Definition Rewrite – Unicorn

Pit bulls are often seen to be more aggressive than other dogs. Many people think pit bulls are dangerous because they are frequently engaged in serious dog attack cases. Pit bulls are known for being strong, muscular canines that were once utilized in dogfighting. Some people think they are more violent than other dogs since they may cause severe injuries when they bite. However, many experts say that pit bulls are not naturally aggressive.

If a pit bull is abused or is shown aggression it may act out like any other dog, And I completely agree with this statement. In one of the articles, I read “Pit bull bans and the Human factors affecting Canine behavior” it basically summarized how abusive behavior towards pit bulls may affect how they behave. They also mentioned how a child was mauled to death by his family dog, after this event they banned all pit bulls in their city. Before this family had this pit bull the previous owner was a teenage boy, he would often train the dog to become a street dog fighter and also abuse it as well.

Although pit bulls are known to be violent, this idea frequently overlooks significant factors which can contribute to any dog’s aggression. It is more accurate to think about how human behaviors including neglect, abuse, and poor environment, have a greater influence on a dog’s behavior than to blame pit bulls as a breed. Pit bulls’ hostility tends to be a trained habit rather than a natural one. If pit bulls were raised in a positive environment, pit bulls can be taught to be pleasant and well-behaved, just like any other breed. Dogs raised in caring homes with responsible owners are typically more collected, kinder, and less sensitive to act aggressively. Pit bulls may be passionate and kind pets just like any other dog if they have the right training, care, and attention. However, a dog is more vulnerable to experience behavioral issues if it is mistreated, abused, or trained to be aggressive. Pit bulls are unfortunately regularly victims of careless owners who promote them in dangerous conditions, which adds to their problematic reputation.

Because of these dogs’ history misunderstandings and fear, people often treat pit bulls harshly. As mentioned in this article, “Responsible ownership, proper training, and a loving environment can make a huge difference in a dog’s behavior, regardless of its breed.” However, due to their historical involvement in dogfighting, pit bulls have a reputation for being violent. They were popular in illegal dogfights because they were bred to be tough and strong. Pit bulls needed to be aggressive to survive in these hostile environments. People believed that all pit bulls are naturally vicious because of news reports about dogfights and attacks involving these animals.

The way people think of pit bulls are strongly influenced by the media. Attacks by other dogs tend to receive less attention than those with pit bulls. People tend to assume that pit bulls are more dangerous than other dogs by these breed-focused articles. People start treating pit bulls strangely or even cruelly as a result of this growing anxiety. This anxiety that is created by the media, has serious consequences. In spite of hurting pit bulls, it also has an impact on responsible owners who may experience discrimination or have trouble getting insurance or housing. The public’s fear is influenced by dramatic stories and often overlooked by the reality that given the right growing up, pit bulls like all dogs can make devoted well-behaved pets. The media’s influence on this impression highlights the significance of reporting dog attacks objectively, emphasizing unique situations rather than blaming the entire breed. 

If pit bulls are shown the proper attention, kindness, and affection, they can recover from being mistreated and neglected. As stated in the article “Abused dogs appreciate having a safe place to retreat when they feel overwhelmed.” However, Creating an enjoyable, peaceful and safe environment for children is the first step. Since abused dogs often suffer from fear and dread, having a calm environment where they feel safe helps their process of healing. Helping a pit bull recover requires patience as well. Having a regular feeding, walking, and training schedule might help the dog regain the trust of people, however it might take some time. To show to the dog that they are no longer in danger, the owner or keeper must handle them kindly and react composedly. Another way that may help abused pit bulls would be reward training. This includes giving the dog goodies, compliments, or affection when they behave well. This kind of teaching allows the dog to learn freely, which is important for abused dogs in particular.

Based on their history, the ability to fight and the way they often appear in the media results in pit bulls being more aggressive than average dogs. Pit bulls have a reputation for being violent dogs since they were originally made for power and fighting. Pit bulls are considered to be more dangerous than other breeds because of their strong jaws and muscular appearance, which can result in more serious injuries when they attack. Attacks by pit bulls are often reported in the media and it starts giving the idea that they are more likely than other dogs to be involved in violent situations. The negative opinion of pit bulls has been encouraged by these limited reporting and breed-specific laws. However, it’s very important to realize that pit bulls and other dogs’ aggression is influenced by a majority of factors, this includes safe surroundings, training, and proper care. The same factors that have an impact within all dogs also impact pit bulls’ behavior even though they might be more capable of doing more harm during an attack. Pit bulls are not always aggressive than other dogs, however with the appropriate training, and careful management they can make kind and caring pets.

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2 Responses to Definition Rewrite – Unicorn

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Unicorn, it’s common for students unaccustomed to working on essays IN PIECES to not fully grasp the value of concentrating first on matters of Definition and Category, then moving on to Causation, and finally refuting the contrary opinions of experts other than yourself.

    Here, in your Introduction, you have spelled out much or most of a CAUSAL argument. The material will be useful to you a few weeks from now when you need 1000 words devoted to Causation, but for now, if you hurry past the Categorical claims you need to make, you’ll wonder how you finished your paper in just 1600 words and have nothing left to do but repeat yourself.

    • You appear to want to declare that pit bulls ARE NOT INNATELY AGGRESSIVE.
      • Your readers will want to know whether traits like aggression ARE INNATE to any animal species, and, if so, whether pit bulls belong to that category or not. So, what is INNATE AGGRESSION? Are pit bulls born aggressive or not? Are chihuahuas more aggressive than dobermans?
      • How much of the definition of AGGRESSIVE BREED is actually a misunderstanding based on fear of how much DAMAGE an aggressive pit bull could do compared to how much damage a chihuahua could do?
    • You’ve also hinted that there’s a category of dog training that we might call FIGHT TRAINING.
      • What does that look like?
    • You’ve also suggested that ABUSE might be a method of training that increases aggression in dogs. But does abuse mean starvation? Isolation and neglect? Beatings? Subjecting the dog to attacks by other dogs?

    There’s plenty of time to get to all your Causal arguments.

    Look at all the CAUSAL claims you make in a random selection from your essay:

    “Responsible ownership, proper training, and a loving environment CAN MAKE A HUGE DIFFERENCE in a dog’s behavior, regardless of its breed.” However, DUE TO their historical involvement in DOGFIGHTING, pit bulls have a reputation for being violent. They were popular in illegal dogfights BECAUSE they were bred to be tough and strong. Pit bulls NEEDED TO BE AGGRESSIVE TO SURVIVE in these hostile environments. People believed that all pit bulls are naturally vicious BECAUSE OF news reports about dogfights and attacks involving these animals. The way people think of pit bulls ARE STRONGLY INFLUENCED BY the media.

    The distinction between categorical and causal claims is not always black and white. Part of the skill of distinguishing them is using the right words to describe the phenomenon. But keeping your eye on the categories, and not moving on to causation until readers understand YOUR VERSION of the terms will make for better Definition arguments.

  2. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Your final paragraph is nothing but an obvious ploy to get to 1000 words by repeating and rephrasing claims you’ve already made.

    This is a process, Unicorn. You’ve made a start. You won’t like your first grade, but I hope it won’t discourage you. You have a strong hypothesis.

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