Category Archives: Authors

Robust Verbs- Lobsterman

Posted on November 19, 2024 by lobsterman

Origanal paragraph- “There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a … Continue reading →

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The Banned 2nd Person Task: PRblog24

Posted on November 19, 2024 by PRblog24

Revised 11 Problem Sentences

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Visual Rewrite—Bagel&Coffee

Posted on November 19, 2024 by Bagel&Coffee

0:01 – 0:01 Our focus snaps immediately to a toddler crying, her slightly messy blond hair getting in her face as she kicks up her legs and slams them down as if trying to stomp on the floor but from … Continue reading →

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2nd Person-Taco491

Posted on November 19, 2024 by taco491

1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Parents whose child goes to an expensive school says yes. 2. There are different types of injuries that occur in each sport. Some people may question whether performing … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – Student1512

Posted on November 18, 2024 by student1512
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2nd Person – ChefRat

Posted on November 18, 2024 by ChefRat
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Causal Argument–Bagel&Coffee

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Bagel&Coffee

[prologue, setup, hook?] You come into my shop, I greet you, you ask what smells good, I tell you it is a special winter drink, you ask if you can see, I ask if you want to try some, you … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs – Who’s On First?

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Who'sOnFirst?

Vancouver heroin addicts can get drugs for free, but they just can’t seem to stop stealing instead. Maintaining jobs, relationships, and friendships is nearly impossible for these addicts whose lives are perpetuated by this cycle of crime. Heroin has put … Continue reading →

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Visual rewrite- Patrickthestar1

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Patrick The Star

1.0:00-0:03 :The opening scene of this baby in its chair and his father or caretaker picks up his pacifier that fell on the floor while this scene is only a few second it serves to empathize with viewers as it … Continue reading →

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PTSD Claims—Patrickthestar

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Patrick The Star

Claim Type:Casual Claim- this is a causal claim because of the assertion that multiple concussions can cause “serious long term injury” and as a result of the concussions time is needed to heal            2.”A fight ensued. Hovda says some of … Continue reading →

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