The 11 Problem Sentences
- Taxpayers are curious as to whether the amount allocated to education has an impact. It does, when you give it some serious thought. Consult any parent whose child attends a high-end school.
- Different kinds of injuries occur in different sports.If someone knew that an athlete could become stronger through surgery done before an injury occurs, would they object?
- Envision a drug taking over a body.An individual would stop at nothing to obtain this drug, disregarding the potential negative effects.
- Syrians are causing more issues than we are resolving by coming in.
- Does it seem insignificant to not actually have someone else’s money on hand?
- The only real value of the little green piece of paper in someone’s pocket is the cost of production, but someone will work their entire life to get more of those pieces so they can take them and deposit them in a bank.
- So just keep in mind that the next time someone looks at a dollar bill or reads a bank statement, they’re holding an imaginary amount that someone decided to make up. Without it, trading with commodities like produce and livestock might still be necessary.
- I now realize that the only thing worth a dollar is what someone can get in return for it.
- It brings me full circle to the idea of the stone to be able to carry money around without having to physically hold it in one’s hand because, similar to stone currency, we do not need to be physically in possession of Bitcoins to be the owner of them.
- People often discuss the American Dream, which holds that in order to be financially secure, we must possess an adequate amount of these documents. Someone who gives it some serious thought will see that they are given these documents they refer to as money and base.
- Money is a clever idea, and we can pursue it for a lifetime.From the first day of school, everyone wants to play the game of producing enough of these pieces of paper to improve and normalize our life.
Counterintuitive Fall 2024 
1. Taxpayers are curious as to whether the amount allocated to education has an impact. It does, when you give it some serious thought. Consult any parent whose child attends a high-end school.
—When YOU[?] give it . . . .
2. Different kinds of injuries occur in different sports. If someone knew that an athlete could become stronger through surgery done before an injury occurs, would they object?
—You could eliminate the pronoun disagreement of SOMEONE/THEY this way:
—Would anyone object who knew that an athlete could become stronger through surgery done before an injury occurs?
6. The only real value of the little green piece of paper in someone’s pocket is the cost of production, but someone will work their entire life to get more of those pieces so they can take them and deposit them in a bank.
—You could eliminate the pronoun disagreement of SOMEONE/THEY this way:
— but we work our entire lifetimes to get more of those pieces so we can take them and deposit them in a bank.
7. So just keep in mind that the next time someone looks at a dollar bill or reads a bank statement, they’re holding an imaginary amount that someone decided to make up.
—You could eliminate the SOMEONE/THEY pronoun disagreement this way?
—So just keep in mind that every time we look at a dollar bill or read a bank statement, we’re holding an imaginary amount that someone decided to make up.
11. Someone who gives it some serious thought will see that they are given these documents they refer to as money and base.
—Often the best solution is to eliminate people:
—Serious thought will show that these documents are referred to as money.
Nice work overall, BabyYoda.