Category Archives: REGRADED

Rebuttal Rewrite – student12121

Posted on November 24, 2024 by student12121

The Effects of Carbon-Plated Shoes on High Mileage Runners As studies on super shoes come out, two different ideologies have formed. One group believes that super shoes increase injury risk over time, but my opponents believe the complete opposite. They … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrites – CourageTheCowardlyDog

Posted on November 23, 2024 by Courage The Cowardly Dog

0:00-0:01 A man comes into the car, he is wearing a dark blue button-up with dark gold lines that form a plaid pattern with a white shirt underneath it. His hair is tucked behind his ears and it is assumingly … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – pineapple488

Posted on November 13, 2024 by pineapple488

How Early Music Education Shapes Musical Success and Develops Perfect Pitch Early exposure to music education is widely recognized for its numerous benefits, but what people don’t often consider is that a child’s music potential benefits significantly from an experiential … Continue reading →

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Definition Rewrite – pineapple488

Posted on November 13, 2024 by pineapple488

The Power of Early Music Education: Cultivating Creativity Through Audiation Many music education systems prioritize theoretical knowledge; the formal rules, structures, and concepts behind music; rather than experiential learning; the direct experience of making or listening to music. However, this approach … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite- Lobsterman

Posted on November 13, 2024 by lobsterman

Our New GodPart Two: The Horsemen AI wouldn’t have been integrated into society so quickly if it weren’t for the rapid use of smartphones and social media before it.  AI has been in development for a long time but you … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite- Taco491

Posted on November 11, 2024 by taco491

Young Athletes Encouraged to Chase Impossible Dreams Are More Likely to Develop Anxiety.  Youth sports participation is a common activity for children, often driven by personal interest or parental encouragement. According to data from the Project Play Aspen Institute, 50.7% of … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – student12121

Posted on November 10, 2024 by student12121

The Effects of Carbon-Plated Shoes on High Mileage Runners Running injuries are most commonly overuse injuries. They come slowly without an acute onset of symptoms. Modern running shoes add to this with their large amounts of foam and even more … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – Student1512

Posted on November 10, 2024 by student1512

Who Causes More Harm to Our Youth, The Media or Us? Media-driven fast fashion has become increasingly adept at exploiting consumers’ impulsive buying behaviors, leading to heightened pressure on individuals to make purchases they may not need. With just a … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs – Mongoose449

Posted on November 6, 2024 by Mongoose449

Original There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large … Continue reading →

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Visual Rewrite—GamersPet

Posted on October 29, 2024 by GamersPet

Never Happens – Gained Access :30 | Heatstroke Prevention 0:00: Immediately, the first appearance on the screen is a child (white) that is sitting in the center foreground where we are at the same eye level as the child. It … Continue reading →

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