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Visual Rewrite – Taco491
The ad starts with what seems to be a family of four coming out of a modern day house. We can presume this because the two adults are roughly the same age, both holding baby stuff, both African American, and … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio Taco, REGRADED, Taco491, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite – Softball1321
00:00 Right from the jump, we can see a very happy man with the backseat car door open, obviously buckling in a child. We are unsure if this is his child or not, but the setting seems to be very … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio Softball, REGRADED, Softball1321, Visual Rewrite
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Visual Rewrite- Student1512
Rural Mental Health 0:00-0:01 A couple faces the camera, positioned as the focal point of the shot. A portrait of the two and the landscape beyond them. The camera shifted back to reveal more of the scene. Above them, the … Continue reading
Posted in Portfolio Student1512, REGRADED, Student1512, Visual Rewrite
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Elevator Instructions – SkibidySigma
Idle Behavior: Stay on the current floor with doors closed if there are no Active Requests. If a new Request appears: If it’s on this floor, open doors, serve it, wait 10 seconds, then close doors. If no more Requests, … Continue reading
Posted in Elevator Instructions, REGRADED, Skibidy Sigma
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Definition Rewrite-Goat81
Combination of Artistic Expression and Technical Performance in Olympic Ice Skating: In recent times, Olympic figure skating has undergone a significant transformation in its judging criteria, placing greater importance on artistic expression in addition to technical execution. Although this change … Continue reading
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definition rewrite-lil.sapph
THE WRONGHEADEDNESS OF MINIMALIST DESIGN The space around us has a huge impact on the quality of our thoughts and ideas. The “less is more” philosophy encourages simplification in surroundings by removing clutter and distractions in order to bring out … Continue reading
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Def/Cat Rewrite—Student1512
The Silent Crisis of Impulsive Shopping: How Mental Health and Personality Fuel Consumer Destruction 90.42% of Gen Z and Millennials engage in impulsive online shopping, according to McDonald’s ‘Survey Reveals Top Reasons Gen Zers and Millennials Make Impulse Purchases.’ This … Continue reading
Definition Argument-Goat81
Combination of Artistic Expression and Technical Performance in Olympic Ice Skating: Olympic ice skating is one of the most beloved events in the Winter Games, enchanting audiences with its mix of athletic skill and artistic flair. For many years, skaters have faced the challenge of performing technically demanding moves like jumps, spins, and intricate footwork, all while delivering a stunning artistic performance. Recently, though, there’s been some worry that the focus is shifting too much toward artistic expression at the expense of technical prowess. While artistic elements surely add to the beauty of a routine, I believe that putting too much emphasis on them might unintentionally dampen technical creativity and alter how the sport evolves. If we look at the scoring patterns in figure skating, this concern is backed up. Over the last twenty years, Olympic … Continue reading
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Definition Rewrite- Lobsterman
Our New God Part One:Death of the Artist Humans have had an insatiable thirst for innovation for as long as we have been around, and I think we just created our last invention. Artificial Intelligence (AI) is a rapidly developing … Continue reading
Posted in Definition Rewrite, Lobsterman, Portfolio Lobsterman, REGRADED
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Bibliography—CourageTheCowardlyDog
For my research, I will examine why people keep and cherish the physical objects of loved ones who have passed and how it helps them connect with them physically. I know many people celebrate their loved ones differently. Many cultures … Continue reading
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