Claims Task – CourageTheCowardlyDog

“So tonight, six years after Caleb’s service ended, Brannan is cautiously optimistic but ready for anything on Lasagna Night. Early in the morning, she talked to their dog, Shilo, about it while she browned meat for Caleb’s favorite dish. “Daddy will be really happy,” she told the German shepherd sitting on her kitchen floor. “Of course, he’s too cranky to be happy about anything, and he’ll be mad because Katie won’t eat it because I spent all day makin’ it and the only thing she wants to eat right now is pancakes.” Later, she reminds me that Lasagna Night can come apart in an instant, if Caleb has a “bad PTSD moment.” These are supposed to be her easy months, she sighs, April and May and June, before the anniversaries of his worst firefights—many of them in Ramadi; a lot of bad things happened in Ramadi—exacerbate his flashbacks and nightmares. That’s usually September through January, the “really bad” months, whereas in the spring, she gets a bit of “vacation,” time to clean up the house and catch up on work, rest.”

This is evaluative claims because she said that “These are supposed to be her easy months, she sighs, April and May and June, before the anniversaries of his worst firefights—many of them in Ramadi; a lot of bad things happened in Ramadi—exacerbate his flashbacks and nightmares.” This shows that it is also hard on his family because they are also going through a hard time with him.

The author says “That’s usually September through January, the “really bad” months, whereas in the spring, she gets a bit of “vacation,” time to clean up the house and catch up on work, rest.” this is an comparative claim. because its shows he gets really bad during this time.

“She used to ask Caleb what was wrong, why he was coiled so tight and poisonous, screaming and yelling at everybody. That just agitated him more. Now, she lets it go, until eventually, after a couple of days or weeks of refusing to leave the house, or refusing to stay home and just disappearing outside, he comes to her. Haven’t you noticed I’m having a bad time? he’ll ask. And then she’ll just sit and listen while he says he cannot get it out of his head, about how if he had caught that fucking sniper, that enemy sniper he’d been trying to get, that’d been following them around, terrorizing their unit, if he’d have managed to kill him like he was supposed to, then the sniper wouldn’t have gotten off the shot that killed his buddy.”

The author states ,”And then she’ll just sit and listen while he says he cannot get it out of his head, about how if he had caught that fucking sniper, that enemy sniper he’d been trying to get, that’d been following them around, terrorizing their unit, if he’d have managed to kill him like he was supposed to, then the sniper wouldn’t have gotten off the shot that killed his buddy,” making this Ethical or Moral Claim because its talking about the situation it puts the people in his life in because of his PTSD

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1 Response to Claims Task – CourageTheCowardlyDog

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    C’mon, Courage. You’re not even trying.

    “So tonight, six years after Caleb’s service ended, Brannan is cautiously optimistic but ready for anything on Lasagna Night.”

    —It’s been SIX YEARS since Caleb returned from war and he STILL hasn’t acclimated back to civilian life to be even a little bit predictably civil WITH HIS FAMILY!
    —This is devastating Evaluative Claim about how long PTSD lasts to destroy family life.
    —”Brannan is cautiously optimistic” because she can’t be WHOLEHEARTEDLY optimistic that Caleb won’t respond erratically, perhaps violently, EVEN ON LASAGNA NIGHT, perhaps the one night he SHOULD be at his most thankful for what Brannan does for him.

    Early in the morning, she talked to their dog, Shilo, about it while she browned meat for Caleb’s favorite dish.

    —Who does Brannan have as a sounding board? Her husband, back home from war? Her daughter, whose symptoms of shared PTSD are making her, too, increasingly unreliable? Or the dog?

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