Rebuttal Rewrite – Who’s On First?

Finding New Music is a Niche art

People often gravitate toward familiar music rather than unfamiliar sounds. Looking for comfort and relaxation in songs they know well. However, this preference raises an interesting question: if we tend to enjoy music we’re already familiar with, why is everyone always on the hunt for new music? Rachel Ament, a writer for the New York Times, NPR, Oxygen, Teen Vogue and Paste Magazine, writes in The Paris Review, a highly prominent literary magazine, “the enjoyment of discovering new music is in its ability to stimulate the brain, creating an intellectually engaging experience.” This article suggests that, by exposing ourselves to new sounds, we can challenge our mental faculties and enjoy the stimulation that comes from processing new information. However, this argument rides on the premise that people enjoy actively engaging in their freetime. The opposite is, in fact, closer to the truth: the large majority of the public agrees that listening to music should be a leisurely and enjoyable pastime.

Therefore, listening to new music is an unpleasant experience for those just listening for enjoyment. Most people rather gravitate towards the comfortable familiarity of music they know well. At its core, music is often used as a tool for relaxation, mood enhancement, and emotional expression. Psychology Today states that music serves as a “valuable companion, offering comfort and a way to release emotions, while also contributing to stress relief.” and that “Music provides a positive mood, offers a valued companion, and allows us to express emotions.” It is meant to be an enjoyable, relaxing experience that allows people to unwind. Most listeners aren’t looking to engage in a mental exercise when they put on their headphones. Rather, most people are looking for background music, where the music complements their mood and provides a brief respite from daily stressors. The argument that music should always be an active and stimulating experience contradicts this more widely-held view of music as a simple, pleasurable pastime. For many, listening to new music can feel more like a chore than a treat, as it often demands more mental effort than familiar tracks do.

When people encounter unfamiliar music, we may struggle to process it at first. Our brains are more hardwired to respond positively to sounds it recognizes, which is why we tend to find comfort in the familiar. New music, on the other hand, can be jarring or disorienting, requiring more concentration to understand and appreciate. This can be particularly frustrating when the goal is to relax or unwind. Music that feels unfamiliar or difficult to engage with might inadvertently add stress to a situation rather than alleviate it. For instance, personally, I always turn to new music when I am trying to study out of the fear that I will get too caught up in the music I know and get off track. However, this is not the case. Familiar music creates a sense of relaxation and will blend into the background much better than new sounds that require a lot of thinking to decipher the new stimuli and thus can actually create a more stressful environment. So while listening to music actively may be a pragmatic hobby for the few with extra time on their hands, incorporating unfamiliar music in everyday life can lead to a sense of even more busyness and stress, rather than taking that away.

This distinction between active and passive listening is important when we consider the average person’s relationship with music. While some people may enjoy the intellectual stimulation of exploring new genres or artists, for most people, music is more about emotional resonance than cognitive engagement. The Paris Review makes the case that unfamiliar music stimulates the brain, however, this argument assumes that all listeners approach music with the same mindset of active engagement and looking for a mental challenge. For most, however, music is far more personal and emotional. It’s a reflection of a person’s identity and experiences. Familiar songs often carry a sense of nostalgia, bringing memories to the surface and creating a deeper emotional connection. They may evoke feelings tied to specific moments in a person’s life, helping to define their identity. Unfamiliar or new music, on the other hand, lacks a personal connection. It might sound interesting or even exciting, but it is unlikely to evoke the same emotion as a song tied to one’s memories and experiences. For example, listening to a favorite childhood song might bring back vivid memories of home, friends, or family, all of which contribute to the emotional power of the music. A new song, even if it’s technically brilliant, has not yet had time to connect to emotions. Without this emotional resonance, the experience of listening to unfamiliar music can feel detached or impersonal.

The emotional connection people have with familiar music is not just a matter of personal preference, it also serves as a coping mechanism for dealing with stress and difficult emotions. Music can act as a form of self-soothing, helping people navigate their feelings without requiring intense mental effort. When life feels overwhelming, putting on a familiar song can provide comfort, reminding listeners that they are not alone in their emotions. This emotional bond is difficult to replicate with new music, especially if it is by an unfamiliar artist, that they don’t resonate with yet. For most people, music’s power lies in its ability to connect them to their inner psyche, offering a sense of familiarity and reassurance, rather than providing a challenge or a mental workout.

It’s also important to recognize that the pursuit of new music is not inherently wrong or undesirable, but it is a niche activity that appeals to a specific type of listener. There are certainly people who enjoy the challenge of discovering new sounds, exploring new genres, or diving into the unknown. For these listeners, new music offers an exciting opportunity for mental stimulation and intellectual growth. However, this is not the average person. For the majority, music is not something that needs to be actively “discovered” or intellectually engaged with. Instead, it is a tool for relaxation, emotional expression, and connection.

In conclusion, while The Paris Review offers a compelling argument about the intellectual benefits of exploring new music, this view does not fully account for the broader role music plays in most people’s lives. Music is often more about emotional comfort, rather than mental stimulation, and familiar songs provide the sense of relaxation and connection that unfamiliar or new music cannot. For most people, music is a form of leisure and relaxation that should not require active effort or engagement. While the search for new music can be fulfilling for some, it remains a niche pursuit rather than a universal one. Most people have an everyday relationship with music and will find enjoyment in the comfortable familiarity, rather than the great unknown. 


References

5 Reasons Why We Listen to Music | Psychology Today

“5 Reasons Why We Listen to Music” Shahram Heshmat Ph.D. Psychology Today, 14 October 2021. 14 November 2024.

How to Really Listen to Music – The Paris Review

“How to Really Listen to Music” Rachel Ament. The Paris Review, 22 August 2019. 14 November 2024.

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Annotated bibliography- RoboFrog

1)

Britannica, T. Editors of Encyclopaedia (2024, August 16). Labours of Hercules. Encyclopedia Britannica. https://www.britannica.com/topic/Labours-of-Hercules

Background: Brief overview of the Labours of Hercules from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used the information to show the similarities between Greek mythology and the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series. I also used the information in it in the summaries of The Sea of Monsters and The Titan’s Curse to compare Percy’s feats in the books to Hercules.

2)

Britannica, T. Editors of Encyclopaedia (2024, June 27). Daedalus. Encyclopedia Britannica. https://www.britannica.com/topic/Daedalus-Greek-mythology

Background: Brief overview of Daedalus from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used it to provide me with information about Daedalus from Greek mythology to prove how Daedalus from the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series is the same character.

3)

Britannica, T. Editors of Encyclopaedia (2024, October 4). Tantalus. Encyclopedia Britannica. https://www.britannica.com/topic/Tantalus

Background: Brief overview of Tantalus from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used it to provide me with information about Tantalus from Greek mythology to prove how Tantalus from the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series is the same character.

4)

Britannica, T. Editors of Encyclopaedia (2024, September 21). Hydra. Encyclopedia Britannica. https://www.britannica.com/topic/Hydra-Greek-mythology

Background: Brief overview of the hydra from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I also used the information in it in the summary of The Sea of Monsters to compare Percy’s feats in the book to Hercules.

5)

Evason, N. (2019). Greek – religion. Cultural Atlas. https://culturalatlas.sbs.com.au/greek-culture/greek-culture-religion

Background: Religious information about modern Greece.

How I Used It: I used it for information about modern Greek religious to show how Gokli’s argument that Riordan Americanized Greek ways is wrong by pointing out that modern Greeks do not practice the ancient Greek religion.

6)

Gokli, D. (2015). Americanization of the Greeks in Percy Jackson series. Gujarat Universityhttps://d1wqtxts1xzle7.cloudfront.net/62026080/Americanisation_of_the_Greeks20200207-80415-xf9178-libre.pdf?1581092394=&response-content-disposition=inline%3B+filename%3DAmericanization_of_the_Greeks_in_Percy_J.pdf&Expires=1732508095&Signature=UAolkdWsNEvTITNyTuoRKEUm-z1hNbRndDOCWRvFEnH~pS6~bJLEQg2ZbmtE~v-JUsmzsWqRZGqRdpt4~4R7r7l17PeyMxWMT61AWKuRDCV8bnOvJQk2omIow4GF8T5qKhoaS0vBcjm44g9ModAgP2bzupVavHRgqIIL4lesV4jbD-C8ROjP7fHb7PFY2x-plZbkELCTW07oXck~cVG~OEBt0XqYpwhtCYmCwZXqPeDmw17nDlVyzts2eu30-CuHLddeRkCrJOKdYN1Yoj-gyPmeUoDeU9G4tTUNLVdCQKHzSzSUw-NOfrLrhyhwvS2xTQf9085XnI9wzK8Rv40K0A__&Key-Pair-Id=APKAJLOHF5GGSLRBV4ZA

Background: The paper is about Americanization and appropriation in the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series.

How I Used It: I used it for the rebuttal section, taking block quotes from it to analyze and disprove.

7)

Homer. (2024, October 1). The Odyssey rendered into English prose for the use of those who cannot read the original. The Project Gutenberg eBook of The Odyssey, by Homer. https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/1727/pg1727-images.html

Background: This book is a translation of Homer’s The Odyssey, a poem about Odysseus and his journey to return home after the Trojan War.

How I Used It: I took block quotes from it to provide information on Tantalus and the cave of Polyphemus to analyze them.

8)

“Medusa.” Encyclopedia of Sex and Gender: Culture Society History. . Retrieved November 16, 2024 from Encyclopedia.com: https://www.encyclopedia.com/social-sciences/encyclopedias-almanacs-transcripts-and-maps/medusa

Background: Brief overview of Medusa from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used it to provide me with information about Medusa from Greek mythology to prove how Medusa from the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series is the same character. I also used the information to show the similarities between Greek mythology and the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series.

9)

“Nemean Lion.” Myths and Legends of the World. . Retrieved October 14, 2024 from Encyclopedia.com: https://www.encyclopedia.com/humanities/news-wires-white-papers-and-books/nemean-lion

Background: Brief overview of the Nemean lion from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used it for information on how Hercules killed so I could compare it to how Percy killed it in The Titan’s Curse so that I could show how Riordan reused it in his story.

10)

Riordan, R. (2005). The Lightning Thief (Percy Jackson & the Olympians #1) (1st ed.). Disney/Hyperion.

Background: In the first book of the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series, he is introduced to this world, the camp where the demigods are trained, and sets off on a quest to find the master bolt and return it to Zeus by the summer solstice.

How I Used It: I used it to provide a brief summary of this book. I also used it to provide information on Riordan’s version of Medusa to show that she is the same character as in Greek mythology. I did the same for Olympus, the Underworld, and Dionysus.

11)

Riordan, R. (2006). The Sea of Monsters (Percy Jackson & the Olympians #2) (1st ed.). Disney /Hyperion.

Background: In the second book of the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series, he and his friends go on a quest to retrieve the golden fleece to save the camp.

How I Used It: I used it to provide a brief summary of this book. I took a block quote from it to provide information on the cave of Polyphemus to analyze and compare to the description of it in The Odyssey. I also used it to provide information on Riordan’s version of Tantalus to show that he is the same character as in Greek mythology.

12)

Riordan, R. (2007). The Titan’s Curse (Percy Jackson & the Olympians #3) (1st ed.). Hyperion Books for Children.

Background: In the third book of the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series, he and his friends go on a quest to save the goddess Artemis by the winter solstice.

How I Used It: I used it to provide a brief summary of this book. I also used it to show the similarities and differences between Percy’s and Hercules’ fights with the Nemean lion.

13)

Riordan, R. (2008). The Battle of the Labyrinth (Percy Jackson & the Olympians #4) (1st ed.). Hyperion Books for Children.

Background: In the fourth book of the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series, he and his friends discover a secret passage into the camp that bypasses its defenses, leading to them going on a quest to find Daedalus in an attempt prevent the Titans and their forces from using the Labyrinth to destroy the camp.

How I Used It: I used it to provide a brief summary of this book. I also used it to provide information on Riordan’s version of Daedalus to show that he is the same character as in Greek mythology.

14)

Riordan, R. (2009). The Last Olympian (Percy Jackson & the Olympians #5) (1st ed.). Disney/Hyperion Books.

Background: In the fifth and final book of the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series, he leads his fellow demigods in a final battle to save Olympus from the Titans.

How I Used It: I used it to provide a brief summary of this book.

15)

World History Edu. (2022, April 12). Ancient Greek God Dionysus: Birth Story, Powers, Meaning & Symbolshttps://worldhistoryedu.com/greek-god-dionysus/

Background: Overview of Dionysus from Greek mythology.

How I Used It: I used it to provide me with information about Dionysus from Greek mythology to prove how Dionysus from the “Percy Jackson & the Olympians” series is the same character.

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Bibliography-Goat81

1.) Stevens, Ryan. “The Evolution of Technical Merit and Artistic Impression.” Skate Guard Blog, 2020, https://www.skateguardblog.com/2020/04/the-evolution-of-technical-merit-and.html.

Background: This article provides a historical overview of how technical merit and artistic impression have evolved in figure skating, highlighting key changes in judging criteria and performance expectations over time.

How I Used It: I utilized this source to understand the historical context of the balance between technical skills and artistic presentation, informing my analysis of current trends in judging and performance.

2.) McCormick, Lisa. “Gliding on the Edge of the Iron Cage: Performing Rationality and Artistry in Competitive Figure Skating.” American Journal of Cultural Sociology, vol. 10, no. 1, 2022, pp. 123-145, https://link.springer.com/article/10.1057/s41290-022-00178-x.

Background: This study examines the tension between technical precision and artistic expression in figure skating, analyzing how skaters navigate the sport’s rationalized judging system while striving for authentic artistic performances.

How I Used It: I referenced this article to explore the challenges skaters face in balancing technical requirements with artistic expression, providing insight into the complexities of performance evaluation.

3.) Genesis Inspiration Foundation. “The Art of Figure Skating.” Genesis Inspiration Foundation, 2021, https://genesisinspirationfoundation.org/the-art-of-figure-skating/.

Background: This piece highlights the artistic aspects of figure skating, discussing how skaters express creativity and emotion on the ice, and the importance of artistic elements in the sport.

How I Used It: I used this source to emphasize the significance of artistic expression in figure skating and how it enhances the overall impact of performances.

4.) The Sports Reviewer. “The Artistry of Figure Skating: Expressing Emotion on Ice.” The Sports Reviewer, 2022, https://thesportsreviewer.com/the-artistry-of-figure-skating-expressing-emotion-on-ice/.

Background: This article explores how figure skaters balance technical skill with artistic expression, focusing on the role of emotion and musical interpretation in performances.

How I Used It: I utilized this source to discuss the interplay between technical elements and artistic expression, highlighting the importance of emotional connection in figure skating.

5.) Olympics “Podcast: Artistry vs Technical – What’s More Important in Figure Skating?” Olympics.com, 2021, https://olympics.com/en/video/podcast-artistry-vs-technical-figure-skating.

Background: This podcast features discussions with figure skating experts and athletes about the relative importance of artistry and technical skill in the sport, providing diverse perspectives on the topic.

How I Used It: I referenced insights from this podcast to present various viewpoints on the balance between technical execution and artistic expression in figure skating.

6.) Go Figure Skating. “Figure Skating Footwork.” Go Figure Skating, 2021, https://gofigureskating.com/figure-skating-footwork.

Background: This article delves into the technical aspects of figure skating footwork, discussing how intricate steps and movements contribute to both technical scores and artistic presentation.

How I Used It: I used this source to analyze how technical footwork elements enhance the artistic quality of figure skating performances.

7.) Wikipedia. “Nathan Chen.” Wikipedia, 2023, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nathan_Chen.

Background: This Wikipedia entry provides an overview of Nathan Chen’s skating career, highlighting his technical skills and contributions to the sport.

How I Used It: I referenced this source to illustrate how top skaters like Nathan Chen integrate technical mastery with artistic expression in their routines.

8.) “Yuzuru Hanyu.” Wikipedia, 2023, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yuzuru_Hanyu.

Background: This Wikipedia entry details Yuzuru Hanyu’s skating style, emphasizing his combination of technical difficulty and artistic performance.

How I Used It: I used this source to exemplify how skaters like Yuzuru Hanyu achieve a harmonious balance between technical elements and artistic expression.

9.) De Gruyter. “Artistic Impressions: Figure Skating, Masculinity, and the Limits of Sport.” De Gruyter, 2010, https://www.degruyter.com/document/doi/10.3138/9781442695603-fm/pdf.

Background: This book examines the cultural and gendered aspects of artistic expression in figure skating, exploring how masculinity is portrayed and perceived in the sport.

How I Used It: I utilized this source to discuss the cultural dimensions of artistic expression in figure skating, particularly concerning gender representations.

10.) British Journal of Sports Medicine. “Artistry on Ice: The Physical and Athletic Demands of Figure Skating and the Vital Role Physiotherapists Play.” British Journal of Sports Medicine, 2019, https://blogs.bmj.com/bjsm/2019/01/11/artistry-on-ice-the-physical-and-athletic-demands-of-figure-skating-and-the-vital-role-physiotherapists-play/.

Background:
The article highlights the physical demands of figure skating and the crucial role physiotherapists play in supporting skaters’ technical and artistic performance while managing injury prevention and recovery.

How I Used It:
The article highlights the physical demands of figure skating, supporting my argument about the challenges of balancing technical precision and artistic expression.

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Definition Rewrite – CourageTheCowardlyDog

Connecting Objects to Passed Loved Ones

We tend to use objects left behind to help us remember and cherish our past loved ones, whether that be lessons we’ve learned from them or just simply good memories we have with them. By connecting them to certain objects in our life it can help us grieve and move on as well as pass down our good memories of them to the next line of generations, like our kids and their kids and so on.

Understanding and learning the importance of why people keep and cherish things from their past loved ones helps those who are grieving and wish to maintain a connection. This also allows us to empathize and connect with those still with us using memories and momentums of those who have passed. Through other cultures, we can learn and join the celebration of not only the dead but how to cherish the physical objects that we have of them. I will be exploring and defining ways that other cultures, but mostly focusing on Mexican culture, like to memorialize and stay connected with their deceased loved ones.

Remembering our loved ones is always important even if you don’t have something of physical value to them. Most of the common things that people tend to cherish or connect back to those loved ones are pictures, jewelry, toys that were gifted as well as clothes. In some cultures, more specifically Mexican culture, making art to represent your loved ones is one way of connecting physically with them. This is more famously known through Day Of the Dead.

There is also throughout the republic an enormous variety of skeleton toys of all sizes and plastic materials, with the skeleton displayed as naked or clothed, holding a recognizable object like a pipe or musical instrument, and usually giving some indication of age, gender, occupation, and the like.

By doing this you are connecting with your loved ones, past and present, because you come together to make these or decorate these skeleton toys and remember those that have passed.

Skeletons are a huge part of this celebration. They take many forms and are used in many ways. “The ubiquitous presence of skulls, skeletons, and the like is a supreme manifestation of the enormous difference between Mexican and Western attitudes toward death.” In more Western cultures, like North America, skeletons are viewed as scary and used during Halloween to scare children. In comparison to South America, including Mexico, it is used to show death in a beautiful way and children aren’t scared of them but rather tend to embrace them and their meaning. The skeletons are also used to help teach them about their past loved ones.

“One of the most distinctive features of the Day of the Dead, the so-called ofrenda, or offering, consists of breads, candies, and other foods which are placed on the graves of deceased relatives and used to adorn home altars prepared specially for the occasion.” The ofrenda is a huge part of this celebration. An ofrenda can be described as an altar that is decorated specifically for this holiday. As said altar, it is important to put the favorite food of your loved ones. This is done to have that connection of them still being there and watching over. It is a way to invite them back to your home. By putting their favorite food on the ofrenda it helps us connect with them and helps the younger generations learn more about them. Food is an important part of not only this celebration but the culture as well.

The spirits of the departed are said to enjoy the essence of the food. Pan de Muerto, a sweet bread, is a must-have item on these altars. Ofrendas often mix sweet and savory foods. They may include mole, tamales, and pozole as main dishes. For drinks, Mexican hot chocolate or atole are common. Desserts like sugar skulls and candied pumpkin add a festive touch. These food offerings honor the dead and keep their memory alive.

Even though this holiday is focused on the more spiritual aspect, there is also a huge religious part as well. Even though this celebration is more widely known as the Day of The Dead, it also holds many other titles. One of the names this day goes by is All Souls Day. “Attending Mass, having a special family meal, lighting candles for the departed, and making small home shrines for All Souls’ Day were practices familiar to most Mexican American Catholics.” In a way, this goes to show how much this celebration has evolved because, during this day, the families would go to the cemetery and help each other clean and prepare for their loved ones while also decorating their shrines and graves with all of the things that they liked. Some of the things that are done now, were not done in earlier times. “These customs resembled the grave decorating customs of other Catholic ethnic groups and did not include Indigenous practices of southern Mexico, such as making harvest-laden ofrendas or burning copal incense.” This just goes to show that this holiday/celebration can and will continue to grow and help people find a way to get connected to their loved ones.

Although this is a Mexican-originated holiday, this does not restrict other people from celebrating as we are all looking for a way to keep our loved ones close to us. In fact, many other cultures celebrate too using different names but using the same form of celebration. This holiday is for everyone and this is also a great way to help bring together many communities and many people who are just looking for that connection with their passed loved ones.

References

Brandes, S. (1997). Sugar, Colonialism, and Death: On the Origins of Mexico’s Day of the Dead. Comparative Studies in Society and History, 39(2), 270–299. http://www.jstor.org/stable/179316

Brandes, S. (1998). Iconography in Mexico’s Day of the Dead: Origins and Meaning. Ethnohistory, 45(2), 181–218. https://doi.org/10.2307/483058

Marchi, Regina M. “Day of the Dead in the United States.” Day of the Dead in the USA: The Migration and Transformation of a Cultural Phenomenon, Rutgers University Press, 2009, pp. 34–55. JSTOR, http://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt5hj96w.8. Accessed 8 Dec. 2024.

Diniz, R. (2024, October 1). Day Of The Dead Food: A Traditional Día De Los Muertos Feast. Day of the dead food: A traditional Día de los Muertos Feast. https://northshoretacos.com/news/food/dia-de-los-muertos#:~:text=Food%20is%20an%20important%20part,the%20essence%20of%20the%20food.

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Definition- Andarnaurram

How Woman Defined Literature 
in the Late 19th and Early 20th Century

In the late 19th and early 20th centuries women in literature had a huge impact on the time period. Women writers and characters were often defined to certain roles and stereotypes in society.  During this period, women began to become more assertive and open through writing as they challenged these gender roles and gave new perspective on women experiences. Writers such as Charlotte Perkins Gilman, Kate Chopin, and their characters are celebrated in todays society for their bold voices and their influence that was often pushed back in writing and society. It is important to understand the women in literature from this period, and define what the influence means. Defining women’s personal struggles through literature and how their lives were governed. 

One way to define the influence of women in literature during the time of these centuries is by examining how their writing challenged and grew past norms in literature. Literature during this period was mostly dominated by males who ranged their female characters limitedly. Writers such as Kate Chopin, Virginia Woolf, Edith Wharton, and Charlotte Perkins Gilman pushed these barriers. These women wrote texts that created more awareness for women’s rights both socially and politicly relating to women’s experiences in marriage, work, and autonomy. 

For example, Kate Chopin’s The Awakening demonstrates the roles that were imposed on women and how restrictive they were.  In both marriage and motherhood, the main character, Edna Pontellier, examines the expectations that were put on women during this time in the late 19th century. She rejected the idea of not being herself and said, “but whatever came, she had resolved never again to belong to another than herself.” Chopin used this protagonist to demonstrate a a female character that sought out their own fulfillment outside of typical society. Her character showed a different narrative to the conventional female character that was often confined to women’s role and it reflected the feminism growing in this movement. 

Another crucial aspect of defining women’s influence in literature is the role they play in advocating for change. The women’s suffrage movement was gaining attention and women authors began to use writing in order to advocate for the rights of women. Not only the rights of women were addressed but other social issues such as labor rights, racial and gender equality, and economic reform. Charlotte Perkins Gilman’s work would often relay political messages in the form of literature.

Gilman’s The Yellow Wallpaper is an example of the way society views women with mental health issues. As the tale is demonstrating a women’s psychological issues, it also represents the medical and societal treatment of women. The story demonstrates how women’s voices were softened ignored and dismissed. Their entire autonomy was undermined most often by men as they held more power socially. The narrator describes her husbands disregard for her issues and says, “But these nervous troubles are dreadfully depressing. John does not know how much I really suffer. He knows there is no reason to suffer, and that satisfies him.” As the narrator continue to delve into a deep madness, it is clear that Gilman is showing how dangerous it can be for society to cast women aside. 

Women writers in the late 19th and early 20th centuries reimagined the way women were portrayed in literature. Often before this era, women were constantly represented as objects of males desire without any real impact to stories. They were most often only described as daughter, wives, or mothers regarding their relationship towards men in their lives. Women writers challenge this dynamic of women being passive objects towards men as it is diminishing. Complex, determined female characters began to rise in literature as women felt the need to give female characters their own narratives.

Another female writer, Edith Wharton, had a similar take on female characters and giving them their own personal story. She typically explored how women in upper-class communities lived their lives in cities such as New York. In her work, The Age of Innocence, examines the rigid social system and the choices her female characters regarding these systems. She doesn’t just examines women’s confinements in these expectations but men as well, even though it may seem they have privileges in their financial and social lives. Wharton writes, “The real loneliness is living among all these kind people who only ask one to pretend!” Highlighting the struggle that is between an individual and the group of people around them. This can define women’s marginalization as a male dominated society can prevent women from using their own voices and being heard.

Women writers during this time were working hard not for entertainment purposes but to advocate for women’s rights and stand against societal expectations. Their influence was defined by the subjects they wrote on such as the social and political changes they pushed. These changes included redefining gender roles, societal expectations, and social bias. 

Females in literature were part of a broad movement during the late 19th and early 20 century for women’s rights and even racial equality. Even today their work is still very influence in literature and social rights, as we still deal with inequalities and sexism today. By challenging these boundaries of who and what women are supposed to be, we are able to make great progress. As we define the influence of women in literature we acknowledge their part in shaping literature, marginalization, cultural representation, and gender inequality that future generations can build upon. 

References

Bloom H. Kate Chopin’s The Awakening. Bloom’s Literary Criticism, an Infobase Learning Co.; 2011. https://primo.rowan.edu/permalink/01ROWU_INST/mgcbt1/alma9921442163405201

Gilman CP. The Yellow Wall Paper. Small, Maynard & company; 1899. https://primo.rowan.edu/permalink/01ROWU_INST/mgcbt1/alma9921604597105201

Wharton E. The Age of Innocence. New Edition. William Collins; 2010. https://primo.rowan.edu/permalink/01ROWU_INST/mgcbt1/alma9921538423705201

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Research – SkibidySigma

Living in the digital age, the rapid dissemination of AI has completely altered the way information is produced, distributed, and consumed. AI technologies have made unmatched efficiency possible in communication, data analysis, and even content creation. Yet, all these developments are accompanied by a host of challenges that threaten the integrity of information and the very structures of democratic societies. The rise of AI-generated misinformation, the emergence of deepfakes, and the infusion of dark money into political processes have created a complex landscape in which truth is malleable and public trust is eroding.

This essay examines the multi-faceted issues of AI-generated misleading content on social networks: defining AI-generated misinformation, distinguishing it from more traditional forms, and exploring its characteristics and mechanisms. It goes on to analyze the interaction between deepfakes and dark money in undermining democratic processes—a discussion illustrating how these elements join forces to establish a growing downward spiral of weaker electoral integrity and public trust. The essay also considers the foundational limitations of AI in neutralizing these threats: technical, moral, and practical. This comprehensive analysis also highlights the urgent need for a multidisciplinary approach to safeguarding democracy in the face of evolving AI technologies.

Artificial intelligence has ushered in an era where content generation can be automated to a level never fathomed earlier. AI-generated misinformation refers to any false or misleading information created by AI systems without direct human intervention. This encompasses a wide range of content types, including fabricated text, manipulated images, synthetic audio, and deepfake videos.

What makes AI-generated misinformation different is the use of advanced AI algorithms, including deep learning models and Generative Adversarial Networks (GANs), to create content that is nearly indistinguishable from real content created by humans.

Hyper-Realism: AI-generated content is so realistic that it becomes difficult to detect. For example, GANs consist of two neural networks: a generator and a discriminator. The generator creates synthetic data, while the discriminator assesses its authenticity. This adversarial process helps the AI system generate output that closely resembles reality with each repetition (Heidari et al., 2023). Examples include deepfake videos of political figures seemingly saying or doing things they never actually did, with movements and speech that are remarkably accurate.

Scalability and Speed: AI systems are capable of generating large volumes of content in a very short period. This scalability means that misinformation can spread rapidly and widely, overwhelming traditional fact-checking mechanisms. Malicious actors can leverage AI to flood social media platforms with false narratives, amplifying their impact. One such example is the rapid dissemination of AI bot-generated fake news articles during election cycles, which can reach millions of users within hours.

Lack of Direct Human Oversight: Unlike traditional misinformation, which often requires human effort to create and disseminate, AI-generated misinformation can be produced autonomously. This reduces the barrier to entry for malicious actors and allows for the continuous generation of deceptive content without significant resource investment. Automated bots can generate and share content around the clock, creating an illusion of widespread consensus or popularity for certain false narratives.

The hyper-realistic nature of AI-generated misinformation poses significant challenges for individuals and institutions. The difficulty in distinguishing authentic content from fabrications undermines public trust in media, government, and other authoritative sources. This erosion of trust has broad implications such as:

Psychological Effects: Individuals may experience confusion and skepticism, leading to cognitive dissonance. The constant exposure to conflicting information can result in information fatigue, where individuals disengage from news consumption altogether. This disengagement can weaken the informed citizenry essential for a functioning democracy.

Social Consequences: Misinformation can inflame social unrest, polarize communities, and heighten tensions. For example, AI-generated fake news about public health crises can lead to panic or harmful behaviors, as seen during the COVID-19 pandemic when false information about cures or prevention methods spread rapidly.

Economic Consequences: Misinformation campaigns can manipulate markets, damage reputations, and disrupt operations in businesses and economies. AI-generated false reports can move stock prices, leading to financial losses for investors and companies.

Deepfakes represent arguably the most disturbing application of AI-generated misinformation. These are hyper-realistic fake videos or audio recordings in which people appear to say or do things they never did. The technology behind deepfakes involves sophisticated AI algorithms that can map one person’s facial expressions and voice onto another’s, creating seamless and convincing fabrications.

For instance, a deepfake video might show a political leader making inflammatory statements they never actually made, potentially stimulating unrest or influencing the outcome of an election. The realism of these videos makes it difficult for the public and even experts to discern their authenticity without advanced forensic analysis.

Dark money is defined as political spending by nonprofit organizations that are exempt from disclosing their donors. This anonymity allows significant sums to influence elections without transparency or accountability. The Supreme Court’s ruling in Citizens United v. Federal Election Commission (2010) opened the door for increased dark money in politics by allowing corporations and unions to spend unlimited funds on political campaigns.

Dark money can finance sophisticated misinformation campaigns, including the creation and distribution of deepfakes. Without the need to disclose funding sources, entities can invest heavily in these technologies to sway public opinion, attack opponents, or promote specific agendas to their advantage.

Deepfakes combined with dark money create a unique threat to democratic processes such as:

Untraceable Influence: Dark money provides the financial means to produce and disseminate deepfakes without revealing the source. This anonymity protects malicious actors from accountability and legal repercussions. Foreign governments or interest groups can interfere in domestic politics covertly.

Amplified Reach: With sufficient funding, deepfakes can be promoted widely through targeted advertising and social media campaigns. This ensures that false narratives reach a large audience, potentially swaying public opinion. Advanced algorithms can target specific demographics with tailored misinformation.

Undermining Electoral Integrity: The spread of deepfakes during election cycles can mislead voters, smear candidates, and distort policy debates. This manipulation compromises the fairness and legitimacy of elections. For example, a deepfake released shortly before an election could depict a candidate engaging in unethical behavior, leaving little time for verification before voters cast their ballots.

The 2016 election highlighted the vulnerability of democratic societies to foreign interference and misinformation. Reports indicated that Russian entities conducted extensive disinformation campaigns on social media platforms to influence the outcome (Chesney & Citron, 2019). While deepfake technology was less advanced at the time, the groundwork was laid for more sophisticated interference in future elections.

Richard W. Painter (2023) warns that deepfakes provide foreign powers and domestic malicious actors with even more potent tools for disruption. The ability to create fake messages and scenarios indistinguishable from reality means that voters can be easily deceived. This not only impacts election results but also undermines confidence in the democratic process.

The expansion of deepfakes contributes to a broader erosion of trust in institutions such as:

Media Skepticism: As deepfakes become more prevalent, individuals may question the authenticity of legitimate news reports and media content. This suspicion hampers the media’s role as a reliable information source. Journalists may find their work dismissed as “fake news,” even when reporting accurately.

Political Cynicism: Repeated exposure to misinformation can lead to distrust in politics and governance. Voters may become disengaged, believing that their participation has little impact. Lower voter turnout and reduced civic engagement weaken democratic institutions.

Social Fragmentation: Misinformation campaigns often exploit societal divisions, intensifying polarization and hindering constructive dialogue. Deepfakes that inflame racial, religious, or ideological tensions can lead to increased hostility and violence.

The current regulatory landscape is ill-equipped to address the challenges posed by deepfakes and dark money:

Legal Gaps: Laws have not kept pace with technological advancements. Existing regulations may not adequately address the creation and dissemination of AI-generated misinformation. For example, there may be no specific legal prohibitions against creating a deepfake of a public figure.

Enforcement Difficulties: Anonymity and cross-border activities complicate enforcement efforts. Holding perpetrators accountable is challenging when they operate outside domestic jurisdictions. International cooperation is often limited by differing legal systems and priorities.

Policy Inertia: Political gridlock and differing priorities hinder the development of comprehensive strategies to combat these threats. Policymakers may lack the technical expertise to craft effective legislation, or they may be influenced by entities that benefit from the status quo.

While AI technologies contribute to the problem of misinformation, they are also seen as potential tools for detection and mitigation. However, relying solely on AI to combat AI-generated misinformation presents several limitations, such as :

Data Limitations: AI detection systems require large, high-quality datasets to train algorithms effectively. Gupta et al. (2022) note that comprehensive labeled datasets for misinformation are scarce. Without diverse and representative data, AI models struggle to generalize and accurately identify new forms of deceptive content. Additionally, privacy concerns limit the availability of data needed for training.

Adversarial Evolution: Malicious actors continually adapt their tactics to evade detection. As detection algorithms improve, so do the techniques used to create more sophisticated deepfakes. This creates an ongoing arms race between creators of misinformation and developers of detection tools. For example, new deepfake techniques may bypass current detection methods by introducing subtle variations.

Computational Resources: Advanced AI models require significant computational power and expertise. Smaller organizations or platforms may lack the resources to implement and maintain effective detection systems. 

AI systems lack the nuanced understanding of the context that human intelligence provides:

Sarcasm and Irony: AI often fails to interpret sarcasm, satire, or ironic statements, leading to misclassification of content. A sarcastic article might be flagged as misinformation, while a subtle piece of propaganda might go undetected.

Cultural Nuances: Language varies widely across cultures, dialects, and communities. AI models trained on one dataset may not perform well when encountering unfamiliar linguistic patterns. For example, slang terms or regional expressions might be misinterpreted.

Deeply Embedded Misinformation: Some content implants false information subtly within otherwise truthful narratives. AI may not detect these nuances without advanced context-aware capabilities (Ubillús et al., 2023). For instance, a news article may present accurate facts but draw misleading conclusions.

Effective AI moderation often requires analyzing vast amounts of user data, raising privacy issues such as:

Data Collection: Collecting and processing personal data for moderation purposes can infringe on user privacy rights and violate data protection regulations like the General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) in the European Union and globally.

Bias and Discrimination: AI models may inherit biases present in training data, leading to discriminatory outcomes or unfair targeting of certain groups. This can worsen social inequalities and fuel resentment.

Transparency and Accountability: Lack of transparency in AI decision-making processes can erode trust. Users may not understand why their content was flagged or removed. Algorithmic opacity makes it difficult to challenge or appeal decisions.

AI moderation can also result in over-censorship like :

False Positives: AI may incorrectly flag legitimate content as misleading or harmful, suppressing free expression. This can stifle important discussions on controversial topics.

Chilling Effect: Fear of content removal may discourage users from sharing their opinions, limiting open discourse. Users may self-censor to avoid penalties, reducing the diversity of perspectives.

Advanced AI solutions may not be accessible globally because :

Resource Disparities: Developing regions or smaller platforms may lack the financial and technical resources to deploy effective AI moderation tools. This creates a digital inequality where certain populations are more vulnerable to misinformation.

Uneven Protection: This creates disparities in protection against misinformation, with some populations more vulnerable to manipulation. Malicious actors may target platforms or regions with weaker defenses.

Addressing the challenges posed by AI-generated misinformation and deepfakes requires a comprehensive strategy that goes beyond technological solutions. Human moderators play a critical role in content moderation:

Contextual Analysis: Humans can interpret context, cultural nuances, and complex language patterns that AI may miss. They can distinguish between hate speech and legitimate criticism, satire, and deception.

Ethical Judgment: Human reviewers can make nuanced decisions, balancing the need to remove harmful content with respect for free speech. They can consider the intent behind content and potential impacts.

Community Engagement: Involving users in moderation efforts fosters a sense of collective responsibility and trust. Platforms can implement community reporting systems and feedback mechanisms.

Governments and international bodies must develop policies to address emerging threats such as:

Legal Definitions: Establish clear legal definitions of AI-generated misinformation and deepfakes to guide enforcement. This provides a foundation for legal action against creators and distributors.

Transparency Requirements: Mandate disclosure of funding sources for political advertising to combat dark money influence. Increased transparency can deter malicious activities and keep the voters informed.

Accountability Mechanisms: Create legal avenues to hold creators and distributors of malicious content accountable, including cross-border cooperation. International treaties and agreements can facilitate action.

Ethical Guidelines: Develop ethical standards for AI development and deployment, emphasizing privacy, fairness, and human rights. Industry codes of conduct can promote responsible practices.

Educating the public is essential in building resilience against misinformation. Some ways to do that would be:

Curriculum Integration: Incorporate media literacy into educational curricula at all levels, teaching critical thinking and evaluation skills. Students learn to assess sources, recognize bias, and verify information.

Public Awareness Campaigns: Launch initiatives to inform the public about the existence and dangers of deepfakes and AI-generated misinformation. Governments and NGOs could collaborate on outreach programs.

Collaborative Efforts: Partner with media organizations, tech companies, and civil society to promote responsible information consumption. Workshops, seminars, and online resources can reach diverse audiences.

Ongoing research and innovation are also crucial:

Advanced Detection Methods: Invest in developing AI models capable of detecting deepfakes and misinformation with higher accuracy, including context-aware systems. Techniques like blockchain verification and digital watermarking can aid in authentication.

Open Collaboration: Encourage collaboration among researchers, sharing data and techniques to improve detection capabilities. Open-source projects can also accelerate progress.

Adversarial Training: Use adversarial machine learning to anticipate and counter new tactics employed by malicious actors. By simulating attacks, developers can strengthen defenses.

Misinformation is a global issue requiring coordinated efforts such as:

Cross-Border Policies: Develop international agreements to address the spread of misinformation across jurisdictions. Forums like the United Nations can facilitate communication and set policies.

Information Sharing: Establish networks for sharing intelligence on emerging threats and best practices in mitigating misinformation. 

Collective Enforcement: Collaborate on enforcing regulations and holding perpetrators accountable, regardless of their location. Joint investigations and extradition agreements can enhance effectiveness.

In conclusion, the intersection of AI-generated misinformation, deepfakes, and dark money presents a profound challenge to the integrity of information and the functioning of democratic societies. AI technologies have empowered malicious actors to create and disseminate misleading content at large scale, eroding public trust and undermining democratic processes. The limitations of AI in combating these threats highlight the necessity of a comprehensive, multidisciplinary approach. 

By integrating human expertise with technological tools, establishing robust regulatory frameworks, promoting media literacy, advancing AI research, and fostering international cooperation, society can address the evolving challenges posed by AI-driven misinformation. Democratic principles demand proactive defense against the digitally engineered crisis of misinformation. Inaction is not an option. The responsibility lies with technologists, policymakers, educators, media organizations, and citizens to collaborate in safeguarding the integrity of information. Through combined efforts, it is possible to restore public trust, ensure fair electoral processes, and uphold the values that support democratic societies in the digital age.

References

Citizens United v. Federal Election Commission, 558 U.S. 310 (2010).

Danielle K. Citron & Robert Chesney, Deep Fakes: A Looming Challenge for Privacy, Democracy, and National Security in 107 California Law Review 1753 (2019).

Gupta, A., Kumar, N., Prabhat, P., Gupta, R., Tanwar, S., & Sharma, G. (2022). Combating Fake News: Stakeholder Interventions and Potential Solutions. IEEE Access, vol. 10, pp. 78268-78289, 2022 

Heidari, A., Navimipour, N. J., Dag, H., & Unal, M. (2023). Deep learning-based deepfake detection techniques: A systematic review. Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Data Mining and Knowledge Discovery.

Painter, Richard W. Deepfake 2024: Will Citizens United and Artificial Intelligence Together Destroy Representative Democracy? Journal of National Security Law & Policy, 2023, page. 121–151. HeinOnline. (this one requires you to log in through Rowan database)

Ubillús, J. A. T., Ladera-Castañeda, M., Pacherres, C. A. A., Pacherres, M. Á. A., & Saavedra, C. L. I. (2023). Artificial Intelligence to Reduce Misleading Publications on Social NetworksEAI Endorsed Transactions on Scalable Information Systems, 10(6). 

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Bibliography — Softball1321

https://www.ideals.illinois.edu/items/109906. Roache, D. J. (2018, August 7). “Can you just put your phone away?”: The effects of cell phone use on face-to-face conflict in romantic relationshipshttps://www.ideals.illinois.edu/items/109906

Background – Computer-mediated communication (CMC) is a new way of confrontation in close relationships and the presence of cell phones are dissatisfying. 

How I Used It – I used this article to support my claim that the use of cell phones in a close relationship is unfulfilling and face to face confrontation with no cell phone use is more personal. 

 https://etd.ohiolink.edu/acprod/odb_etd/ws/send_file/send?accession=kent1227282130&disposition=inline. Cell phone communication versus face-to- … (n.d.). https://etd.ohiolink.edu/acprod/odb_etd/ws/send_file/send?accession=kent1227282130&disposition=inline 

Background – Studies are proven that face-to-face communication has a positive effect on relationships and confirms relationship satisfaction. (Pg.8)

How I Used It – I used this writing to support my hypothesis that close relationships seem to last longer when confrontation is used in person, rather than over the phone. You are able to understand your partners emotions more when you talk in person. 

 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2451958821000361. These discrepancies could be in part because of differences and imperfection. (2021a, April 29). A daily-diary study on the effects of face-to-face communication, texting, and their interplay on understanding and relationship satisfaction. Computers in Human Behavior Reports.

Background – The background of this writing expresses the idea of the important factors in a romantic relationship, one is being able to understand your partners feelings. Although, being able to feel what your partner feels is unlikely to happen via text.

How I Used It – I usedthis article to support my hypothesis that you are unable to understand how your partner is feeling and have a genuine connection over the phone. 

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Background – Models were developed in this writing to explain the negative effects of texting in relationships and the conflicts that occur from it. 

How I Used It – I used this writing to support the idea that constant communication over the phone leads to a lack of intimacy, which ruins relationships.

Effects of Mobile Technology on Human Relationships” – Abu Naser, M., & Samy, S. (2017). Effects of Mobile Technology on Human Relationships.

Background – The author conducted this reading as a research evaluation about the impacts of mobile technology on face-to-face communication. The author has proven many different times with studies he performed on his students to prove the impacts of mobile technology.

How I used It – I used this article to show the growth and spread of digital media technologies and their changing capabilities on interpersonal communication.

How have cell phones changed us socially?” UoPeople, W. of. (2024, June 19). University of the People.

Background – This article gives the readers two viewpoints. One example is the “pros” of mobile technology and communication and the other is the “cons” of mobile technology and communication. When we read the article, we will notice that the author has listed us these pros and cons, which gives a better understanding of my thesis.

How I Used It – I used this article to help prove my thesis and also prove my rebuttal argument. There are many advantages and disadvantages of cell phones and their impact on our special bonds.

“What Is Your Phone Doing to You Relationships?” Roberts―Meredith David and James, Dec. 2024.

Background – This writing shows what our cell phones are really doing to our relationship. This article talks about “phubbing” which is “the practice of snubbing others in favor of our mobile phones. In other words, how people choose their mobile devices over their relationships.

How I Used It –  I used this article as another way to prove the negative effects of cell phones usage in romantic relationships, and give ways on how to stop “phubbing people.”

Cellphones help build stronger relationships.” De Lima, N., & De Lima, N. (2020, September 4). Cellphones help build stronger relationships.

Background – This article shows a different point of view on our mobile devices, that they can help us strengthen ourselves and our relationships.

How I Used It – I used this article in my rebuttal argument to also acknowledge the fact that cell phones are not always negative. They can have a positive impact on ourselves and our relationships.

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Background – This short article gives the audience a brief understanding of the negative impacts of phones on relationships.

How I Used It – I used this article as another reasoning to support my idea that cell phones break our bonds.

https://news.web.baylor.edu/news/story/2015/baylor-study-cellphones-can-damage-romantic-relationships-lead-depression#:~:text=%22Specifically%2C%20momentary%20distractions%20by%20one’s,well%2Dbeing%20of%20that%20individual. Baylor study: Cellphones can damage romantic relationships, lead to depression. Media and Public Relations | Baylor University. (n.d.). https://news.web.baylor.edu/news/story/2015/baylor-study-

Background – This article gives another description of the word “phubbing” and how much phubbing effects our different relationships.

How I Used It – I looked into this article to get a better understanding of the term “phubbing,” which was discussed in a different article. This term is used frequently in relationships where a partner may feel lonely because the other partner is attached to their phone.

https://people.cs.rutgers.edu/~mcgrew/Cell1/positive-impacts.html Positive impacts – modern day tech. (n.d.). https://people.cs.rutgers.edu/~mcgrew/Cell1/positive-impacts.html 

Background – Rutgers University conducted a study to prove that cell phones can effect ourselves relationships in a positive manner if we use them the way we were intended too.

How I Used It – I used this article to give myself more reasonings on how cell phones have a positive impact on ourselves and relationships. Although I did not use all of the ideas they provided, I was still able to acknowledge for myself that cell phones don’t destroy us, it’s the way we use it.

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Research – pineapple488

The Power of Early Music Education: 

Cultivating Creativity Through Audiation

Many music education systems prioritize theoretical knowledge; the formal rules, structures, and concepts behind music; rather than experiential learning; the direct experience of making or listening to music. However, this approach actually hinders a child’s ability to succeed as a musician. Experiential learning emphasizes active, hands-on engagement with music in ways that develop intuitive, aural, and creative skills. Ear training allows children to cultivate the auditory skills necessary to experience these engagements, ultimately strengthening their perception of music and their potential to develop outstanding abilities such as perfect pitch. All children have the aptitude to become musical geniuses, so long as they are immersed in environments that foster an active and meaningful engagement with sound early on in their development, and these skills are brought out heavily through music experience and audiation more so than the study of music theory.

Music theory refers to the study of the fundamental elements and guidelines used by musicians to put interpretations and meaning to what they hear. It encompasses a wide range of topics, including the understanding of scales, chords, rhythm, melody, harmony, form, and notation. Although knowledge of music theory can provide valuable insights into understanding music structure, it emphasizes abstract concepts that may not resonate with young learners and therefore fail to set them up for success as they build upon their education. For many children, the complexity of music theory can overshadow the joy of musical expression, making it seem like a chore rather than a creative outlet.

Music educator Edwin Gordon coined the term audiation, which describes the ability to hear and understand music in one’s mind without physical sound being present. It is essentially the process of mentally playing music and making sense of it and is fundamental to developing musical skills. Though similar, audiation is not the same as aural perception. Aural perception occurs simultaneously as a sound is being heard, while audiation happens after the sound is no longer audible. The Gordon Institute for Music Learning said, “Audiation is the musical equivalent of thinking in language. When we listen to someone speak we must retain in memory their vocal sounds long enough to recognize and give meaning to the words the sounds represent. Likewise, when listening to music we are at any given moment organizing in audiation sounds that were recently heard.” Audiation also involves being able to make predictions about what comes next in music based on the rhythm and tone. Ear training, a closely related concept, involves exercises that help students identify, comprehend, and reproduce music by listening. This method encourages students to engage with music in an instinctual way, allowing them to internalize musical patterns and sounds. By focusing on audiation and ear training, children can develop a more intuitive grasp of music, fostering creativity and expression.

The more children are exposed to music early on and taught how to audiate, the more likely they are to develop the amazing ability known as perfect pitch, or absolute pitch. Perfect pitch is the very rare talent that allows an individual to identify or recreate a musical note without any sort of reference tone. For instance, a person with perfect pitch can hear a sound and instantly recognize it as an “A” or an “E-flat.” It also enables a person to distinguish whether two notes are exactly one octave apart or slightly more or less. The development of perfect pitch is closely linked to early and consistent exposure to music, particularly through ear training exercises that help children build a finely tuned sense of pitch. Though perfect pitch is often considered an innate ability, studies show that it can be cultivated through early musical education, especially when a child is immersed in an environment that encourages them to listen closely and learn music by ear.

A laboratory investigation at Hamilton University revealed that perfect pitch can in fact be learned through intense training. Participants of the study were given two tests to measure their ability to correctly identify notes after hearing them, once before and once after 36 training sessions where they practiced identifying notes and differentiating between half steps. All participants showed significant improvement, and two of them were able to develop perfect pitch. Although it can be learned at any stage in life, people who have this ability have typically had it since they were very young. A child’s brain is much more flexible and absorbent of new information than the brain of an adult. Therefore, children exposed to music education at a young age are more likely to develop perfect pitch, particularly when they engage in ear training that emphasizes listening and placing pitches in various contexts.

A person’s natural ability or talent in a specific area is referred to as aptitude. In the context of music, aptitude encompasses a range of factors, including a child’s sensitivity to sound, rhythm, and musical patterns. While some children may have an innate musical aptitude, it is crucial to recognize that all children can develop musical skills with the right guidance and environment. Early exposure to music, particularly through engaging methods such as ear training, can unlock potential that might otherwise remain dormant. Musical ability is a broader term that encompasses a range of skills, including performance, composition, improvisation, and the ability to understand and analyze music. Musical success is not solely defined by technical proficiency. It also includes creativity, expression, and the ability to communicate emotions through music. By emphasizing ear training and experiential learning, children can develop a great sense of musicality that enhances their overall musical success.

By focusing on these concepts, it becomes clear that traditional music education, which heavily emphasizes music theory, may not be the most effective approach for young learners. Instead, integrating audiation and ear training into the curriculum can provide children with a more meaningful and engaging musical experience. When children learn to recognize and create music by ear, they develop a deeper connection to sound and a greater sense of autonomy in their musical journey. Immersing children in music early on also helps develop their confidence and fosters a sense of belonging. As they explore sounds and experiment with composing music, they are more likely to express their individuality and creativity. This freedom encourages them to take risks and discover their unique musical voices, further enhancing their potential for success.

Nurturing a child’s musical potential through early exposure and ear training can lead to remarkable cognitive and emotional benefits. By prioritizing experiential learning over theoretical knowledge, we can create an environment where all children have the opportunity to thrive as musicians. The ability to develop perfect pitch, a strong sense of musical aptitude, and the skills necessary for musical success are within reach for every child, provided they are given the right tools and experiences. 

Early exposure to music education is widely recognized for its numerous benefits, but what people don’t often consider is that a child’s music potential benefits significantly from an experiential rather than theoretical approach to learning. Specifically, teaching children to compose and perform by ear, rather than focusing on music theory, greatly enhances their long-term musical success. Audiation plays an important role in this process. Children who develop strong audiation skills through early music education are more likely to experience greater creativity, musical fluency, and even the rare ability of perfect pitch. Early ear-based training, combined with a strong foundation in audiation, improves a child’s development as a musician and contrasts with the less than optimal outcomes of children who are taught only through music theory from an early age.

Audiation allows children to mentally retain, manipulate, and anticipate sounds, forming the foundation for composing, improvising, and engaging with music creatively. When children undergo ear training, they learn to identify, recall, and reproduce music they hear without written notation. This ability to audiate helps them internalize music, making it easier to engage with it at an intuitive level. Research consistently indicates that children who develop audiation skills through ear training are more likely to achieve musical success. They can reproduce and create melodies, harmonies, and rhythms on their own, unconstrained by rigid structures of written notation. This fosters expressive, spontaneous musical performances, especially for young composers. Instead of merely interpreting or memorizing notation, these children create music from the sounds they have internalized.

The immersive process of ear training and audiation plays a direct role in enhancing a child’s ability to internalize music, build musical instincts, and develop a deep sense of musicality. Through this process, children learn to think about music beyond the technicalities of written notation. The ability to connect with music on a deeper, more internalized level directly leads to their success as musicians.

One extraordinary outcome of early music education is the development of perfect pitch. This ability is most often observed in those exposed to music education early, particularly when training emphasizes ear-based skills. The critical period for developing perfect pitch occurs in early childhood when the brain is most capable of absorbing complex auditory information. Studies consistently show that children who begin music education before age 6 are significantly more likely to develop perfect pitch than those who start later. Dr. Diana Deutsch’s study at the University of California, San Diego, found that intensive ear training during early years of music education dramatically increased the likelihood of developing perfect pitch. 

Audiation plays a key role in this process. By mentally retaining the sounds they hear, children better distinguish and recall specific pitches. This heightened sensitivity strengthens over time, leading to perfect pitch development. It is directly related to early exposure to music education, particularly ear training and audiation. These experiences provide necessary auditory stimulation that primes the brain for pitch recognition. Without early training, the brain’s ability to internalize pitch so it can be immediately recalled is much less likely to develop.

While ear-based training clearly benefits musical intuition and creativity, music theory can also have advantages, especially as children progress to more complex musical structures. However, placing too much emphasis on music theory, especially when introduced too early, can have unintended consequences that hinder a child’s natural musical development. Children who focus primarily on theory tend to have a disconnect between technical knowledge and musical intuition, causing slower music development. Music theory teaches children how to read sheet music, understand scales, chords, and notation, but it may fail to foster an innate understanding of how music feels or sounds internally. Focusing on theory too early might cause proficiency at reading music but a struggle to connect abstract concepts.

For example, a child who learns to read sheet music may perform a complex piece but fail to compose or improvise. Conversely, children who learn to play music by ear develop an intuitive grasp of musical structure, often without written notation. They internalize melodies and harmonies by listening and are more likely to express themselves freely and creatively in their musical pursuits. Thus, while theory-based learning provides valuable technical skills, it can lead to rigid, less flexible musicality when it overshadows ear training. Ear-based learning, on the other hand, enables children to access a more organic, instinctive understanding of music, leading to better outcomes in both performance and composition.

The effectiveness of early music education is also rooted in the brain’s inherent plasticity during early childhood. Neuroscientific research has shown that young children’s brains are highly adaptable, capable of forming new connections quickly in response to auditory stimuli. The earlier a child is exposed to music and ear-based training, the more readily their brain absorbs and processes sound in ways that adults cannot. This plasticity allows children to develop a greater sensitivity to sound and a deeper connection to music, creating ideal conditions for developing advanced skills like perfect pitch or becoming more adaptable musicians. Early music exposure, particularly when it emphasizes listening, imitation, and internalization of sound, shapes neural pathways that enhance musical performance and creativity. The remote cause of musical success, then, is the developmental timing of music education, which capitalizes on the brain’s capacity for rapid auditory learning and long-term skill-building.

The success of early music education is shaped by a causal chain of ear-based learning, audiation, and perfect pitch development. Early exposure primes the brain, allowing it to develop rare abilities like perfect pitch. Audiation, developed through ear-based training, provides a foundation for creativity, expression, and fluency. While music theory is important, focusing too much on it at an early age can limit a child’s ability to engage with music intuitively and prevent the benefits of early ear-based training. By taking a different approach to music education and prioritizing ear-based education and audiation, rather than relying solely on theory, we can set children on a path to becoming more successful, creative, and expressive musicians. Early childhood is the ideal time to foster these skills, given the brain’s adaptability and its capacity to absorb musical information.

Despite widespread advocacy from music educators that children should be taught music theory from an early age, this traditional emphasis on theoretical knowledge often fails to engage young learners’ innate creativity and musical potential. While experts like Christopher Small and Bennett Reimer have made compelling arguments for the importance of music theory in the development of musical literacy, a closer examination reveals that learning music by ear remains the more effective and engaging method for fostering intuition and musical fluency in children.

Many music educators emphasize the importance of music theory as a foundational component of music education, arguing that a thorough understanding of musical notation, scales, harmony, and rhythm is essential for students to develop as proficient musicians. For example, Christopher Small, a prominent musicologist, argues in his book Musicking: The Meaning of Performing and Listening that music theory helps students gain access to the “grammar” of music, providing them with a systematic framework for understanding musical structures. Small writes, “Music theory gives students the tools to comprehend and manipulate the complex layers of music, providing a structure that enhances both performance and composition.” From this perspective, music theory offers an intellectual roadmap that guides students toward deeper musical understanding and technical proficiency.

Similarly, music education theorist Bennett Reimer, in A Philosophy of Music Education, stresses that music theory is vital for cultivating musical literacy and cognitive development. He contends, “Music theory provides the structural knowledge necessary for students to recognize and analyze the underlying principles of music, which in turn makes them more effective performers and composers.” Reimer argues that learning theory equips students to think critically about music, solve musical problems, and engage in meaningful musical expression.

While both Small and Reimer make valid points about the benefits of music theory, there are limitations to emphasizing theory as the primary mode of learning, especially for young children. Music theory, while valuable, can be abstract and disconnected from the natural, creative process that ear training facilitates. Focusing on theory too early can stifle creativity by introducing rigid rules before children have developed the flexibility to express themselves musically.

Ear training, which focuses on developing the ability to understand and internalize music through listening, is a more effective and engaging method for early childhood music education. Audiation, an essential component of ear training, allows children to develop an intuitive understanding of music that can later be formalized through theory. By learning to internalize rhythms, pitches, and melodies first, children can build a strong musical foundation that will enhance their understanding of theory later.

One key reason ear training is especially beneficial for young children is that it aligns with their natural cognitive and perceptual development. Neuroscience research has shown that young children’s brains are highly capable of absorbing complex auditory stimuli. According to music psychologist Diana Deutsch, “Children who receive early exposure to music by ear are more likely to develop advanced aural skills, including perfect pitch.” Ear training enables children to recognize patterns, intervals, and harmonies on a deep emotional level, fostering a more instinctive and creative connection to music.

Moreover, ear training nurtures creativity by giving children the freedom to experiment with sounds and melodies without being constrained by theoretical rules. Children who learn to play music by ear are encouraged to compose and improvise freely, engaging with music in a way that feels personal and expressive. Music educator David J. Hargreaves notes, “Music that is learned by ear allows students to develop a more organic, spontaneous approach to composition and performance, fostering individual expression and musicality.” This freedom to explore music without the constraints of formal notation cultivates creativity, which is often stifled when children are taught theory too early.

In addition to fostering creativity, ear training provides numerous cognitive and emotional benefits that theory cannot offer in the same way. By developing strong aural skills, children improve their ability to distinguish between musical elements such as pitch, rhythm, and harmony. This heightened musical perception enhances cognitive functions like memory, attention, and problem-solving. A study by the Institute for Music Research found that children who participated in ear training showed significant improvements in auditory processing, memory retention, and problem-solving abilities.

Furthermore, ear training helps children develop a deeper emotional connection to music. When children learn to play by ear, they are not just memorizing patterns or following written instructions; they are internalizing the emotional quality of music itself. This process allows them to express their feelings and experiences through sound, leading to greater emotional intelligence and self-expression. As music educator Edwin Gordon argues, “Music should be learned as a means of expression, not merely as a technical skill.” Ear training gives children the freedom to connect with music on an emotional level.

It is important to note that ear training and music theory are not mutually exclusive, and should be integrated into a balanced curriculum. However, the sequence in which they are introduced is crucial. Children should first engage with music through ear training, learning to internalize sounds, rhythms, and melodies. Once these basic musical instincts are developed, music theory can be introduced as a way to formalize and expand upon this knowledge. This way, music theory becomes a tool for enhancing and refining the creativity that was fostered through ear training, rather than a restrictive set of rules that could stifle spontaneous musical expression.

In conclusion, while experts like Small and Reimer present strong arguments for the value of music theory, their perspectives often overlook the benefits of ear training, particularly for young children. Ear training emphasizes listening, improvisation, and composition by ear, offering a more intuitive, creative, and emotionally resonant approach to music education. By allowing children to develop their musical instincts and express themselves freely, ear training provides a solid foundation for later learning music theory. When theory is introduced after audiation, it enhances the child’s natural musical abilities rather than constraining them. Therefore, ear training should be prioritized in music education to foster creativity, emotional expression, and musical fluency in young learners.

References

Audiation. GIML The Gordon Institute for Music Learning. (n.d.). https://giml.org/mlt/audiation/ 

Can Perfect Pitch Be Learned?. Lundin, R. W. (1963). Music Educators Journal. https://doi.org/10.2307/3389949 

Deutsch, D. (n.d.). 5 absolute pitch – Diana Deutsch. https://deutsch.ucsd.edu/pdf/PsyMus_3_Ch5_Absolute_Pitch.pdf

Deutsch, D. (2013). Psychology of Music. Diana Deutsch – Psychology of Music. https://deutsch.ucsd.edu/psychology/pages.php?i=601 

Gordon, E., E. (2013). Music learning theory for newborn and young children E. Edwin Gordon. G.I.A. publications.

Gordon, E. (2012). Learning Sequences in Music: A Contemporary Music Learning Theory. GIA Publications, Inc. 

Hargreaves, D., & Lamont, A. (n.d.). The Psychology of Musical Development. Cambridge Core. https://www.cambridge.org/core/books/psychology-of-musical-development/C6BADF11A36C530CAFD496CB5379D2FB 

Hargreaves, D. (2021, May 4). Musical Development and Learning: The international perspective. British Journal of Music Education. https://www.academia.edu/48275238/Musical_development_and_learning_The_international_perspective 

Miendlarzewska, E. A., & Trost, W. J. (2014, January 20). How musical training affects cognitive development: Rhythm, reward and other modulating variables. Frontiers in neuroscience. https://pmc.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/articles/PMC3957486/ 

Music Theory: Basics and Fundamental Concepts. Avid. (n.d.). https://www.avid.com/resource-center/music-theory 

Reimer, B., & Webster, P. R. (1989). A Philosophy of Music Education. State University of New York Press. 

Schellenberg, E. G. (n.d.). Music and Cognitive Abilities. https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/10.1111/j.0963-7214.2005.00389.x

Small, C. (1998). Musicking — The Meanings of Performing and Listening. https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/1461380990010102 

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Bibliography – KFury

  1. “Design Implementation of Baseball Bats: Reinforced Bats—A Case Study” N.M. Ravindra, Ivan Padron, Priyanka Singh, Bhumi Bhatt, Vishal Singh, and Kevin Fritz. JOM, 2012https://www.researchgate.net/publication/256292995_Design_Implementation_of_Baseball_Bats_Reinforced_Bats-A_Case_Study

Background: This is a Case study on the design and physics of what makes a baseball bat comfortable, unique, and safe for all players on the field.

How I used it: I used it to showcase the importance of the design of baseball bats and how they should be made with the care to note the comfortability and effectiveness all bats must strive for.

  1. “Performance assessment of wood, metal and composite baseball bats” MM Shenoy, LV Smith, JT Axtell. Composite Structures, 2001

https://ssl.wsu.edu/documents/2015/10/performance-assessment-of-wood-metal-composite-baseball-bats.pdf/

Background: A seven-layered outline of certain materials, either wood, metal, or plastic, for certain bats and how they are tested with machines or drills to determine their durability.

How I used it: I used it to note the regulations and evaluations researchers do to judge a bat’s material and durability, hoping to learn which is the best and most durable material the bat can be made with.

  1. “Temporal Coordination Strategies in Baseball Hitting: Insights from Stationary vs. Oncoming Ball Analysis” T Ino, H Katsumata. Journal of Kinesiology and Sports Science, 2024

https://www.researchgate.net/publication/382058117_Temporal_Coordination_Strategies_in_Baseball_Hitting_Insights_from_Stationary_vs_Oncoming_Ball_Analysis

Background: This is an examination of the physics of bat-ball contact and how the pressures of those two forces are met, along with the multiple forms of bating players may do to alleviate the stress of the two forces.

How I used it: I used it to best explain the physics behind bat-to-ball contact and the force that can come off such a collision to affect the bat in such a way that it may break apart, even going over certain areas in a bat that could break regardless of quality.

  1. “The Breaking Point: Examining the Potential Liability of Maple Baseball Bat Manufacturers for Injuries Caused by Broken Maple Baseball Bats” MA Westover, Penn St. L. Rev., 2010 HeinOnline

Background:An Article on the history of Bat fractures, regarding their materials and the pressure they were under during bat-to-ball contact

How I used it: I used it as a nice ease into the different types of wood that bats were made out of, either birch, maple, or ash. This gave me a bold understanding of the usage of maple with its massive density and overall durability. It was a nice read to get a look forward to whatever the other two woods may provide.

5. RAWLINGS SPORTING GOODS COMPANY, INC.: STRATEGIC CHALLENGES

Nickerson, Inge; Rarick, Charles.Jordan Whitney Enterprises, Inc. , 2000

Background: A Study on the materials and sporting goods sold by Rawlings, the official sporting goods company of the MLB, and many more.

How I used it: I used this to showcase the financial side of the results for faulty equipment from a long-time official MLB partner in  Rawlings Sporting goods.

6. Leahey, A. (2022, September 2). MLB official baseball rules, annotated: Equipment and uniforms (Part 3). Baseball Prospectus. https://www.baseballprospectus.com/news/article/77155/mlb-official-baseball-rules-annoted-equipment-and-uniforms-part-3/

Background: An overall Play-by-play and listing of any variety of equipment used by players of the MLB, going over materials used and as many inches of how wide a piece of equipment can even be.

How I used it: I used this article to note all the current standards that lie within the MLB guidelines, noting the usage of only wooden bats and the exact with and size of all forms of equipment used in a season.

7. Sherwood, J., & Drane, P. (2019). Design and materials in baseball. In Materials in sports equipment (pp. [235 – 279]). Elsevier. https://app-knovel-com.ezproxy.rowan.edu/web/view/khtml/show.v/rcid:kpMSEE0002/cid:kt0121XT45/viewerType:khtml/?page=1&view=collapsed&zoom=1

Background: A Publishing on the makings of wooden bats detailing some reason and idea of what the MLB asks for in their equipment crafting

How I used it: I used this to note the understanding of how metal bats may be far more superior to wooden bats given their immense durability and sluggish power, but also keeping in mind to respect the sport’s intentions of keeping tradition afloat with the use of wooden.

8. Campshure, B., Drane, P., & Sherwood, J. A. (2022). An investigation of wood baseball bat durability as a function of bat profile and slope of grain using finite element modeling and statistical analysis. Electronics, 12(7), 3494. https://www.mdpi.com/2076-3417/12/7/3494

Background: An analysis of four different types of bats made to replicate and over-test the density from different woods that could be implemented into the game, as well as going over multiple impact locations that could devastate any sort of wooden bat and finding out its weakest location.

How I used it: I used this to explain one of the different factors of Bat construction in Grain slopes, which is the angle of the wood grain about a line parallel to the bat’s longitudinal axis. That MLB will even let the bat be playable with the correct measurement of less than 3 degrees.

9. Ravindra, N. M., Sushil, K., & Ivan, P. (2009). Physics of baseball bats—An analysis. International Journal of Sports Science and Engineering, 3(4), 161-172. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/228677376

Background: An article on the physics and formations of bat swings that demonstrates the different feelings between metal and wooden bats helps with MBL standards of why wooden bats are used.

How I used it: I used this to look at the weight distribution of the bat and how many times players switch stances due to a bat’s maximum weight and measurements, which affects the contact between bat and ball.

10. Diaz, J. (2012). Beware of deadly flying bats: An examination of the legal implications of maple bat injuries in Major League Baseball. Seton Hall Journal of Sports & Entertainment Law, 22(2), 227-258. https://scholarship.shu.edu/cgi/viewcontent.cgi?article=1098&context=student_scholarship

Background: An article that details the hazardous cause of a splintered bat during a game, explaining its major injuries of splinter, wood splintering in the catcher, and the numerous other hazards beyond that of bad equipment.

How I used it: I used this Article to note and explain to the reader the harmful effects that may occur when using a faulty bat, either having it splinter and have a shard of wood lodged into the player or any possible wrist injury based off of bad gripping.

All sources were  Cited from Google Scholar and some were used via Rowan Library

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annotated bibliography- starfire.04

  1. (2024). Heinonline.org. https://heinonline.org/HOL/Page?handle=hein.journals/chiclat26&div=13&g_sent=1&casa_token=&collection=journals

Background: This article evaluates the “conscious and unconscious acceptance of a racial hierarchy where whites are consistently ranked above People of Color”. It also takes a look at internalized racism and the effects it has on students in America. It utilizes Critical Race Theory and examines the experiences of white students versus students of Color. 

How I used it:  I used this article to support my hypothesis on the factor of unequal experiences amongst students based on race and skin color. Also to make a point on how internalized racism affects a students academic experience in the classroom. 

  1. Darling-Hammond, L. (1998, March 1). Unequal Opportunity: Race and Education. Brookings; The Brookings Institution. https://www.brookings.edu/articles/unequal-opportunity-race-and-education/

Background: this article speaks on Affirmative Action and the most recent effects of Affirmative Action on minorities now. It also talks about the nature of inequality in the education system. 

How I used it: I used this article to help my argument when it came to factual information on affirmative action. I also wanted to take a little bit of a deep dive on the nature of the inequality in the education system and how that affects the reality of minority students in America.

  1. Weir, K. (2016, November). Inequality at School. American Psychological Association. https://www.apa.org/monitor/2016/11/cover-inequality-school

Background: This article goes into detail about the achievement gap in education between white and black students. It goes over the evidence of disparities, the discipline divide, and goes into the statistics of the graduation rate of white students compared to black students. 

How I used it: I wanted to show the recent statistics of the graduation rate between white and black students. I also wanted to include the achievement gap and help the audience become aware of the fact that there is an achievement gap to begin with and why school is harder to go through for black students compared to their white counterparts. 

  1. U.S. DEPARTMENT OF THE TREASURY. (2023, June 9). Post 5: Racial differences in educational experiences and attainment. U.S. Department of the Treasury; U.S. Department of the Treasury. https://home.treasury.gov/news/featured-stories/post-5-racial-differences-in-educational-experiences-and-attainment

Background: This article takes a deep dive into the racial differences in the education system in the U.S. It goes over the famous Brown v. Board of Education case, racial disparities in elementary and secondary schools, shows a table chart of the achievement gaps in those primary schools, and gives many charts on the statistics of different schooling achievements for minority students from elementary through college. 

How I used it: I used this article to provide my audience with information on the case of Brown v. Board of Education and its relevance to our reality now. I also wanted the reader to understand where racial inequalities in the school system starts and its gradual effects on minority students starting in elementary school all the way through high school and even college. I also wanted to use the charts it provides to show the reader the statistics visually. 

  1. U.S. Government Accountability Office. (2020, June 29). Racial Disparities in Education and the Role of Government. http://Www.gao.gov. https://www.gao.gov/blog/racial-disparities-education-and-role-government

Background: Lastly, this article goes over the most recent information on inequality in the education system. It talks about school discipline and also the quality and accessibility of education. 

How I used it: I used this article to help me captivate the audience on the quality of education that minority students receive in this country and the difference in quality compared to the education white students receive. I also wanted to emphasize the accessibility of education.

6. Winerman, L. (2021, October 7). For Black students, unfairly harsh discipline can lead to lower grades. Apa.org. https://www.apa.org/news/press/releases/2021/10/black-students-harsh-discipline

‌Background: This article focuses on how black students are punished harshly and unfairly. It also relates the harsh punishments to black students having lower grades and less confidence in school.

How I used it: I used this article to emphasize the unfair punishments that minority students face in school. I also used it to help emphasize my point on the fact that minority students lose interest in school partly because of these harsh punishments. I emphasized how it affects their grades and school work.

7. Wesson, S. (2022, August 16). Education in Enslaved Communities | Teaching with the Library of Congress. Blogs.loc.gov. https://blogs.loc.gov/teachers/2022/08/education-in-enslaved-communities/

‌Background: This blog educated me on the school system enslaved African American men women and children had to utilize during the times of slavery.

How I used it: This blog helped me to further prove m point that what enslaved ancestors went through, has so much to do with the world today. In this case, the struggle for education. I was able to compare times from then to now, and explain how this has affected out modern education system.

8. Smith, R. (2023, August 22). Understanding Systemic Racism in Education. Robert F. Smith. https://robertsmith.com/blog/systemic-racism-in-education/

Background: This article emphasizes and further explains everything I talk about in my research paper in a shorter fashion. It gives specific key points and goes into further detail on each point of why and how racism in the education system exists today.

How I used it: I used this by going into better and intricate detail about almost every point I made especially when it came to the history aspect of the paper.

9. Hill, J., & Baker, B. (2024, January 17). New Report Finds Most States Have Deprived Schools of Hundreds of Billions of Dollars since 2016 | American Federation of Teachers. http://Www.aft.org. https://www.aft.org/press-release/new-report-finds-most-states-have-deprived-schools-hundreds-billions-dollars-2016

‌Background: This article shows the statistics of underfunded schools in the urban communities. It shows the difference between the qualities of well funded schools and underfunded schools.

How I used it: I used this article to strengthen my emphasis that schools that are underfunded lack good quality education. It paved the way for me to show how this can affect students with their education and the quality of education they receive.

10. Heard-Garris, N., Boyd, R., Kan, K., Perez-Cardona, L., Heard, N. J., & Johnson, T. J. (2021). Structuring Poverty: How Racism Shapes Child Poverty and Child and Adolescent Health. Academic Pediatrics21(8, Supplement), S108–S116. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.acap.2021.05.026

‌Background: This website shows the specifics of how poverty is structured. It goes into detail about racism and poverty being linked together and how they affect a child and family life, specifically in urban communities.

How I used it: I used this article to show the cycle of minorities suffering from lack of resources that can diminishes their growth and chances of success as adults. I showed how the cycle starts over and over with every generation.

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