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Reflective—Phoenixxxx23

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. During my first conference with my professor, I shared my ideas, but he was … Continue reading

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Research—Phoenixxxx23

In The Pursuit Of Lost Time: How Smartphones Are Destroying Our Minds and Connections As a child, each year on my birthday, as I blew out the candles, I made the same wish: that life would be generous enough to … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite-phoenixxxx23

Your Smartphone Could Be Good for you My phone makes me feel empty. Despite the endless stream of notifications and the illusion of connection, it’s like trying to warm your hands at a fire that’s already burned out: “It’s a … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Argument-phoenixxxx23

My new chapter is called “Never Enough.” Smartphones allow us to access therapy from the comfort of our homes, connect with friends across the globe, and track our mental health in ways that were never possible before. As Joanna Rodriguez … Continue reading

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2nd Person—Phoenixxxx23

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Robust Verbs-Phoenixxxx23

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Causal Rewrite – phoenixxxx23

The Silent Crisis of a Generation: How Smartphones and the Internet Are Destroying Our Minds and Connections This chapter of my journal is called Distraction, because that’s what I’ve become: a slave to the pull of the next thing, always … Continue reading

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Causal Argument – phoenixxxx23

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Visual Rewrite-phoenixxxx23

Howie and the Howl | Middle School Mental Health | Ad Council 00:00– We see two people sitting at a table comprised of two wooden surfaces joined together. The lines on the table draw our attention as they converge towards … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite -phoenixxxx23

In Pursuit Of Lost Time As a child, each year on my birthday, as I blew out the candles, I made the same wish: that life would be generous enough to give my mother more time. When she passed away … Continue reading

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