2nd Person – Who’s On First?

  1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. If you really think about it, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school.
  • Any parent sending a child to an expensive school knows that the amount of taxpayers money spent on schools does make a difference.
  1. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Would you object if you knew that a surgery performed before any injury occurs could make an athlete stronger?
  • Is surgery before performance permissible if it helps prevent injury?
  1. Imagine your body being consumed by a drug. You would do anything to get this drug and you don’t worry about the consequences that come with it.
  • Drugs consume the user’s body, leaving them willing to do anything, regardless of the consequences, to get that drug.
  1. By inviting Syrians in, you’re causing more problems than you’re solving.
  • If we invite Syrians in, we’re causing more problems than we’re solving.
  1. Does the idea of not actually having your money on-hand sound trivial?
  • Does the idea of not having money on-hand sound trivial?
  1. That little green piece of paper in your pocket holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet you will work your whole life just to acquire more of those little green pieces of paper just so you can take them and stick them in a bank.
  • The little green piece of paper in our pockets holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet we work our whole lives to get more little pieces of paper, just to put them in a bank.
  1. So just remember the next time you read a bank statement or look at dollar bill that you’re holding an made up value that someone decided to make up. Without it, you might still be having to trade with goods like livestock and produce.
  • It is important to remember that our bank statements and dollar bills we hold, is simply a made up value. Without it, we might still be trading with goods like livestock and produce.
  1. I now understand that a dollar is only worth what you can receive in exchange for it.
  • Let us understand that a dollar is only worth what we can receive in exchange for it.
  1. Being able to walk around with money without holding the money in your hand brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, you don’t need to be in physical possession of these Bitcoins to own them.
  • When we walk around with money without physically possessing it, it remenices the idea of stones, because we don’t actually need to possess them to own them.
  1. We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires that you have enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. If you think about it deeply you will realize, that you receive these pieces of paper called money and base your whole life on them.
  • We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires us to have enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. If we think about it deeply we will realize that we receive these pieces of paper called money and base our whole life on them.
  1. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. Your goal from the moment you start school is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make your life more fun and acceptable.
  • Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. Our goal from the moment we start school is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make our life more fun and acceptable.
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1 Response to 2nd Person – Who’s On First?

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    Sentences that still need work:

    When we walk around with money without physically possessing it, it remenices the idea of stones, because we don’t actually need to possess them to own them.

    —Even after you correctly spell reminisces, the sentence will still be screwy.

    Let us understand that a dollar is only worth what we can receive in exchange for it.

    worth only

    So:

    I’ve been lavish with grades on this assignment, Who’s, throwing around 90s and more like candy, but YOURS so thoroughly exceeds what the assignment requires, I’m going over 100 for you. Don’t change a thing. Beautiful work overall.

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