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  1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. When considered carefully, it does. Any parent whose child attends an expensive school can attest to this.
  2. There are different types of injuries that occur in each sport. It might be surprising to learn that a surgery performed before any injury occurs could make an athlete stronger.
  3. Imagine a person’s body being consumed by a drug. They would not care about any consequences, only about getting the drug. 
  4. More problems are being caused then solved by letting in Syrians.
  5. Does the idea of not actually having money on-hand sound trivial?
  6. That little green piece of paper holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet people will work their whole lives just to have more of those little green pieces of paper, only to take them and stick them in a bank.
  7. The next time we read a bank statement or look at a dollar bill, remember that it is made up value that someone decided to make up.
  8. I know understand that a dollar is only worth what we can receive in exchange for it.
  9. Being able to walk around with money without holding money, brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, bitcoins don’t need to be in physical possession to own them.
  10. People talk about the American Dream, which requires having enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. When thought about deeply, it becomes clear that life is often based on these pieces of paper called money.
  11. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. The goal from the moment schools starts, is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make life more fun and acceptable.

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1 Response to 2nd person- iloveme5

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Sentences that still need help:

    The next time we read a bank statement or look at a dollar bill, remember that it is made up value that someone decided to make up.

    Being able to walk around with money without holding money, brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, bitcoins don’t need to be in physical possession to own them.

    When thought about deeply, it becomes clear

    —Beautiful work overall, ILoveMe5. You’ve left only a few points on the table.

    —Revise and place in the Regrade Please category if you want to chase them.

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