Visual Rewrite – thefirstmclovin

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A father and mother appear to be starstruck and have their attention clearly occupied. The mother is holding her young son, who appears to be four years of age and the dad is standing next to the little daughter as they all walk out the front door clearly to somewhere. The mother and father also have hands packed and completely occupied, holding what it looks like is travel necessities, and kid toys.

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The mother flips her hair as she is indicating she’s in a good mood. as she is still holding the young son, her eyes appear to glance where they are walking to. She is holding a smoothie.

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The father and mother are both walking out the front of their house toward something with their two kids one in the mothers hand one next to the father. The mother seems to be observing the designation they’re walking towards as the father is talking to the daughter next to him reprimanding her.

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The the young daughter, appearing to be four years of age response to the father, and starts to pull on the toy he is holding as they continue to walk. 

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The daughter get more persistent with her pull and take a giant step to gain leverage. It also appears she repeat something to her father as she looks back at him. 

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The father appears to drop some thing in his right hand he was holding as distracted from the daughters pull. The daughter laughs and the mother appears upset. They all continue their walk. father also has a piece of bread in his mouth.

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The mother curls her lips in anxiousness as she watches the father drop the item in his right hand. she directs her glance in her husband’s direction.

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The father looked at the item on the ground as the daughter also appears to be looking at it. The mother readjust, her son, that she is holding in her hip as they are both preoccupied with items in their hands. They stop their walk to pick up the item.

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The mother is holding a coffee and baby juice in her left hand as she finishes readjusting her son and her hip . She looks busy and occupied.

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The mother opens her mouth and failure as she failed to readjust her son in hers hips. almost dropping him she regains control.

0:10

The multiple backpacks carried on the fathers right shoulder, two appear to slip. he appears frustrated by this, as he is extremely occupied with items in his hand. 

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The video pins out in the mothers still trying to regain control of her child on her hip. The father is trying to keep all items balance as he finally picked up the item off the ground. The daughter is still pulling on the item from the father. 

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The video pans back to the father as he’s holding the multiple backpacks on the shoulder with items in his hand. he tries to take a bite of his bread.

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The mother takes the lead in the walk as she has her son now adjusted on her hip. The daughter was walking next to the fathers now walking near the mother. Father tries to readjust the backpacks on his shoulder. The fathers is behind them. 

0:14 

The video zooms to the fathers lower legs and feet as he appears to stumble with all the items in his hand. He does not completely fall. He does not completely fall. He just stumbles while standing. 

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The daughter is now in the lead of the walk, as she is smiling, and appears to be singing a song. The mother still holding the son walks behind her. The father glances at the daughter in the front wall, picking up items he appears to have dropped again.

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The daughter drops her toy as the mother approaches the car, and the father does as well. 

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The mother, plus your coffee on top of the car as the sun on her hip fidgets with something in his hand. The dad is behind her, approaching the car as well. 

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The dad opens the car door for the daughter as she lowers items to put them in the car. 

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The mother transition to the kid from her hip into the car. She opens the car to do this. 

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The dad, with his daughter in the child seat in the back and appears to be strapping her in. The daughter appears to have a bowl of snacks in her left hand and is eating while he does this.

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The video zooms in to the lock of the child seat the daughter is in. The dad clicks the seatbelt in strapping her in. 

0:22 

The daughter flips the bowl of snacks into the father’s face after she is strapped in. The daughter begins to laugh as a dad looks in anguish as the snacks in his face. 

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The daughter jiggles the snack bowl some more. The fathers draw drops as he tries to avoid the snacks.

0:23 

The mother looks calm as she has on the other side of the van strapping in the son to his child seat. 

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The video zooms in again to the mothers hand strapping in the son. She appears to do the slowly. 

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