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Rebuttal Rewrite-Goat81

Artistic Integrity vs. Athletic Precision: The Balance Debate in Olympic Ice Skating For years, Olympic figure skating has been caught in a debate over two competing priorities: technical skill and artistic expression. Critics who favor artistry argue that skating is … Continue reading

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Reflective Statement-Goat81

Core Value 1.My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. My Definition Rewrite represented a recursive, multi-step writing process, as I revised my definition drafts … Continue reading

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Visual Rewrite-Goat81

0:00-0:03 The video begins with a lively family celebration, possibly for Gracie’s birthday, with everyone gathered in high spirits. Amidst the festivities, Pedro slides down the stairs, and a playful scuffle erupts between Gracie and Pedro. The family intervenes humorously, … Continue reading

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Bibliography-Goat81

1.) Stevens, Ryan. “The Evolution of Technical Merit and Artistic Impression.” Skate Guard Blog, 2020, https://www.skateguardblog.com/2020/04/the-evolution-of-technical-merit-and.html. Background: This article provides a historical overview of how technical merit and artistic impression have evolved in figure skating, highlighting key changes in judging … Continue reading

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Research-Goat81

Artistic Expression vs. Technical Precision: Striking the Balance in Olympic Ice Skating Olympic ice skating, one of the Winter Games’ most popular disciplines, captivates spectators with its unique blend of athleticism and artistic beauty. For decades, the sport has effectively … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Rewrite-Goat81

Artistic Integrity vs. Athletic Precision: The Balance Debate in Olympic Ice Skating For years, Olympic figure skating has been caught in a debate over two competing priorities: technical skill and artistic expression. Critics who favor artistry argue that skating is … Continue reading

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Rebuttal Argument-Goat81

Artistic Integrity vs. Athletic Precision: The Balance Debate in Olympic Ice Skating For years, Olympic figure skating has been caught in a tug-of-war between two competing priorities: technical skill and artistic expression. Athletes, judges, and fans alike have debated which … Continue reading

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2nd Person-Goat81

1.) Taxpayers often question whether spending money on students makes a difference. The answer is yes, and any parent with a child in an expensive school would likely agree. 2.) Every sport comes with its own types of injuries. If … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite- Goat81

The Influence of Artistic Focus on Technical Skills in Olympic Ice Skating In recent years, the world of Olympic figure skating has seen a significant change in how judges score performances, with more focus on artistic expression and less on … Continue reading

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Causal Argument- Goat81

The Influence of Artistic Focus on Technical Skills in Olympic Ice Skating In recent years, the world of Olympic figure skating has seen a significant change in how judges score performances, with more focus on artistic expression and less on … Continue reading

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