Category Archives: GRADED

Definition Rewrite – pineapple488

Posted on November 13, 2024 by pineapple488

The Power of Early Music Education: Cultivating Creativity Through Audiation Many music education systems prioritize theoretical knowledge; the formal rules, structures, and concepts behind music; rather than experiential learning; the direct experience of making or listening to music. However, this approach … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite- Lobsterman

Posted on November 13, 2024 by lobsterman

Our New GodPart Two: The Horsemen AI wouldn’t have been integrated into society so quickly if it weren’t for the rapid use of smartphones and social media before it.  AI has been in development for a long time but you … Continue reading →

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Robust Verb- Goat81

Posted on November 13, 2024 by GOAT81

Heroin addicts in Vancouver are a major problem and it makes sense if supported by such data. This free heroin for addicts scheme will be targeted towards addressing ever rising crime rates associated with addiction. Addicts often find it impossible … Continue reading →

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causal rewrite- lil.sapph

Posted on November 12, 2024 by lil.sapph

Minimalism Prevents Creativity Minimalist design has been celebrated for its simplicity, clean lines, and peaceful environment, but the very features that make it appealing also hold back creativity. We have evolved to live in repeated rectangular prisms out of simple … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite- Elongated Lobster

Posted on November 11, 2024 by Elongated lobster

The Pressure Cooker: How Expectations and At-Home Deadlines Lead to a Build-up of Stress in Students Stress among school-aged children has become an increasingly common issue, affecting their mental, emotional, and physical well-being. In recent years, many students have reported … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – phoenixxxx23

Posted on November 11, 2024 by phoenixxxx23

The Silent Crisis of a Generation: How Smartphones and the Internet Are Destroying Our Minds and Connections This chapter of my journal is called Distraction, because that’s what I’ve become: a slave to the pull of the next thing, always … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – ChefRat

Posted on November 10, 2024 by ChefRat

Children’s Weightlifting: The Immutable Misconception The preconceived notion that weightlifting is dangerous and stunts children’s growth is a long-standing misconception, one that persist when any form of media introduces the topic of children and weightlifting. With widespread fear among parents … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs-Taco491

Posted on November 10, 2024 by taco491

In Vancouver, the “free heroin for addicts” program is preventing heroin addicts from committing crimes to support their habits. Addicts have a hard time keeping jobs and relationships. Addicts steal, break into houses and cars, mug tourist, to score. The … Continue reading →

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Causal Argument – KFury

Posted on November 10, 2024 by KFury205

Are Baseball bats being tampered with for Profit?  The durability of bats is a crucial aspect of baseball, intertwining player safety, equipment performance, and the integrity of the game. With the continual evolution of bat technology and materials ranging from … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs – Student1512

Posted on November 8, 2024 by student1512

A huge problem within Vancouver has arisen due to heroin addicts committing more crimes to support their habits. Crimes, such as breaking-and-entering and stealing, have become more prominent due to addict behavior, as addicts will do whatever is needed to … Continue reading →

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