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Robust verbs- lil.sapph

Vancouver has a huge problem caused by heroin addicts committing crimes to support their addiction. The “free heroin for addicts” program aims to stop this by giving free heroin to them in the cleanest way. Clearly the addicts’ dependency on … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite- Goat81

The Influence of Artistic Focus on Technical Skills in Olympic Ice Skating In recent years, the world of Olympic figure skating has seen a significant change in how judges score performances, with more focus on artistic expression and less on … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs – KFury

Original Paragraph: There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a … Continue reading

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Robust Verbs – imaginary.persona RETRY

Vancouver has a huge problem with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program does everything they can to stop the addicts, the crime rate is still large though they’re doing their best. Addicts … Continue reading

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Summaries – Bruinbird

It seems counterintuitive that we doubt the ethicality of an image and story such as that of Fabienne Cherisma when the methods and taking of such images are why we can learn about these stories in the first place. January … Continue reading

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Causal Argument – Mongoose449

Living in caves helped prevent radiation leakage To Prehistoric humans, a natural cave ticked every box to their survivalist brains. It kept them sheltered against the elements, it had a natural choke-point to fend off predators or opposing tribes, was … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite – pineapple488

How Early Music Education Shapes Musical Success and Develops Perfect Pitch Early exposure to music education is widely recognized for its numerous benefits, but what people don’t often consider is that a child’s music potential benefits significantly from an experiential … Continue reading

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Definition Rewrite – pineapple488

The Power of Early Music Education: Cultivating Creativity Through Audiation Many music education systems prioritize theoretical knowledge; the formal rules, structures, and concepts behind music; rather than experiential learning; the direct experience of making or listening to music. However, this approach … Continue reading

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Causal Rewrite- Lobsterman

Our New GodPart Two: The Horsemen AI wouldn’t have been integrated into society so quickly if it weren’t for the rapid use of smartphones and social media before it.  AI has been in development for a long time but you … Continue reading

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Robust Verb- Goat81

Heroin addicts in Vancouver are a major problem and it makes sense if supported by such data. This free heroin for addicts scheme will be targeted towards addressing ever rising crime rates associated with addiction. Addicts often find it impossible … Continue reading

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