Causal Rewrite—Urbie

A Causal Thing about Homeschooling and School

” There is no elevator to success you have to take the stairs” is one of the most important things you learn in school because you have to work and make effort for passing class by class till the end.

1.Traditional schools have big on improving the socializing of children’s.

2.schools serve as places where children form connections, make friends, and become part of a broader community.

3.School events like homecoming, school trips, prom, and graduation are seen as memorable and significant experiences.

4.The period that attending public school is a rite of passage and an integral part of life’s journey.

     5.The transition from one school year to the next or from school to other life stages can be a              significant and proud moment in a person’s life.

6. school life have a really good impact on your future.

7.On the other hand, we highlight the freedom and flexibility associated with homeschooling.

8. Homeschooling is to learn and live within the comfort of one’s own home, free from the constraints of traditional school schedules and environments.

9.Homeschooling can lead to fewer instances of stress and depression related to tests and exams.

10.homeschooling can be advantageous for specific cases, such as special needs children or individuals with disabilities.

11.Homeschooling is presented as a more accessible and adaptable approach for these groups.

12.We also reference various sources and articles that discuss homeschooling, its advantages for special needs children, and the pros and cons of this approach.

13.The sources listed provide a basis for the claims made in the text.

14.In conclusion, the text presents an exploration of the pros and cons of homeschooling compared to traditional schooling, with a focus on the importance of socialization and the potential benefits for special needs children.

15. Is essential to consider individual circumstances and needs when deciding between homeschooling and traditional schooling, as both have their advantages and drawbacks.

Sources :

1. Special needs students – the advantages of homeschooling. Calvert Education. (2019, January 3). Retrieved May 31, 2022, from https://www.calverteducation.com/homeschooling-children-with-special-needs/special-needs-students-the-advantages-of-homeschooling

This article is about the advantages of homeschooling to special needs. The relation between this article and my research is that is showing the good part of homeschooling and when it can be advantageous.

2. Special needs parenting: The pros and cons of homeschooling a child with disabilities. Angel Sense. (2019, February 11). Retrieved May 31, 2022, from https://www.angelsense.com/blog/special-needs-parenting-the-pros-and-cons-of-homeschooling-a-child-with-disabilities/ 

This article mainly focusses about that’s there is some kind of activities and events where you cannot be able has a parents to provide to your children at the house but the school can provide them.

3. READY KIDS Occupational Therapy-Homeschooling For Special Needs Children: Weight Pros & cons.The ready kids team. Homeschooling for Special Needs Children: Weighing Pros & Cons (readykids.com.au)

This article is focusing on the Pros & cons of home schooling to special needs children ,it’s kind of an argument because okay homeschooling is better for special needs children but in the same time it’s has some bad effects.

4. Ray, B. D. (2017). Research facts on homeschooling. National Home Education Research Institute. Research Facts on Homeschooling – National Home Education Research Institute (nheri.org)

Researchers with numbers and strategies about homeschooling.

5. Medlin, R. G. (2000). Home schooling and the question of socialization. Peabody Journal of Education, 75(1-2), 107-123. Home Schooling and the Question of Socialization: Peabody Journal of Education: Vol 75, No 1-2 (tandfonline.com)

Written a journal about homeschooling and the question of socializing.

6. Rudner, L. M. (1999). Scholastic achievement and demographic characteristics of home school students in 1998. Education Policy Analysis Archives, 7(8). ERIC – ED424309 – Scholastic Achievement and Demographic Characteristics of Home School Students in 1998., Education Policy Analysis Archives, 1999-Mar-23

Demographic about homeschool when it’s first begin.

7. Isenberg, E. J. (2007). What have we learned about homeschooling? Peabody Journal of Education, 82(2-3), 387-409. What Have We Learned about Homeschooling? on JSTOR

Homeschooling impacts in general.

8. Gaither, M. (2009). Homeschooling in the USA: Past, present, and future. Theory and Research in Education, 6(3), 331-346. Homeschooling in the USA: Past, present and future – Milton Gaither, 2009 (sagepub.com)

This article is most national studies about homeschooling and how people feel about it.

9.American University School of Education Online. (n.d.). The importance of school attendance. American University School of Education Online. https://soeonline.american.edu/blog/importance-of-school-attendance/

Describing the importance of attending school.

Dunckley, V. (2021, September). The research on homeschooling. Psychology Today. https://www.psychologytoday.com/us/blog/parenting-translator/202109/the-research-homeschooling

The academic, social, and long-term outcomes for children in home schools.

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2 Responses to Causal Rewrite—Urbie

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Urbie, I don’t know where this material came from, but when I read it, it sounded like a list of comparisons between Homeschooling and Traditional schooling.

    So I created a list from your text to demonstrate how it probably looked in the original.

    In addition, the repetitions of “It” and “we highlighted” and “Homeschooling is presented” and “the sources listed” and “the text presents” all suggest that the words you’ve presented here were taken directly from a review of a study written by someone else.

    It’s probably a very valuable source for your research, and it’s also probably in your Proposal+5 or your Annotated Bibliography, but you didn’t give it credit in a Reference list below your text.

    Fix those big problems and put this back into Feedback Please when it’s ready for another look. Meanwhile, write some language of your own, please.

  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Thank you for your changes.

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