2nd Person – Student1512

  1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. If everyone really thought about it, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school.
  2. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Would people object if they knew that a surgery performed before any injury occurs could make an athlete stronger?
  3. Imagine a person’s body being consumed by a drug. They would do anything to get this drug and they wouldn’t worry about the consequences that come with it.
  4. By inviting Syrians in, the country is causing more problems than they’re solving.
  5. Does the idea of not actually having money on-hand sound trivial?
  6. That little green piece of paper holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet people will work their whole life just to acquire more of those little green pieces of paper just so they can take them and stick them in a bank.
  7. So just remember, the next time we read a bank statement or look at a dollar bill, we’re holding a made up value that someone decided to make up. Without it, we all might still be having to trade with goods like livestock and produce.
  8. I now understand that a dollar is only worth what we can receive in exchange for it.
  9. Being able to walk around with money without holding the money in our hands brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, we don’t need to be in physical possession of these Bitcoins to own them.
  10. We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires that we all have enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. If we think about it deeply we’ll realize that we receive these pieces of paper called money and base our whole life on them.
  11. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. Our goal from the moment we all start school is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make our lives more fun and acceptable.

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1 Response to 2nd Person – Student1512

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Sentences that still need work:

    None, really. They could be more elegant, but that’s not really your responsibility.

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