's player because of a rule change that brought the three-point line closer to the basket to make the NBA games more high-scoring. If a player has missed more shots than another, does that mean he’s worse than that player? Or, if a player has scored more goals in more games, does that make him better?

    ONE MORE TIME:
    The best players of all time are only partly measured by their stats. Some of their most important lifetime achievements aren't numerical. The truly great players of any generation change their sport forever. And although stats do matter, no single statistic is enough to declare any player "the greatest." Generational differences change the measurements, too. Jordan's three-point shot was farther from the basket than LeBron's is. Players who take more shots make more shots, but they also miss more shots, so counting only points is an injustice, just as counting only misses is. Taking ALL things into account, both numerical and innumerable, Jordan is still the better player than anyone else who ever laced up a pair of Jordans.

    Please apply these lessons to your other paragraphs.

    Provisionally graded. Revisions are strenuously encouraged (required, in fact, for arguments in your Portfolio), and Regrades are always available following substantial improvements.

  4. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    I appreciate the links to sources, HockeyPlayer, but your References are not compliant with our needs. The first one should look like this:

    Pekmic, Asmir. “What Is the Average Points per Game (Ppg) in the NBA by Year? Looking at the Last Decade and Evolution of Scoring.” Sportskeeda, Sportskeeda, 31 Jan. 2023, http://www.sportskeeda.com/basketball/what-average-points-per-game-ppg-nba-year-looking-last-decade-evolution-scoring.

    Or like this:
    Pekmic, Asmir. “What Is the Average Points per Game (Ppg) in the NBA by Year? Looking at the Last Decade and Evolution of Scoring.” Sportskeeda, Sportskeeda, 31 Jan. 2023.

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