2nd Person – Ladybug122718

The 11 Problem Sentences

  1. Taxpayers wonder if the amount that is spent on students education has made an impact. Yes it does make an impact, for a parent whose child goes to an expensive school.
  2. Different kinds of sports can cause different types of injures to athletes. Does an athlete know that after surgery is performed it consider an strong athlete?
  3. Imagine being consumed from an drug and not worrying about the consequences that come.
  4. Syrians are causing problems that can be resolved by fixing it.
  5. Ideas of having money on-hand doesn’t sound trivial?
  6. The piece’s of green paper holds no value or cost but is important to banks.
  7. So just remember to read a bank statement or look at dollar bills which made up a value that someone decided to make up. Without having to trade with goods like livestock and produce.
  8. I understand that a dollar is worth it an can be receive in exchange for it.
  9. Walking around with money gives the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency it doesn’t need to be in physical possession like Bitcoins.
  10. We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires pieces of paper to be financially stable. Thinking deeply on receiving these pieces of paper called money are base on the whole life on them.
  11. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. The goal is that the moment school starts, its to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make life more fun and acceptable.
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1 Response to 2nd Person – Ladybug122718

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    1. Taxpayers wonder if the amount that is spent on students education has made an impact. Yes it does make an impact, for a parent whose child goes to an expensive school.
    —Nice, except for the “students,” which needs a possessive apostrophe.
    —Taxpayers wonder if the amount that is spent on students’ education has made an impact.
    2. Different kinds of sports can cause different types of injures to athletes. Does an athlete know that after surgery is performed it consider an strong athlete?
    —Huh?
    —”after surgery is performed it consider an strong athlete?”
    6. The piece’s of green paper holds no value or cost but is important to banks.
    —Lots of number problems.
    —The pieces of green paper hold no value or cost but are important to banks.
    8. I understand that a dollar is worth it an can be receive in exchange for it.
    —Odd.
    —I understand a dollar is worth what it can be exchanged for.
    9. Walking around with money gives the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency it doesn’t need to be in physical possession like Bitcoins.
    —Huh?
    —Having money but not the physical currency reminds me of the stone money of Yap, or Bitcoin, because we can own them without carrying them around.
    10. We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires pieces of paper to be financially stable. Thinking deeply on receiving these pieces of paper called money are base on the whole life on them.
    —”are base on the whole life on them”?
    11. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. The goal is that the moment school starts, its to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make life more fun and acceptable.
    —OK, but:
    —From the moment school starts, the goal of the game is to accumulate enough “green paper” to make life enjoyable.

    Good work overall, LadyBug. I appreciate the effort.

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