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The Hell in Healthcare

Many people see the United States as one of the most significant countries in the world. How can this be when one of the most essential systems, the healthcare system, is not the strongest it can be? Many countries worldwide have a free healthcare system that citizens can access when needed. However, that is not the case in the US. The US healthcare system causes many Americans to choose not to see a doctor due to the unreasonable cost. Many things are implemented to help Americans afford medical attention when necessary, like insurance, Medicare, and places like retail health clinics. Yet, these implementations still have many flaws that come with them. When you or someone close to you becomes sick, the first thing on everyone’s mind is to find a way to get better. However, that is not the case today, whether going to the doctor, getting rest, or just pushing through the sickness to deal with it. Many people prefer not to go to the doctor for many reasons. From the absurd amount of money, these doctors are asking for only a thirty-minute appointment to the accessibility of these doctors to the everyday person. Why should Americans have to worry about the accessibility and money troubles of the healthcare system, while many other countries have free healthcare for all citizens? This is the best option for the US to have free healthcare, but that is not the case and will most likely never be.

The corruption of the US healthcare system is due to many different factors. One is the political aspect of healthcare. To explain simply and efficiently, the government and political parties that have a say in our healthcare system are mostly money-driven. Fees are associated with everything from pharmaceutical companies to general practitioners’ offices.  The economy is considered the most important, so the healthcare system has high costs. These high costs affect ordinary Americans daily, whether through yearly doctor visits or life-threatening surgeries. The article “Examining quality and efficiency of the US healthcare system” by Kumar S, Ghildayal, N.S, and Shah, R.N states, “The US healthcare system is characterized as the world’s most expensive yet least effective compared with other nations. Growing healthcare costs have made millions of citizens vulnerable.” It can be summarized as a numbers game.  How many patients can we push through an office, and how many scripts can we write for additional costs?  The focus is not on the sick; the focus is on the deepening of the pockets of the healthcare providers. Due to the corruption of the US healthcare system from the political point of view, the costs of necessary doctor visits are being taken away from Americans. 

In comparison to other countries, we need to do better.  In the article US vs. Canadian Healthcare: What is The Difference? states, “Since 1984, the Canada Health Act (CHA) has provided all Canadians with publicly funded healthcare insurance, a program often called “single payer” because all funding and payments come from a single source: the Canadian federal government. The government distributes funds to the provinces and territories, which must each provide care and fulfill CHA requirements for its citizens. Insured health services include inpatient and outpatient hospital care; medically necessary care for maintaining health; disease prevention and the diagnosis and treatment of injuries, illnesses, and disabilities; and medically required physician services.”  Here we can see that a country can sustain and provide this service while not accruing more national debt.  Remember that the system they have created is provided through clearly stated guidelines.  Many of the Medicare costs in Canada come from collected taxes the citizens pay.  This makes sense.   The government uses the money citizens already pay to provide this service back to the public.   Ironically, most of their tax rates are similar if not the same as here in the US. The article goes on to state, “Canada’s health system works pretty well, and it is often cited as a well-functioning example of universal healthcare. But out of 11 high-income country health systems compared in a recent Commonwealth Fund study, Canadian Medicare ranked 10th overall…”  Although this is only one rank ahead of the US, the medical services provided far surpass the US.  Countries like Norway, Netherlands, and Australia rank one, two, and three.  These rankings were based on efficiency, affordability, equity, and outcomes and clearly seen that the American healthcare system falls short in all of these areas.

In understanding why these other countries see success in their healthcare, several factors are taken into consideration.  They are universal coverage and the removal of cost barriers, investment in primary care systems to ensure equitable services, reduction of administrative burdens, and investment in social services, particularly for children and working-age adults.  If our healthcare administration could adopt or replicate this model used in other countries, we could slowly change the view many have on US healthcare.  It seems easier to turn a blind eye and let people (the sick) figure it out as they go.  We, the American Government and Healthcare System, need to do better for our people. 

Many Americans are trying to find another way other than going to their primary doctor for visits, which are seen to cost more than other options that have recently been new to the US. One of these options is urgent care. Urgent care is one of the new and most popular ways Americans today save money when they are sick or need medical attention. Even though urgent care still costs more than it should or is compared to free healthcare in other countries. It is still seen as a better option for many Americans who may have little money or don’t have insurance/access to a primary doctor. Some may say these urgent cares aren’t as good as primary doctors; however, they are becoming increasingly popular. As stated in the article, “Urgent Care Utilization Skyrocketed by 1725% in Last Decade” by Thomas Beaton, “Payers spent an average of $294 for a 30-minute primary care office visit compared to the $255 amount in urgent care centers.” These high costs for a thirty-minute doctor visit are unbelievable. There isn’t much difference between urgent care and primary doctor costs. However, many Americans who go to the primary doctor are not paying the total price. They are not paying $255 for a doctor’s visit because most of these Americans have insurance that covers most of the payment for a doctor’s visit. While most Americans using urgent care do not have insurance, $294 is the best option. Without an insurance plan, this is frequently the only option. Sadly, a lot of the time, it is since many places of business do not offer packages to their employees solely because of the premium costs they are charged for the plans. It simply is not feasible for them to offer their employees a healthcare plan.

Around 15% of Americans don’t even have insurance due to its high costs and the little coverage it gives. Americans who do have insurance are forced to pay high prices since there are not many insurance companies, and because of that, these insurance companies can charge whatever they please. The article “Is our Healthcare System broken?” states, “High costs combined with high numbers of underinsured or uninsured means many people risk bankruptcy if they develop a serious illness.” The high costs of medical attention in the US can have severe and detrimental consequences that come with it.  When it is paying to put food on your table, for your family, or going to urgent care for an antibiotic, a financially struggling person would put food on their table for their families.  This shouldn’t be the case. These adverse effects on Americans can trickle down their lives, causing many different things, like debt. Unlike citizens in other countries, they have to think twice when seeking medical attention for any sickness or injury, mainly due to the financial consequences of seeking medical attention.

Another way the US healthcare system tries to help Americans afford medical attention after age sixty-five is through Medicare. Americans pay for Medicare through taxes until they are sixty-five years old, when they become eligible. Medicare provides help for over sixty million seniors or disabled Americans every day. However, even after paying for Medicare through taxes for sixty-five years, it still has many flaws that come with it. One of the significant flaws of Medicare is the added out-of-pocket expenses that Medicare does not cover. Many Americans with Medicare are retired and no longer have an income so these extra out-of-pocket expenses can cause a burden to these senior citizens. The article “What Are the Pros and Cons of Medicare?” states, “Some beneficiaries may choose to enroll in a Medicare Advantage plan because these plans must include an annual out-of-pocket spending limit. Other beneficiaries may choose instead to apply for a Medicare Supplement Insurance plan, which pays for certain out-of-pocket costs such as Medicare copays, coinsurance, deductibles, and more.” Considering what has been stated, Americans with Medicare need to pay monthly for supplemental plans that will cover the out-of-pocket costs they would have to pay otherwise if they just had Medicare. With this being said, the only pro to this kind of plan is eliminating the surprise out-of-pocket costs that come with the visits for these Americans. However, not all Americans can afford to pay extra monthly for a better insurance plan to cover the out-of-pocket expenses and are forced to pay the out-of-pocket expenses after doctor visits or medical attention. Some Americans may find that the extra plan is unnecessary due to it not constantly breaking even with the amount of money they would have to pay monthly to cover the out-of-pocket costs when they cannot predict how much they would have to spend on out-of-pocket costs.

Furthermore, the article “What Are the Pros and Cons of Medicare?” states, “While Medicare is widely accepted across the U.S., it’s not necessarily accepted by every health care provider.” Therefore, after all of the money spent towards Medicare through taxes and if the American pays an additional amount of money monthly for a supplemental plan, they can still find a disadvantage within the medicare plan of not being accepted by all healthcare providers. This often leads to switching doctors and may have additional costs for various reasons.  Accessibility to the office, relationship with a new medical staff, starting over with the process of treatment/diagnosis, etc.  All are even more difficult when you consider that, in most cases, these Americans are older and may not be as in tune with what is happening throughout the process. 

Additionally, the US healthcare system has retail clinics that can benefit many Americans, but that comes at a cost. Most Americans will go to retail health clinics for affordable prices and time efficiency. Yet, these retail healthcare clinics are only sometimes seen as providing the best care. In the article “Retail health clinics: The pros and cons,” it states, “Geriatrician Dr. Suzanne Salamon, an assistant professor at Harvard Medical School, is concerned that the details of a patient’s visit to a retail health clinic might not be sent to her. Although clinics offer this service, not everyone takes them up on it. ‘The risk with that is, scattered care from multiple places can lead to mix-ups,’ says Dr. Salamon. ‘And if people don’t bring their complete medication lists to a clinic, the clinic may prescribe something that will interact with medications they’re taking.” It has been found that these retail health clinics may not be fully treating their patients at their highest capability due to a lack of knowledge. With this occurring, patients who choose this route when seeking medical attention might worsen their health due to choosing to go to a retail health clinic compared to their primary doctor for the low cost or time efficiency of the retail health clinic. “Desperate times call for desperate measures” should not be the motto attached to US Healthcare, yet this is America’s only option in so many cases.  

Although there are many downfalls within the US healthcare system, the US government still tries to find ways to benefit Americans. One of the many ways US healthcare has done this is through urgent care, retail health clinics, and health insurance for those who can afford it. Having these clinics and insurance for the everyday American makes it much easier and less stressful for many people to stay healthy.  It also allows some to have resources when they become sick. 

Urgent care and retail health clinics have many benefits for them. From accessibility due to the many locations of both and the areas in which they are located. Many Americans find these clinics and doctors to be one of the first places they will visit for their sickness. Adversely, Medicare, as stated earlier, could be negatively affected by transportation situations alone. They also are known for their quickness and time efficiency.  Again, this in-and-out mentality could lead to misdiagnosis and further complications.  From personal experience with these places, they are sometimes not the quickest, but they serve well for small things like a cold, the flu, or minor injuries. However, how can the average American get the services they need without insurance when they are forced to go to the hospital for something more significant like a broken leg or sickness? Although there are many avenues for Americans to choose from when they become sick or injured, sometimes the hospital or calling an ambulance is the only option. The average cost of an ambulance ride in the US is around $1,000. That is for both insured and uninsured Americans. Even with insurance, many Americans find themselves only calling an ambulance if it is a life-or-death situation due to the high costs of the ambulance. Treating a severely injured or ill family member is the priority in those instances.  The after-effect of the piling of medical bills begins to happen shortly after.  It is a vicious cycle that many Americans face on a day-to-day basis.   

Taking a closer look at the breakdown of the US healthcare system, every state may vary in cost effectiveness. Again, in the article, US vs. Canadian Healthcare: What is The Difference?, it states, “ In 2023, the nation’s best state health systems were Massachusetts, Hawaii, New Hampshire, Rhode Island, and Vermont. Each of those states incorporates one or more of the Commonwealth Fund secrets to healthcare success. Arkansas, Texas, Oklahoma, West Virginia, and Mississippi were the lowest-ranking state health systems. It does matter which state you call home, but healthcare access and quality in the United States also vary greatly according to race, ethnicity, income, and level of education.”  Our inconsistencies make it that much harder for Americans to find quality healthcare in our own states.  Think about having to relocate for a job.  In your current state, you can receive adequate healthcare at a decent cost.  Moving a few states away could drastically change your cost, quality of service provided, and other incidentals you may not even be aware of at the time of relocation. This is just one of the many downfalls of the US healthcare system.

Urgent care can only provide so much for the everyday American needing a doctor’s visit. It comes down to the costs of a simple checkup compared to something more serious that costs an arm and a leg at the emergency room. This is one of the most significant downfalls in the US healthcare system. Americans without health insurance find themselves in a panic when they have a severe injury or sickness that forces them to go to the hospital or need surgery—leading some who need surgery to leave the country and seek medical services in other places.  It is sickening that a first-world country can not provide for its citizens.  Many Americans have astronomical medical bills due to the high costs of the healthcare system throughout the US. The article, “90% of Americans With Medical Debt On Their Credit Report Face Setbacks; New Rules May Help”, states, “In a survey of 1,000 American adults conducted by Tebra, a medical practice management company, 25% of respondents reported that they’d had unpaid medical bills show up on their credit reports. Of those, 91% reported having experienced financial setbacks as a result.” These medical bills are piling up on Americans who are insured and uninsured. How is this possible with all the great insurance that is supposed to be helping Americans stay healthy, yet it is causing many setbacks? It also states in the article, “…$88 billion in medical debt clogged up Americans’ credit reports, and medical debt is a top source of consumer complaints to the Consumer Financial Protection Bureau (CFPB), any relief should be welcome news to millions of Americans.”  So, we should be thankful for the 88 billion dollars of medical debt across the board for Americans. This is absurd because many other countries have free healthcare that their citizens can access anytime. And so they do not see a national debt in their countries due to healthcare. 

In conclusion, there is no perfect healthcare system.  There are flaws that are very obvious to us as Americans in, or unfortunately not privileged enough to have healthcare.  National funding and dissemination of funds need to be revamped to provide Americans with the healthcare they deserve.  Working citizens pay taxes.  Working citizens get sick.  It is the due diligence of our government to provide us with a service that rightfully deserves, considering what Americans put back into the government, both state and nationally.  I hope in time, there is a change.  As we know and many of us have witnessed, change takes time, but for the millions of people who have waited and are hopeful, this change in a positive direction is so desperately needed in the US healthcare system.

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Definition rewrite- Youngthug03

The Costs of Corruption

When you or someone close to you becomes sick, the first thing on everyone’s mind is to find a way to get better. Whether going to the doctor, getting rest, or just pushing through the sickness to deal with it, however, in today’s world, not everyone can see a doctor due to the corruptness of the US healthcare system. Many people prefer not to go to the doctor for many reasons. From the absurd amount of money these doctors are asking for, only a thirty-minute appointment, to the accessibility of these doctors to the everyday person. Why should Americans have to worry about the accessibility and money troubles of the healthcare system, while many other countries have free healthcare for all citizens? This is the best option for the US to have free healthcare, but that is not the case and will most likely never be.

It all comes down to corruption. The US healthcare system is corrupt, which causes many of these issues that cause many Americans to be at a loss. The corruption of the US healthcare system is due to many different factors. One is the political aspect of healthcare. To explain simply and efficiently, the government and political parties that have a say in our healthcare system are mostly money-driven. The economy is considered the most important, so the healthcare system has high costs. These high costs affect the ordinary American citizen every day, whether through yearly doctor visits or life-threatening surgeries. The article “Examining quality and efficiency of the US healthcare system” by Kumar S, Ghildayal, N.S, and Shah, R.N states, “The US healthcare system is characterized as the world’s most expensive yet least effective compared with other nations. Growing healthcare costs have made millions of citizens vulnerable.” Due to the corruption of the US healthcare system from the political point of view, the costs of necessary doctor visits are being taken away from Americans. 

Many Americans are trying to find another way other than going to their primary doctor for visits, which are seen to cost more than other options that have recently been new to the US. One of these options is urgent care. Urgent care is one of the new and most popular ways Americans today use to save money when they are sick or need medical attention. Even though urgent care still costs more than it should or is compared to free healthcare in other countries. It is still seen as a better option for many Americans who may have little money or don’t have insurance/access to a primary doctor. Some may say these urgent cares aren’t as good as primary doctors; however, they are becoming increasingly popular. As stated in the article, “Urgent Care Utilization Skyrocketed by 1725% in Last Decade” by Thomas Beaton, “Payers spent an average $294 for a 30-minute primary care office visit compared to the $255 amount in urgent care centers.” These high costs for a thirty-minute doctor visit are unbelievable. Yes, there isn’t much or a difference between urgent care costs and primary doctor costs. However, many Americans who go to the primary doctor are not paying the total price. They are not paying $255 for a doctor’s visit because most of these Americans have insurance that covers most of the payment for a doctor’s visit. While most Americans using urgent care do not have insurance, $294 is the best option for them. 

References 

(n.d.). Urgent Care Center Utilization Skyrocketed by 1725% in Last Decade. Healthpayerintelligence.com. https://healthpayerintelligence.com/news/urgent-care-center-utilization-skyrocketed-by-1725-in-last-decade


Kumar, S.Ghildayal, N.S. and Shah, R.N. (2011), “Examining quality and efficiency of the US healthcare system”, International Journal of Health Care Quality Assurance, Vol. 24 No. 5, pp. 366-388. https://doi.org/10.1108/09526861111139197

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Rebuttal Rewrite- Youngthug03

Money over Medical

The US healthcare system is very different from other countries. One significant difference could be cost or accessibility for citizens. The US healthcare system has been developing new ways to keep all Americans healthy and cost-efficient. One of the many ways US healthcare has done this is through urgent care, retail health clinics, health insurance for those who can afford it and through Medicare. Having these clinics and insurance for the everyday American makes it much easier and less stressful for many people to stay healthy and have many resources when they become sick. 

Urgent care and retail health clinics have many benefits for them. From accessibility due to the many locations of both and the areas in which they are located. Many Americans find these clinics and doctors to be one of the first places they will visit for their sickness. They also are known for their quickness and time efficiency. From personal experience with these places, they are sometimes not the quickest, but they serve well for small things like a cold, the flu, or minor injuries. However, how can the average American get the services they need without insurance when they are forced to go to the hospital for something more significant like a broken leg or sickness? Although there are many avenues for Americans to choose from when they become sick or injured, sometimes the hospital or calling an ambulance is the only option. The average cost of an ambulance ride in the US is around $1,000. That is for both insured and uninsured Americans. Even with insurance, many Americans find themselves only calling an ambulance if it is a life-or-death situation due to the high costs of the ambulance. 

Urgent care can only provide so much for the everyday American needing a doctor’s visit. It comes down to the costs of a simple checkup compared to something more serious that costs an arm and a leg at the ER. This is one of the most significant downfalls in the US healthcare system. Americans without health insurance find themselves in a panic when they have a severe injury or sickness that forces them to go to the hospital or need surgery. Many Americans have loads of medical bills due to the high costs of the healthcare system throughout the US. The article, “90% of Americans With Medical Debt On Their Credit Report Face Setbacks; New Rules May Help”, states, “In a survey of 1,000 American adults conducted by Tebra, a medical practice management company, 25% of respondents reported that they’d had unpaid medical bills show up on their credit reports. Of those, 91% reported having experienced financial setbacks as a result.” These medical bills are pilling up on Americans who are insured and uninsured. How is this possible with all the great insurances that are supposed to be helping Americans stay healthy, yet they are causing many of them to have set backs? It also states in the article, “…$88 billion in medical debt clogged up Americans’ credit reports and medical debt a top source of consumer complaints to the Consumer Financial Protection Burreau (CFPB), any relief should be welcome news to millions of Americans” 88 billion dollars of medical debt across the board for Americans is absurd. This is absurd because many other countries have free healthcare that their citizens can access anytime. 

Another way the US healthcare system also tries to help Americans afford medical attention after age sixty-five through Medicare. Americans pay for Medicare through taxes all their life till they are sixty-five years old when they are eligible for it. Medicare provides help for over sixty million seniors or disabled Americans every day. However, even after paying for Medicare through taxes for sixty-five years, it still has many flaws that come with it. One of the significant flaws of Medicare is the added out-of-pocket expenses that Medicare does not cover. Many Americans with Medicare are retired and no longer have an income so these extra out-of-pocket expenses can cause a burden to these senior citizens.  The article “What Are the Pros and Cons of Medicare?” states, “Some beneficiaries may choose to enroll in a Medicare Advantage plan because these plans are required to include an annual out-of-pocket spending limit. Other beneficiaries may choose instead to apply for a Medicare Supplement Insurance plan, which pays for certain out-of-pocket costs such as Medicare copays, coinsurance, deductibles, and more.” Considering what has been stated, Americans with Medicare need to pay monthly for supplemental plans that will cover the out-of-pocket costs that they would have to pay otherwise if they just had Medicare. With this being said, the only pro to this kind of plan is eliminating the surprise out-of-pocket costs that come with the visits for these Americans. However, not all Americans can afford to pay extra monthly for a better insurance plan to cover the out-of-pocket expenses and are forced to pay the out-of-pocket expenses after doctor visits or medical attention. Some Americans may find that the extra plan is unnecessary due to it not constantly breaking even with the amount of money they would have to pay monthly to cover the out-of-pocket costs when they cannot predict how much they would have to spend on out-of-pocket costs. Furthermore, the article “What Are the Pros and Cons of Medicare?” states, “While Medicare is widely accepted across the U.S., it’s not necessarily accepted by every health care provider.” Therefore, after all of the money spent towards Medicare through taxes and if the American pays an additional amount of money monthly for a supplemental plan, they can still find a disadvantage within the Medicare plan of not being accepted by all healthcare providers.

Unfortunately, not all Americans can afford health insurance, which causes these Americans to go a different route than most may go when becoming sick. The article “The Growing Epidemic of Uninsurance: New Data on the Health Insurance Coverage of Americans” states, “Since 1989, the ranks of the uninsured have swelled by 6.3 million.” 6.3 million Americans have to deal with the cost of health care due to not having insurance every day. While many insured Americans visit their primary doctor when sick, this is not true for everyone. When the cost comes into play, it can be a significant factor to consider too many. Although there seem to be many benefits to urgent care and retail health clinics, there are far too many downfalls that come with it, from the cost to the effectiveness of these types of places. The US government is doing its best to provide as many healthcare resources as possible, such as urgent care, retail health clinics, etc. it is also trying to use Medicare as a way to help senior citizens, but still comes with the many flaws. However, this can only help so much to better US healthcare overall.

References

Hellander I, Moloo J, Himmelstein DU, Woolhandler S, Wolfe SM. The Growing Epidemic of Uninsurance: New Data on the Health Insurance Coverage of Americans. International Journal of Health Services. 1995;25(3):377-392. doi:10.2190/AQTP-FLAQ-PWXN-DYMR

(2023, November 13). 90% of Americans With Medical Debt on Their Credit Report Face Setbacks. Forbes. 90% Of Americans With Medical Debt On Their Credit Report Face Setbacks (forbes.com)

(2023, October 24). Health Expenditures in the U.S. Statista. Health expenditures in the U.S. – statistics & facts | Statista

Worstell , C. (2023, October 27). What Are the Pros and Cons of Medicare? Help Advisor. https://www.helpadvisor.com/medicare/pros-and-cons-of-medicare

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Rebuttal Planefan25

Human lives are more important than money. Most would say this, but when it comes to aviation there seems to be a disconnect to the rest of society. People seem to think it’s a natural consequence of innovation. When in reality it doesn’t have to be.      

Venture capitalists are calling death a natural consequence of innovation. They compare a human life to their monetary value when discussing the risks. They say that the way the government puts value on human life is too high. Right now the value of life statistic(VSL) is $12.5 million dollars, it’s supposed to be the average amount of money an American makes in their life. The opposition claims that this is too high because as the Federal Aviation Administration calculates the possible amount of money lost if a plane crashes the number becomes extraordinarily high causing the FAA to pass regulation even if just one plane is saved.  They say this price encourages the FAA to enact laws that contain insanely hard to reach goals and that it’s halting innovation. From their perspective the risk of death isn’t worth the high cost of investing. They compare aviation regulation to the regulation controlling cars being extremely loose. 

First of all innovation doesn’t have to be deadly, at all. The Airbus A380 has the highest passenger capacity we’ve ever seen. Yet it still has no fatalities associated with it. We still haven’t been able to fully utilize the aircraft. Only major international airports with long runways and large enough fuel networks can handle it. There is no reason to develop larger aircrafts because we have a large aircraft we just don’t use it. Other areas of innovation like speed and fuel efficiency are different. But we had planes like the Concorde that ended up being phased out due to noise pollution, fuel efficiency, and costs. It had one major crash caused by debris on the runway, not even caused by mechanical failure, and it was abandoned. The article argues that we encourage manufacturers to just re-release previous versions. Yes, we do but for a good reason. We know that the fundamental mechanics of that aircraft work safely so why change it? Improving the Concorde or A380 is safer because they haven’t failed us. Starting over would only lead to more costs, testing, regulation and death. No one is arguing against improvements, we are arguing against innovation for the sake of being new, not improving.

Putting a human life to a monetary value is necessary but it shouldn’t be the only factor. Each human life is important, everybody deserves a chance to go about life without the fear of dying. While it is important when discussing the economy we can’t separate the idea that a human’s life doesn’t deserve to be cut short for innovation, especially passengers who are unaware. The consequences of valuing life lower than it already is could be detrimental to society. A person is a person with their own life experiences, family, job and goals no matter if you are in their life or not. You can’t separate that even in scenarios where logic is the main component.

Comparing aviation to cars is unfair and disrespectful, planes were developed to be amazing feats of engineering. Taking that and saying we should treat plane regulation like we treat our regulation on cars taints the reputation we have built. Firstly planes carry so many more people in one trip so when they fail it is so much more devastating. We can’t treat them like a car that only carries about 4 people. Behind the wheel you are also in control of your vehicle or you trust the person who is. But when you get on a plane you have most likely never met the pilot. Despite this you know that they have gone through years of training to be in the position they are in. There are reasons we are so strict on planes, especially commercial, we have set a safety record that people trust in. Without that trust aviation is nothing.

So no we should not encourage the government to ease up on policies slowing down innovation. There is way too much risk associated with doing so and lowering the cost of a human life to fit investors standards is dangerous. No one expects that they will be on the next plane that crashes, because it happens so little, we need to keep it that way. Opening the door for sketchy companies to make the planes we need to keep us safe is a recipe for disaster. 

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Causal Rewrite—PlaneFan25

Building the Plane while Flying

How is innovation killing us? It’s supposed to make our world better, safer and faster. Innovation protects us, in theory. But the implementation of innovation is useless unless we improve the systems we already have. It can be great but the many factors it takes for an innovation to be an improvement can easily get overlooked. Weighing the possible cost against the possible benefits we have to determine whether or not it’s worth it.

One of the biggest failures that could happen are technical malfunctions. The Boeing 737 MAX MCAS is an amazing idea on the surface but in action it caused the deaths of hundreds of people. This system was supposed to make our planes safer by preventing stalls. Instead it caused planes to nose dive due to a mechanical failure that gave a false detection of stalls to the MCAS. It stems from the Angle of Attack(AOA) sensors, which are known to frequently fail. In other control systems using the AOA sensors they compare data from all of the sensors. In the case with the 737 MAX one sensor started giving MCAS incorrect data, but the MCAS only accepted data from the active sensor. Since the MCAS couldn’t compare its input to the other sensors it was prone to failures. This was innovation without improvement, pilots can already take information from multiple sensors. But the fact pilots were so unaware of this new system they couldn’t even override it is a massive problem. They made a faulty system and then told no one. We already have amazingly safe aircrafts but major flaws like this could happen more and more if we continue to ignore past problems. These sensors were known to read incorrectly but Boeing still used them as a base for the MCAS system, when we know that good pilots can successfully take information from multiple sensors.

The 737 MAX was an extremely rushed project. It developed when Airbus, a Boeing competitor, released the A330neo. Boeing knew prolonging the project would put them far behind Airbus, so they rushed everything. Along with this the budget was tight. This is unethical due to the sheer amount of work it takes to safely produce an aircraft. Human greed has an impact on how safe our innovations are. Instead of taking the time to ensure the safety of their passengers they weighed the consequences of the possible failure to the cost of implementing the better sensor and determined it would be better to risk a crash. There was so much rush on this that the Federal Aviation Administration wrote off an important review of the aircraft. During the investigation it was discovered that the MCAS was changed to have more of an impact than previously reported. When dealing with the lives of hundreds of people we can’t overlook anything, but when major companies are presented with the decay of sales we risk it. We can’t trust in the organizations that are there to keep us safe from innovation without improvement. Until a failure like this is mended innovation should halt.

When the 737 MAX was released pilots were not properly informed of the MCAS. Whether this was due to the rushed release or Boeing just didn’t think it was important doesn’t matter. The bottom line is that a major innovation happened under the radar of pilots. We don’t have the proper systems in place to detect a major flaw like this. Pilots have an extremely stressful job but we undermine their place in the cockpit when we allow changes like this to happen.

Pilots are trained for years to prevent disasters, they have to have at least 1,500 hours flying to even be considered for commercial flight. That’s not even including flight simulator time or in class time. Even with all of these protocols most fatal plane crashes are due to pilot error. Instead of constantly releasing new systems for pilots to learn, why don’t we develop better training systems? Or put more effort into better coursework for pilots new and old? We could have the safest plane ever and still be at the will of a pilot. They will have to relearn how to control a different plane, when we could accept that as of now we are at our limit for technological advancement in the planes. If we could train the pilots more on the same aircraft that mechanically is amazing, why continue to put more stress on pilots?

All in all we are not ready for innovative improvements. We have mechanical failures, organizational failures, human failures, and protocol failures. Innovations can happen, but only if we perfect every step of the processes we have now. As of now we have a lot to work on before we can continue to advance, because we need to equally improve every component equally. Even if we had an innovation that could change the world of flying we don’t have the proper channels to make sure it can thrive in our world. So until we fix all of our current problems innovation is useless because it doesn’t have a sturdy foundation to build on.

The solution to our problem is to work on the systems we already have.

If we were to tighten the policy and processes to innovate. For example if the FAA had strict policies on not letting companies skip past certain tests this whole situation could be a lot different. But since we allowed Boeing to bypass important procedures due to a rushed release we started the path to these crashes.

Or we could incorporate them into the process of innovation more. Pilots have extremely high stakes jobs, people say pilots don’t want to be in the news because most of the time when they are it’s not good publicity. Which is extremely true, everyday they have the chance to kill hundreds of people. By letting the change of the 737 go unreported we instill a sense of uneasiness in our pilots. They were left in the dark about a life threatening change and expected to just figure it out. Our pilots shouldn’t have the responsibility of cleaning up Boeing’s mess.

Along with that we have to improve our pilot training programs. Most plane crashes are caused by pilot error. If we put more effort into our training we could possibly prevent that.

References

Author links open overlay panelBemnet Wondimagegnehu Mersha a, a, b, 10, A. M., DingS., GarrardW.L., GoupilP., LeiY., Nguyen-LeD.H., SherstinskyA., Tran-NgocH., YinS., Ababa EthiopiaA.I.B., A., AerospaceP., BengioY., BerdjagD., BruntonS.L., ChoA., ChoK., … LerroA. (2022, March 25). Data-driven model for accommodation of faulty angle of attack sensor measurements in fixed winged aircraft. Engineering Applications of Artificial Intelligence. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0952197622000744

Departmental guidance on valuation of a statistical life in economic analysis. U.S. Department of Transportation. (n.d.). https://www.transportation.gov/office-policy/transportation-policy/revised-departmental-guidance-on-valuation-of-a-statistical-life-in-economic-analysis

Gandhi, D. (2022). Gandhi DWIJ STS research paper – libraetd.lib.virginia.edu. https://libraetd.lib.virginia.edu/downloads/xk81jm308?filename=Gandhi_Dwij_STSResearchPaper.pdf

Harris, R., & Johnston , P. (2019). The Boeing 737 MAX saga: Lessons for software organizations. https://embeddedartistry.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/the-boeing-737-max-saga-lessons-for-software-organizations.pdf

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Research PlaneFan25

Building the Plane While Flying

Innovation is killing people. Even though we use the word to instill a sense of better in our world it is still killing people. We innovate things like food containers all the way to airplanes. Innovation seems so simple, most would say it means improving something but when we dig deeper innovation doesn’t mean improvement.

Anyone could put a swirly hat on the airplane’s head and a big lollipop on its wing and call that an innovation. No one has ever done that before, so it is new. Did it improve anything significant? Children might laugh at it, making the trip a little less stressful for them. But there’s a reason why no one does that. Airplanes are shaped meticulously to not disrupt the many systems keeping it in the air.

True innovation in aviation starts with the Wright brothers, the two men credited with building and flying the first motor airplane. This event paved the road to understanding when innovation is improvement. From then on it became a balancing act of gain versus safety. Their aircraft could not handle heavy loads, high speed, and high altitude so the following innovations had a high gain and a big improvement of safety. World War One pushed for major innovative improvements in airplanes to handle high speeds and a tougher exterior. While they were still basic machines they had sturdy frames and sheet metal encapsulating the pilot. These innovations were needed as they improved the aircrafts safety and functionality.

Post World War One innovation in aviation focused more on public programs, like mail planes. During these mail plane trips they discovered the profit that could be made with carrying passengers. This led to the industry to focus on the improvement of the plane ride for commercial passengers. 

Once World War Two hit, our planes were turning away from the bi-plane silhouette. We saw large monoplanes develop, they were able to carry heavy loads of people and goods. After this, airplanes became the machines we know today. 

But when do our innovations stop being improvements? All of our modern commercial airplanes have amazing safety records. If we keep innovating at this rate that could change.

The Boeing 737 MAX, which included a Maneuvering Characteristics Augmentation System(MCAS) the pilots were unaware of. The new MCAS was supposed to prevent stalls by pushing the nose of the plane down. Which sounds amazing in theory but the system would detect stalls in moments where there wasn’t a stall present. When pilots would try to fix this by pointing the nose upwards the system would override their input. This resulted in two fatal crashes. Part of the issue is that pilots were not properly informed of the MCAS being implemented. But even with this information Boeing tried to innovate but they didn’t improve. 

So to prevent future crashes we have to determine whether an innovation is an improvement or not. An improvement should be making a plane safer or more efficient. The Boeing 737 MAX MCAS tried to make planes safer but there was a fundamental flaw in their technology. These events showed that pilots can prevent stalls by themselves. If the MCAS wasn’t there or was able to be overridden the pilots could have been able to prevent the crashes.

In the future if we keep innovating but not improving we could see more large fatal crashes. As of right now we have planes that can hold 500 people and ones that can get across oceans in a reasonable amount of time. We shouldn’t put ourselves in danger just to be more automated. Pilots have training to collect all known information and spit out a solution. Computers just aren’t good enough to do what humans can do. Striving to be faster and automated will result in unnecessary suffering.

How is innovation killing us? It’s supposed to make our world better, safer and faster. Innovation protects us, in theory. But the implementation of innovation is useless unless we improve the systems we already have. It can be great but the many factors it takes for an innovation to be an improvement can easily get overlooked. Weighing the possible cost against the possible benefits we have to determine whether or not it’s worth it.

One of the biggest failures that could happen are technical malfunctions. The Boeing 737 MAX MCAS is an amazing idea on the surface but in action it caused the deaths of hundreds of people. This system was supposed to make our planes safer by preventing stalls. Instead it caused planes to nose dive due to a mechanical failure that gave a false detection of stalls to the MCAS. It stems from the Angle of Attack(AOA) sensors, which are known to frequently fail. In other control systems using the AOA sensors they compare data from all of the sensors. In the case with the 737 MAX one sensor started giving MCAS incorrect data, but the MCAS only accepted data from the active sensor. Since the MCAS couldn’t compare its input to the other sensors it was prone to failures. This was innovation without improvement, pilots can already take information from multiple sensors. But the fact pilots were so unaware of this new system they couldn’t even override it is a massive problem. They made a faulty system and then told no one. We already have amazingly safe aircrafts but major flaws like this could happen more and more if we continue to ignore past problems. These sensors were known to read incorrectly but Boeing still used them as a base for the MCAS system, when we know that good pilots can successfully take information from multiple sensors.

The 737 MAX was an extremely rushed project. It developed when Airbus, a Boeing competitor, released the A330neo. Boeing knew prolonging the project would put them far behind Airbus, so they rushed everything. Along with this the budget was tight. This is unethical due to the sheer amount of work it takes to safely produce an aircraft. Human greed has an impact on how safe our innovations are. Instead of taking the time to ensure the safety of their passengers they weighed the consequences of the possible failure to the cost of implementing the better sensor and determined it would be better to risk a crash. There was so much rush on this that the Federal Aviation Administration wrote off an important review of the aircraft. During the investigation it was discovered that the MCAS was changed to have more of an impact than previously reported. When dealing with the lives of hundreds of people we can’t overlook anything, but when major companies are presented with the decay of sales we risk it. We can’t trust in the organizations that are there to keep us safe from innovation without improvement. Until a failure like this is mended innovation should halt.

When the 737 MAX was released pilots were not properly informed of the MCAS. Whether this was due to the rushed release or Boeing just didn’t think it was important doesn’t matter. The bottom line is that a major innovation happened under the radar of pilots. We don’t have the proper systems in place to detect a major flaw like this. Pilots have an extremely stressful job but we undermine their place in the cockpit when we allow changes like this to happen.

Pilots are trained for years to prevent disasters, they have to have at least 1,500 hours flying to even be considered for commercial flight. That’s not even including flight simulator time or in class time. Even with all of these protocols most fatal plane crashes are due to pilot error. Instead of constantly releasing new systems for pilots to learn, why don’t we develop better training systems? Or put more effort into better coursework for pilots new and old? We could have the safest plane ever and still be at the will of a pilot. They will have to relearn how to control a different plane, when we could accept that as of now we are at our limit for technological advancement in the planes. If we could train the pilots more on the same aircraft that mechanically is amazing, why continue to put more stress on pilots?

All in all we are not ready for innovative improvements. We have mechanical failures, organizational failures, human failures, and protocol failures. Innovations can happen, but only if we perfect every step of the processes we have now. As of now we have a lot to work on before we can continue to advance, because we need to equally improve every component equally. Even if we had an innovation that could change the world of flying we don’t have the proper channels to make sure it can thrive in our world. So until we fix all of our current problems innovation is useless because it doesn’t have a sturdy foundation to build on.

The solution to our problem is to work on the systems we already have.

If we were to tighten the policy and processes to innovate. For example if the FAA had strict policies on not letting companies skip past certain tests this whole situation could be a lot different. But since we allowed Boeing to bypass important procedures due to a rushed release we started the path to these crashes.

Or we could incorporate them into the process of innovation more. Pilots have extremely high stakes jobs, people say pilots don’t want to be in the news because most of the time when they are it’s not good publicity. Which is extremely true, everyday they have the chance to kill hundreds of people. By letting the change of the 737 go unreported we instill a sense of uneasiness in our pilots. They were left in the dark about a life threatening change and expected to just figure it out. Our pilots shouldn’t have the responsibility of cleaning up Boeing’s mess.

Along with that we have to improve our pilot training programs. Most plane crashes are caused by pilot error. If we put more effort into our training we could possibly prevent that.

Human lives are more important than money. Most would say this, but when it comes to aviation there seems to be a disconnect to the rest of society. It takes a lot of money to build a plane that meets our expectations, a plane that blows us out of this world is going to be costly to the extreme. People seem to think death is a natural consequence of innovation. When in reality it doesn’t have to be if planes are built to either reach     

Venture capitalists are calling death a natural consequence of innovation. They compare a human life to their monetary value when discussing the risks. They say that the way the government puts value on human life is too high. Right now the value of life statistic(VSL) is $12.5 million dollars, it’s supposed to be the average amount of money an American makes in their life. The opposition claims that this is too high because as the Federal Aviation Administration calculates the possible amount of money lost if a plane crashes the number becomes extraordinarily high causing the FAA to pass regulation even if just one plane is saved.  They say this price encourages the FAA to enact laws that contain insanely hard to reach goals and that it’s halting innovation. From their perspective the risk of death isn’t worth the high cost of investing. They compare aviation regulation to the regulation controlling cars being extremely loose. 

First of all innovation doesn’t have to be deadly, at all. The Airbus A380 has the highest passenger capacity we’ve ever seen. Yet it still has no fatalities associated with it. We still haven’t been able to fully utilize the aircraft. Only major international airports with long runways and large enough fuel networks can handle it. There is no reason to develop larger aircrafts because we have a large aircraft we just don’t use it. Other areas of innovation like speed and fuel efficiency are different. But we had planes like the Concorde that ended up being phased out due to noise pollution, fuel efficiency, and costs. It had one major crash caused by debris on the runway, not even caused by mechanical failure, and it was abandoned. The article argues that we encourage manufacturers to just re-release previous versions. Yes, we do but for a good reason. We know that the fundamental mechanics of that aircraft work safely so why change it? Improving the Concorde or A380 is safer because they haven’t failed us. Starting over would only lead to more costs, testing, regulation and death. No one is arguing against improvements, we are arguing against innovation for the sake of being new, not improving.

Putting a human life to a monetary value is necessary but it shouldn’t be the only factor. Each human life is important, everybody deserves a chance to go about life without the fear of dying. While it is important when discussing the economy we can’t separate the idea that a human’s life doesn’t deserve to be cut short for innovation, especially passengers who are unaware. We live in a world run by money and we are building machines that take a lot of labor. The expectation that it will be easy or cheap is unrealistic. Lowering expectations isn’t going to make building good planes easier, it’s going to make building bad planes easier. The consequences of valuing life lower than it already is could be detrimental to society. A person is a person with their own life experiences, family, job and goals no matter if you are in their life or not. We can’t separate that even in scenarios where logic is the main component.

Comparing aviation to cars is unfair and disrespectful, planes were developed to be amazing feats of engineering. Taking that and saying we should treat plane regulation like we treat our regulation on cars taints the reputation we have built. We have idolized airplanes as a society for years, when the Boeing 747 was first released in the 1970s she was crowned “The Queen of the Skies.” Seeing a 747 was a major event, she sparked a joy in people with her size and luxurious design. Airplanes aren’t supposed to be mediocre, they have to symbolize the hard work put into creating them. 

Our safety record with aviation is one to uphold. Planes carry so many more people in one trip so when they fail it is so much more devastating. We can’t treat them like a car that only carries about four people. Behind the wheel you are also in control of your vehicle or you trust the person who is. But when you get on a plane you have never met the pilot. Despite this you know that they have gone through years of training to be in the position they are in. Almost anyone could go out and drive a car. Most people could easily get a license. Even if you are the best driver there is still an enormous chance you could be in a car accident. We have reasons to be so strict on planes, especially commercial, we have set a safety record that people trust in. Without that trust commercial aviation is nothing.

So no we should not encourage the government to ease up on policies slowing down innovation. There is way too much risk associated with doing so and lowering the cost of a human life to fit investors standards is dangerous. No one expects that they will be on the next plane that crashes, because it happens so little, we need to keep it that way. Opening the door for sketchy companies to make the planes we need to keep us safe is a recipe for disaster.         

Innovation is beautiful when done properly it changes the world. It is extremely counter intuitive to slow innovation because it’s important, but only when it’s a true improvement. As of now we haven’t improved the simple technologies and behaviors that make innovation possible. Eventually we will reach a point where our pilots have more training, our policy is enforced and our current technology is fixed but those things have to happen for any innovation to be an improvement.

References

Boeing History . Boeing. (n.d.). https://www.boeing.com/history

Konz, C., Happel, C. C., Turano, D., Daniel, G., Bigger, M., Design), O. R. (Cover, & Leishman, J. G. (2023, January 1). History of aircraft & aviation. Introduction to Aerospace Flight Vehicles. https://eaglepubs.erau.edu/introductiontoaerospaceflightvehicles/chapter/history-of-aircraft-and-aviation/

Accident location. DCA09MA027.aspx. (n.d.). https://www.ntsb.gov/investigations/Pages/DCA09MA027.aspx

Author links open overlay panelBemnet Wondimagegnehu Mersha a, a, b, 10, A. M., DingS., GarrardW.L., GoupilP., LeiY., Nguyen-LeD.H., SherstinskyA., Tran-NgocH., YinS., Ababa EthiopiaA.I.B., A., AerospaceP., BengioY., BerdjagD., BruntonS.L., ChoA., ChoK., … LerroA. (2022, March 25). Data-driven model for accommodation of faulty angle of attack sensor measurements in fixed winged aircraft. Engineering Applications of Artificial Intelligence. https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0952197622000744

Departmental guidance on valuation of a statistical life in economic analysis. U.S. Department of Transportation. (n.d.). https://www.transportation.gov/office-policy/transportation-policy/revised-departmental-guidance-on-valuation-of-a-statistical-life-in-economic-analysis

Gandhi, D. (2022). Gandhi DWIJ STS research paper – libraetd.lib.virginia.edu. https://libraetd.lib.virginia.edu/downloads/xk81jm308?filename=Gandhi_Dwij_STSResearchPaper.pdf

Harris, R., & Johnston , P. (2019). The Boeing 737 MAX saga: Lessons for software organizations. https://embeddedartistry.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/the-boeing-737-max-saga-lessons-for-software-organizations.pdf

Jakub Goldschmidt, & Branislav Kandera. (n.d.). Influence of stress on the performance of pilots in training. https://drepo.uniza.sk/bitstream/handle/hdluniza/786/2022_Ing_v2-22-29.pdf?sequence=1

MAKÓ, S., PILÁT, M., ŠVÁB, P., ČIČVÁKOVÁ, M., & KOZUBA, J. (2020). Evaluation of MCAS system . https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Sebastian-Mako/publication/343474935_Evaluation_of_MCAS_System/links/5f4f6f84299bf13a31972530/Evaluation-of-MCAS-System.pdf

Miller, J. (2023, October 10). Are commercial plane crashes common? the irrational has the answers. NBC Insider Official Site. https://www.nbc.com/nbc-insider/how-common-are-commercial-plane-crashes-the-irrational#:~:text=Studies%20show%20pilot%20error%20(thhttps://www.nbc.com/nbc-insider/how-common-are-commercial-plane-crashes-the-irrational#:~:text=Studies%20show%20pilot%20error%20(though,due%20to%20the%20plane’s%20mechanics.ough,due%20to%20the%20plane’s%20mechanics.

Rigner, J. (2020). Adapting to increased automation in the aviation industry through performance measurement and training . https://www.diva-portal.org/smash/get/diva2:1501686/FULLTEXT01.pdf

Safety Versus Innovation: It’s time for a rebalancing. Aerospace America. (2023, June 27). https://aerospaceamerica.aiaa.org/departments/safety-versus-innovation-its-time-for-a-rebalancing/

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Causal Rewrite – TheFrogSprog

Video Games: The Sharpshooters of Mental Health

People with poor mental health often gravitate to things that they find to relieve stress. However, this is not the only mental state which people gravitate towards the things they enjoy. Researchers Yemaya Halbrook, Aisling O’Donnell, and Rachel Msetfi discuss the positive findings that video games have in their study “When and How Video Games Can Be Good: A Review of the Positive Effects of Video Games on Well-Being,” and they make the connection that different factors of play have various effects on mental well being. This means that those who play for fun and entertainment have a greater possibility of having a healthier mindset versus those who play for obsession or accolades. As stated in the study, “‘In addition, the motivations behind game play are an important factor in the effects of gaming on well-being, such as playing for enjoyment purposes rather than playing for achievement or obsession.’”  There is a fine line between playing for sport and obsession. “For sport” implies that one only indulges periodically, while obsession implies that one continuously and obsessively barrels through the hobby. This compulsive obsession is a definite effect of different mental disabilities.

The study “The Impact of Video Games on the Players Behaviors: A Survey” by researchers Muhannad Quwaider, Abdullah Alabed, and Rehab Duwairi delves into the cause and effect nature that video games have on players in terms of aggression and other mental disabilities. The answer “that comes through playing a specific video game varies from player to player depending on how the content of the video game is displayed and interpreted to the player’s mind.” Content in video games varies wildly, and some people are affected by levels of aggression in games at intervals, especially those with fragile mindsets. It is not much of a stretch to assume that people who play aggressive games might cause some violence, but it is not the violent games that cause aggression. It is the aggressive nature of the person. Personality plays a huge factor in how people are affected by outside stimuli (video games). This means that those with compromised mental states are affected more so by the games that they engage in. Quwaider and his fellow researchers state: “The personality of the player or any other person has a strong influence on how they think and behave under a certain condition.” Effectively, this statement shows that those with aggressive tendencies are affected by the video games that they play, and this can further the fact that those who are mentally unstable will do horrific acts.

Another study I would like to highlight titled “Gaming Your Mental Health: A Narrative Review on Mitigating Symptoms of Depression and Anxiety Using Commercial Video Games” by Magdelena Kowai, Eoin Conroy, and four other contributors. In “Gaming Your Mental Health,” the therapeutic properties of certain games are researched and expanded upon. Kowai and the others discuss how particular genres can be great for helping ease depression, specifically multiplayer role player games (RPGs). The researchers of “Gaming Your Mental Health” state, “An array of research alludes to the possible benefits of RPGs for individuals with depression,” as these multiplayer games are great ways to meet and interact with others in a sporty fashion. Whether it be through a sort of online e-commerce or even competition, there are clear benefits. Healthy people have healthy interactions, whereas depressed individuals are violent not due to their mental state but due to other preexisting types of disorders or illnesses. 

The final study I would like to bring to light is “Understanding the Lives of Problem Gamers: The Meaning, Purpose, and Influences of Video Gaming” by Jing Shi, Rebecca Renwick, Nigel Turner, and Bonnie Kirsh. The negative repercussions of using video games as a coping mechanism, highlighted in the study, are what I would like to talk about in particular. Using video games as one’s only coping mechanism is not a healthy process, especially when one already has present issues. Shi and the other researchers state, “Participants acknowledged that using games as a coping method only offered temporary relief from their negative emotions and did not address the problems they were facing.” If someone of a mentally unsound mind uses video games as their sole coping mechanism, then they will only exacerbate their issues, potentially leading to aggressive and violent actions. Shi and Co. then go on to explain how problems with gaming can cause a variety of psychological issues. In the text “Understanding the Loves of Problem Gamers,” Problem gaming was defined as “persistent and recurrent involvement in video gaming that results in psychological distress and functional impairment.” Unhealthy play can cause an exponential increase in distress, and this further leads to my finding that people with a high propensity towards mental issues are influenced negatively by play and the external stimuli that they receive. 

Ultimately, video games are a great way to spend time and interact with a wide variety of people around the world. The facilitation of these interactions has been through decades of online social culture and interaction, and the vast culture of each game world can be very different. No matter the background, people can and will have fun just by playing. However, this is not always a good thing, as those with mental issues can be negatively affected by the violence in the media that they consume. In all four studies, the reader can see a clear correlation between mental health and the consumerism of different video games. However, a correlation does not necessarily mean a causation. Games are something that usually gets negative press in the news due to the interactive aspect that they possess. Aggressive and violent tendencies are something functioning members of society do not pick up from video games. Those very few people with abnormal mental facilities are the ones who ever so rarely commit horrendous atrocities. Video games may exacerbate a person’s preexisting abnormal mental state, but even then, it is rare that video games are the sole reason for aggression. 

References

Halbrook, Y. J., O’Donnell, A. T., & Msetfi, R. M. (2019). When and How Video Games Can Be Good: A Review of the Positive Effects of Video Games on Well-Being. Perspectives on Psychological Science, 14(6), 1096-1104. https://doi-org.ezproxy.rowan.edu/10.1177/1745691619863807

Jing Shi, Rebecca Renwick, Nigel E. Turner, Bonnie Kirsh,

Understanding the lives of problem gamers: The meaning, purpose, and influences of video gaming, Computers in Human Behavior, Volume 97, 2019, Pages 291-303,

ISSN 0747-5632, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb.2019.03.023

Kowal M, Conroy E, Ramsbottom N, Smithies T, Toth A, Campbell M

Gaming Your Mental Health: A Narrative Review on Mitigating Symptoms of Depression and Anxiety Using Commercial Video Games, https://games.jmir.org/2021/2/e26575

Muhannad Quwaider, Abdullah Alabed, Rehab Duwairi, The Impact of Video Games on the Players Behaviors: A Survey, Procedia Computer Science, Volume 151, 2019, Pages 575-582,

ISSN 1877-0509, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.procs.2019.04.077

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Research – jreggie20

The concept of exercising is good for your overall health and physical fitness. It could help prevent health conditions as in heart disease, obesity and organ failure. Without the use of physical activity, it could be harmful to your life and could cause conditions that could affect you in the long run. Terminal illnesses as in heart disease, kidney failure, obesity and many other life-threatening conditions. The word “Exercising” refers to the act of engaging in physical activity to sustain or improve health and fitness. It involves using or applying your body muscles, or mental faculties. The word exercise comes from the Latin word “exercitium” which means “training, physical activity”.

The concept of exercising can be displayed in many different ways, but all have benefits on one’s health. Exercising is a form of physical activity that could help prevent medical conditions like diabetes, obesity, heart disease etc. Heart disease is rapidly increasing in America along with obesity due to fast food, less food being marketed, and individuals lacking physical activity. In the book “Braddom’s Physical Medicine and Rehabilitation (Sixth Edition)” by authors David Hryvniak, Robert P. Wilder, Jeffrey Jenkins, Siobhan M. Statuta in the 15th chapter it states that Physical activity and cardiovascular fitness are two known factors for long-term health and longevity. Everyday activity is most important for health and well-being. Also discusses how exercise must be carefully prescribed based on prior fitness levels and past medical history. A check up with a doctor before doing any exercise is a crucial part in beginning your health improvement journey.

Dieting is also an important component that goes along exercise and weight loss. While on a weight loss journey, dieting and nutrition are important because it could help with seeing and feeling results. In the article “More Foot, Less Fork: Unraveling the What, Why, and How of Increasing Physical Activity in Patients” by Grasso, Alessandra C. MSPH; McDermott, Ann Yelmokas PhD, MS, LDN it states that Poor dieting and inactivity can cause life altering diseases such as heart disease, obesity, depression etc. Nutrition and health professionals can play an important role in physical activity by giving their clients with counseling and plans to help them. “Nutrition and health professionals can play an important role in this growing movement of increasing PA by documenting PA assessment, incorporating PA in patient counseling, prescribing tailored exercise prescriptions, and including resource referrals at each clinical visit.”. This can be very important for an individual that wants to better themselves but doesn’t know exactly how to start.

The thesis and the definition complement each other in the way that exercising is good for overall health. This essay discusses how engaging in regular physical activity, or exercising, can help prevent harmful medical conditions such as heart disease and even depression. The argument defines the term “exercising” as any bodily movement that enhances or maintains one’s health and fitness. It also explains what benefits exercising can offer to those who participate in it, such as improving their mood, energy, immunity, and longevity.

Aerobic Exercising as in full body movements for a long duration is good for your circulatory system.

Excersicing has many different variations of movements and doesn’t just fall into one category. It has many branches that includes weightlifting, endurance training, resistance training etc. One particular branch of exercise is Aerobic training. Aerobic training speeds up your heart rate and breathing and requires oxygen. It is important for many body functions and can improve cardiovascular health. It includes using your entire body without weight, instead using your body as the weight. This type of exercise doesn’t only target one specific muscle group but instead involves the entire body. It helps with improving your cardiovascular system. In the article “High-Intensity Aerobic Exercise Training Improves the Heart in Health and Disease” by the authors Kemi, Ole Johan PhD; Wisløff, Ulrik PhD states that the most recent studies in patients with established heart disease suggest that a high relative, yet aerobic, intensity of the exercise training improves the intrinsic pump capacity of the myocardium, an effect not previously believed to occur with exercise training. Meaning that aerobic exercise has many benefits with keeping your heart beating healthily.

Aerobic exercise helps get rid of unwanted abdominal fat.

One place that most people hate having fat is in the abdominal region. It is more difficult to target fat loss in one specific area without losing it all over the body at once. In the article “Abdominal fat reducing outcome of exercise training: fat burning or hydrocarbon source redistribution?” the authors Chia-Hua Kuo and M. Brennan Harris state that “fat burning, defined by fatty acid oxidation into carbon dioxide, is the most described hypothesis to explain the actual abdominal fat reducing outcome of exercise training. This hypothesis is strengthened by evidence of increased whole-body lipolysis during exercise. As a result, aerobic training is widely recommended for obesity management.” Aerobic exercises help in working out the entire body and raising your heart rate to burn fat from everywhere it also helps with obesity management. Athletes believe it or not do a lot of aerobic exercise as in running, jumping jacks and whatever else their coach decides to put them through. In the article named before it states that “significant body fat reduction in athletes occurs when oxygen supply decreases to inhibit fat burning during altitude-induced hypoxia exposure at the same training volume.”. The less oxygen intake, the more the body uses the fat for energy. “Lack of oxygen increases post-meal blood distribution to human skeletal muscle, suggesting that shifting the postprandial hydrocarbons towards skeletal muscle away from adipose tissue might be more important than fat burning in decreasing abdominal fat.” It all comes down to a science when it comes to burning fat while doing aerobic exercises and how one utilizes that information.

Aerobic exercise can have psychological benefits such as helping with depression.

Aerobic training already has its health benefits, improving your cardiovascular system but it also could benefit psychologically as in helping with depression. Depression affects people in many different ways. One way is with being overweight. It’s a mental concept that individuals feel like their body is not as desirable as they want it to be or what they think others prefer them as. It also could help with doing more activities with other people could create bonds. With losing weight while doing aerobic training was said could help people get the body they want as well. In the article “Long-Term Effects of Aerobic Exercise on Psychological Outcomes” states ” Following completion of a 12-week aerobic fitness program (and through 12 months of follow-up), 82 adult participants completed the Beck Depression Inventory, Profile of Mood States, State-Trait Anxiety Inventory, and the Tennessee Self-Concept Scale.” 82 adult participants went through a 12-month aerobic program, and we observed to see if the exercises were helping. “Exercise participants experienced a positive fitness change and psychological improvement over the initial 12-week program compared to a control group. At 1 year follow-up, physiological and psychological benefits remained significantly improved from baseline.” The program had positive results on training with individuals that have a form of depression that improved over time. Aerobic exercise can change people’s lives and could possible save them as well.

Calisthenics is the best form of Aerobic training.

A great example of Aerobic exercise is calisthenics which is gymnastic exercises to achieve bodily fitness and grace of movement. Full body exercises that speed up the heart rate is good for your raspatory system because it builds up your endurance. With using your body as the main weight to your exercise you can target more than one area on your body. In the article “CALISTHENICS EXERCISES TO INTERVENE IN OBESITY AND DIABETES IN MIDDLE-AGED PEOPLE” by authors Ningning Kong, Guantong Yang, Lixia Wang, Yang Li, it states “Select 86 T2DM patients as experimental subjects from a health checkup in a certain community, the selection criteria are: Age ≥50 years”. The article states “Sort by BMI, the above 86 subjects were randomly divided into two groups: Exercise group and control group, there were 43 cases in each group. There was no statistical difference in gender, age, BMI, etc. between the two groups”. An experiment was conducted on 86 obese patients to see if aerobic calisthenics would lower the risk of overweight medical conditions. They were split into two groups. The method to declare if this hypothesis could be correct was that a 16-week exercise intervention that the patients performed. The authors explains that ” The exercise intervention lasted for 16 weeks, with sessions held 3-5 times per week, varying from 60 to 90 minutes per session.”. “The PASA aerobic exercise performed in this study has a significant impact in reducing the amount of visceral fat in middle-aged and elderly obese patients; at the same time, it also shows that the payment of aerobic exercise can reduce blood sugar, insulin and insulin resistance index. Relieve the high blood sugar of the body, reduce insulin resistance, and enhance the sensitivity of tissue cells on insulin.”. The results of this experiment made a great point proving that aerobic exercise performed by obese patients had a significant effect on reducing blood sugar which contributes an important role in obesity.

A very good exercise that falls into the aerobic category is swimming. Swimming is an aquatic sequence that utilize all muscle groups all at once. It takes a lot of strength and concertation to not drown. According to the CDC, swimming can help you get regular aerobic physical activity, which can reduce the risk of chronic illnesses, improve your cardiovascular system, and lower stress levels. Swimming can also increase strength, endurance, and flexibility by working your major muscle groups in water. It can be aerobic or either anerobic depending on the intensity and duration of the exercise. Swimming is a good aerobic exercise because it can help your burn calories, lower blood pressure, improve your lung function and a boost of blood. Swimming is a low impact exercise that can be done by people of all ages and fitness levels, as it does not put so much stress on your joints, bones, and muscle. Swimming is a fun and enjoyable way to stay fit and healthy and you can do it in different styles, such as backstroke, breath stroke, or butterfly.

Aerobic training is putting your body through tough exercise without the use of weights. It has many benefits for one’s health, but could that actually be proven? Aerobic training can also have negative effects that could damage individuals in many ways without even knowing. Unknowingly people could injure themselves or even get a health condition while doing any type of aerobic training without proper research. You could possibly put yourself in a worse position than what you started as. It can come down to not doing enough research on the exercise or your body.

The issue is not only what type of aerobic exercise can cause harm to the body but how long a person does it for. In the article “Bad Exercise” by author Stan Reents and PharmD has multiple headers on bad exercise but one of them is named “Bad Aerobic Exercise”. This section of the article has examples of bad aerobic exercise and what could happen if someone does it incorrectly. One of the examples is what effects it has on the heart. It states that “Recently, it has been suggested that long-term excessive endurance exercise can lead to myocardial fibrosis, coronary artery calcification, and malfunction of the contracting action of the heart (O’Keefe JH, et al. 2012).” This means that a long period of aerobic/endurance training could cause heart problems like myocardial fibrosis and coronary artery calcification which both doesn’t sound great. Another example under the “Bad Aerobic Exercise” header is “Effects on the Endocrine System”. It discusses ” When young female athletes lose enough weight and body fat so that their normal menstrual cycle is disrupted (amenorrhea), they are at risk of a decline in bone density. This is known as “female athlete triad” (Torstveit MK, et al. 2005).”. What the quote from the article is explaining is when younger women loose enough weight and body fat it could have negative effects on their menstrual cycle and bone density.

Aerobic exercise is very straining on the body and at the end of it you could feel very exhausted. Who would want to be sweaty and fatigue. High intensity exercise could also change the mood and physical state of the one doing it. In the article “Acute Effects of Aerobic Exercise on Mood.” explains an experiment of 32 female medical students ages 18-23 completed 2 8-min trials of high-intensity exercise and 2 8-min trials of low-intensity exercise. One high and low were accompanied with music, the other 2 trials were accompanied by metronome. They were split into two groups based on their heart rates. Their mood was analyzed before and after the experiment. It states that “High-intensity exercise led to increases in tension/anxiety and fatigue, whereas positive mood changes (vigor and exhilaration) were seen following low-intensity exercise only.” meaning that the women that were in the high aerobic exercise were more fatigue and tired but for those that were doing low intensity were in a positive mood. Aerobic training could change your mood depending on how you’re doing it.

No one likes muscle pains and tries their best to avoid them, but aerobic exercise could put more strain on the body than expected. Individuals with sore joints may find it difficult to preform aerobic training because it causes to much stress on the joints. “8 Pros and Cons of Aerobic Exercise” it discusses that “People who have sore joints, arthritis, or trauma due to past injury will struggle to do a lot of the available aerobic exercises that are available today. Someone with painful knee joints, for example, may be limited to using an elliptical machine or a bicycle for their aerobic exercise. Others may be forced to exercise within the confines of a swimming pool. Because it is so hard on the joints”. This means that people who have arthritis or past injure trauma can injure themselves more due to aerobic exercise. It could even cause more injury to the body due to past occurrences. Too much of it will have someone with arthritis having unimaginable pain the next day.

There isn’t weight training involved with aerobic training. If you are looking for a toned up muscular physic, then aerobic training is not for you. It helps with loosing fat and slimming down but not at all with muscle growth. In the article “8 Pros and Cons of Aerobic Exercise” it mentions that “it is an effective way to slim down or lose weight, but it isn’t an effective way to build muscle. If that’s what your main fitness goal happens to be, then aerobic exercise can build up your stamina, but that’s about it.”. This is discussing that muscle growth does not play a role in aerobic exercise because it does not include heavy weights but does improve stamina.

Too much of one thing could be bad for you. That is the same with too much aerobic exercise. An abundance of aerobic exercise can have negative effects on the heart. The training requires your entire body moving. It involves raising body temperature and more oxygen being released than receiving. People with heart problems while doing aerobic training could be at high risk of an heart attack. While doing the training it speeds up your heart rate and increases blood flow, but some individuals can not handle that kind of strain. In the article “Positive and Negative Effects of Exercise” by Henry Halse, CSCS, CPT it states “The most extreme case is sudden cardiac death in athletes, where a seemingly healthy person suffers a ​heart attack​ during a sporting event or workout.” This means that a person could undergo a sudden cardiac arrest putting their lives in danger.

Too much strain on the human body can be harmful to your entire body. Aerobic exercise involves whole body movement in a fast paste, heart racing environment that gets your body temperature up. Going over your limit in doing an exercise could be as much as dangerous as any other medical condition. Aerobic training for everyday of the week without a rest could have you tired, fatigue and lead to tears that you are unaware to detect. As much as a heavy weight falling on your foot during weight training, heart overload in aerobic training is much as serious because it is possible to go through cardiac arrest.

Before considering doing high intensity aerobic exercise, you should consider consulting with your doctor. Also doing research on your own can be beneficial. Aerobic exercise can have as much negative affects as benefits such as heart problems like myocardial fibrosis and coronary artery calcification. It can alter your mood and cause fatigue. Have a personalized routine that is good for you. Learn if you have any conditions that may be life altering if doing aerobic training. Its meant to help improve your health but if done the wrong way could be detrimental.

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https://doi.org/10.1006/pmed.1998.0385Long-Term Effects of Aerobic Exercise on Psychological Outcomes” Authors: Thomas M. DiLorenzo a1, Eric P. Bargman a2, Renée Stucky-Ropp a3, Glenn S. Brassington a, Peter A. Frensch a4, Thomas LaFontaine b ; January 1999

https://doi.org/10.1139/cjpp-2015-0425Abdominal fat reducing outcome of exercise training: fat burning or hydrocarbon source redistribution?” Authors:  Chia-Hua Kuo kch@utaipei.edu.tw and M. Brennan Harris ; 5 March 2016

https://journals.lww.com/jcrjournal/abstract/2010/01000/high_intensity_aerobic_exercise_training_improves.2.aspxHigh-Intensity Aerobic Exercise Training Improves the Heart in Health and Disease” Authors: Kemi, Ole Johan PhD; Wisløff, Ulrik PhD ;

Braddom’s Physical Medicine and Rehabilitation (Sixth Edition)“- Authors:David Hryvniak, Robert P. Wilder, Jeffrey Jenkins, Siobhan M. Statuta 2021

“More Foot, Less Fork:Unraveling the What, Why, and How of Increasing Physical Activity in Patients”-Authors: Chia-Hua Kuo kch@utaipei.edu.tw and M. Brennan Harris 5 March 2016

Definition Structure Inspiration: Definition Argument – maxxpayne October 23,2023

“Positive and Negative Effects of working out” By Henry Halse, CSCS, CPT Updated Jun 24, 2019 https://www.livestrong.com/article/459374-positive-negative-effects-of-exercise/

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Visual Rewrite- K3vin James

Ad council – Love, Your Mind

.01 – A man sitting in what appears to be a sunroom, clasping his hands as if he is praying or pondering a thought, his gaze is staring out the window. The lighting outside appears to be possibly midday and the room is fairly dark with shadows and little light through the window.

.02-.05 – The words on screen show “I wonder if you know that I want the best for you.” The man is still in the center of the frame, and it appears that this is what he has been thinking about while sitting there. As the quote is on screen the ban unclasps and clasps his hands once again, as though he is somewhat anxiously thinking about this person.

.06 – A man is sitting on a soccer field, possible could be who the man from before was talking about or himself when he was younger. In the frame the man looks to be sweating as if after a game or practice, and is looking up at possibly the coach giving them pointers on their performance.

.07-.08 – The same young man from the soccer field but now zoomed in on his face. His look is as if he is trying to discern or further understand that of which the person in from of him is saying. You can closely see the movements of those around him swaying as if they are tired after a long session.

.09 – A young boy who is roughly in his teens, clearly different from the previous two men, has gloves on in a fighting stance. He looks as if he is about to partake in a boxing spar as there is a head of another young man, perhaps a boxing trainer standing in front of him with what could be a training bag in the lower part of the frame.

.10 – The words “But, how long will you fight solo?” appear in the bottom half of the frame as the two people step closer towards each other. The younger one putting up his guard as the older man lunges for his side.

.11- With the words still present on the screen, now the older of the two is in focus as the younger is in the foreground. The both of them seem to be shadow boxing practicing jabs and hooks.

.12-.13 – The image moves to two men, one of which is holding a box, by his facial expression, it appears heavy. They both look to be movers of some sort, one wearing a tan short sleeve button up and the other with a grey pullover. The words ” I wonder if you know that we can get help” is now at the bottom of the screen. The man in the foreground appears to be relived as if he just set down a package that was heavy.

.14 – .16 – The scene cut to a therapist session. The main focus is the back of the patients head and the therapist in in the back of the frame out of focus, but still seen. The man in the seat closer to the camera can be seen moving his hands in a rotation, as if he is explaining something to the therapist across from him.

.17-19 – A man who is clearly happy has what appears to be his daughter on his shoulders. This is the first time that you can clearly see the sky, which has no clouds and is bright blue. His daughter is in a yellow dress holding a stuffed animal. The words “Not wondering anymore” are on the bottom of the screen now.

.20 – The screen fades to white

.21- In large text the word “Love” appears with a comma afterwards

.22 – The words “Your Mind” fade in and appear to be handwriting rather than text

.23 – The words all fade out together and the website title “LoveYourMindToday.com” fades into the center of the screen

.24-.29 – The previous phrase stays on screen stays and above appears “Find mental health resources” and below appears a sponsor of huntsman mental health institute and ad council.

.30 – Fades to black

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Research Position Paper – K3vin James

Working Less Can be a Good Thing

Everyone who is currently working has only known that of a five day work week, but never questioned why that is. I believe that with a little bit of knowledge on the subject and with the way that our world has progressed throughout the years, we should make the leap to a four day work week. Now everyone would love to just cut their work one day short without any repercussions to their pay or hours, but that doesn’t seem realistic. If we look into the history of why the work week is set the way it is we find that prior to the work week mandate in 1927, there wasn’t a set work schedule throughout different industries, and some people would even work “fourteen- to sixteen-hour days, six days per week,” as stated in “Four-Day Work Week: Old Lessons, New Questions.” However, in 1927, many companies and influential CEOs including Henry Ford proposed their own regulations in regard to work time to the Labor Union. After a short trial period, Henry Fords five, eight hour day work week was integrated. This way of work has remained largely unchanged for nearly 100 years. 

It wasn’t until nearly 50 years later that people here and there bring up the topic of further decreasing the work week, as we can see in “A Look at The Four Day Work Week” written in 1971. In this paper, it brings to light some of the companies that offer a position with a four day work week. Yet in these positions, you are expected to work 10 hour days, essentially canceling out the shortened week. Due to this, there was a lack of people willing to trade the day off for longer time in the office, and less than 75 thousand workers in the U.S. worked only four days a week. At the time, an 8 hour day was still seen as something that was fought for and rewarded to workers, and to throw that out the window and return to longer days seems counterproductive. 

Now, 50 more years later, a “boom” in technology has exponentially sped up most of if not all work done in not only the U.S. but the entire world. With the introduction of the internet, cell services and advancements in machinery, you would imagine the amount of work someone can do today within a week would be equivalent to the work someone in the same position 100 years ago would quite possibly take a month or more to get done. And yet, we still have the same schedule. With these advancements, with the right amount of enticement, most people would even be able to complete a week’s worth of workload in 4 days. What could this enticement be, possibly the same pay and hours, just as long as the completion quality and quantity does not decrease, they would only have to work four days a week. 

In a study done in January to December of 2022, 3000 workers of 61 companies participated in a trial of a four day work week. The conditions they proposed were the same as previously stated, complete the same workload in the 4 days of working 8 hours instead of 5 days, and have the quality of work be consistent as it was before. The article called this the “ 100-80-100 model: workers get 100% of the pay for working 80% of the time in exchange for delivering 100% of their usual output.” 

On the company side of the experiment, upon completion, 92 percent of the companies stated that they would continue with the four day work weeks. They went on to say that one of these companies was receiving 88 percent more applications for work, and their productivity even increased 22 percent, even though the time at work was shortened. As expected on the employees side, most if not all were overjoyed by the extra day on the weekend. Roughly 90 percent of the employees said they would like to continue with the 4 day work week, while 15 percent of these employees went on further to say that they wouldn’t even take any amount of money to go back to a five day work week.

In more recent news, there have been strikes and employee walkouts demanding 32 hour work weeks while keeping benefits such as wages and healthcare. One example of this is the 13,000 members of the United Auto Workers at three assembly plants in Michigan, Ohio and Missouri. When negotiations with the Detroit automakers didn’t come to a conclusion for a new labor contract, these workers began protesting and going on strike. To the outside and ignorant viewers, it would appear that the workers’ demands are outrageous. When in reality, they are only demanding what should rightfully be adapted with the way the world has steadily progressed.

Why should our employees work almost 100 percent more proficient than that of an individual 100 years ago, and yet work the same amount of hours and days. Hearing it started like this, it seems outrageous just thinking about how when the bill for 5 day work weeks was passed, people would work five days a week at ford for roughly double what was seen as a base salary. In comparison, the people in the same position today are making minimum wage and working the same hours. Yet, the amount of production in the company and stock value of ford has grown exponentially. Not only this example, but it is the same for almost every company out there. And because of this, it should be mandated that work weeks be shortened to 32 hours while keeping every benefit otherwise offered for a full time employee.

Many individuals all over the world have a common goal in mind, that is to work less and earn more. Unless you’re at the top of a prosperous company or born into money, this goal is certainly hard to achieve for the average person. The correlation between the hours that one works and the amount of money they receive has been in place in many companies for over a hundred years. Minimum wages can barely keep up with market inflation and due to this more and more people fall into poverty. The market for jobs is a strenuous one, especially nowadays with more and more college graduates unable to find work due to demands of years of experience in certain fields. 

Without work and still having to pay off enormous college loans and miscellaneous bills, many people will find themselves working high demand jobs with low pay just to get by. One of the many jobs that draws these types of individuals in is a delivery driver for companies such as Amazon. The pay is relatively decent compared to minimum wage and you are paid hourly. The kicker though is that you always have a set amount of deliveries per that day. Due to this, the drivers who are more efficient in their deliveries finish faster. That would all be fine if they were not punished for it, and yet due to the pay being hourly and no set hours, the faster you complete the job the less you are paid. This situation has caused many in this position to draw out the delivery process in order to earn more, and be less productive. This also implies that if two drivers had the same amount of deliveries but one driver took twice as long to finish the task, they would be getting paid double the more efficient driver.  

This doesn’t completely justify the fact that working longer hours is never better than working faster. But what it does do is bring up the idea of efficiency in one’s work. Unlike a retail worker that will work a set shift from opening to closing, many jobs out there are more or less work until the job is complete. In this type of work, as long as it is completed to the satisfaction of the company, the workers will be paid their wages for the time they put in. If it is completed in 40 hours, they receive 40 hours of pay, 30 hours will earn them 30 hours of pay. Even if the job were to have been the exact same task. In the article “The $2,000 Hour: How Managers Influence Project Performance Through The Rework Cycle”, the rework cycle is a chart in place to roughly manage the work done. It compares the amount of work completed to the quality of said work. The comparison of work time and quality work hours is what’s demonstrated by this chart. As the article stated, employers would pay nothing for the hours put in where workers had not performed well, and thousands for the hours that had actually made progress on their project. In this case unlike the delivery drivers, working less, yet actually being efficient and thorough is rewarded. 

Of course, the position in a corporate chain like the ladder is very much different than an entry level job at a delivery company or similar jobs. Yet in both cases the work is performance based. Why is one rewarded and the other punished for being efficient and productive? The problem is that in the system we have in place, the correlation with money earned and time spent at work have been so indoctrinated into the way we live we wouldn’t even think to question why a 9 to 5 job is so common. Work 8 hours, get paid for 8 hours of work. In many cases, the average worker is not slaving away for 8 hours, and maybe gets 5-6 solid hours of productive work done at that time. There is a point in which working tirelessly long hours hinders work performance, in which quality diminishes. If companies were to offer incentives to those who produced quality work for the entirety of their time on the job, this may not be the case. If your house has a leak and you need someone to fix the roof, would you choose a person who offers work for an hourly rate, or someone who has a fixed price. In most cases, the person with the fixed rate. Why? The price may seem a bit much, for example if the fixed rate was 220 dollars compared to the company that offers 80 dollars an hour. The fixed rate may be finished in only two hours, and seemingly you paid 110 dollars an hour. But for someone offering an hourly rate, they would have worked less efficiently and taken 3 hours. Therefore you are paying 20 dollars more than the fixed rate. 

Efficiency and quality are the only things that should be considered when being paid. If a company were to offer a position where you work less hours and are paid the same amount, then the question of work quality and efficiency come into play. As in the previous examples, this is very much prominent, as work is more or less on the employees time. Rarely are employees left with overdue work and not enough time to complete it, and on the flip side, many people are dragging out their work in order to receive the pay that they deserve. If companies had greater incentives to employees, this would not be the case, and efficiency would skyrocket. 

One of the lead arguments protesting the shortening of the work week is brought to light in an article written by Liberty Vittert called “A Four Day Work Week Would Destroy Everything That Made America Great.” In this article Vittert states that due to the shortening of work weeks, companies that offer customer based services would have on less day of reaching the customer and being able to make sales. Due to this, those same companies would have to hire more help during the active days to make up for the lost day. This would further burden the company for having to spend more money on the extra help, and could eventually cause the company to stop making profit all together and inevitably lay off all work and go bankrupt.

An example Vittert gave of this was a short period of time between 1988 and 1996 in Japan. The work week was shortened form “46 hour to 30 hours” and as a result, the economic output fell nearly 20 percent. Though in the article, Vittert fails to explain the main reason for the economic crisis in Japan at the time. In “The Japanese Economic Crisis of the 1990’s” by Naoto Ohmi, Ohmi talks on the important factors that played into Japans economic downfall of the time. Ohmi talks on a subject known as asset price bubble in which the prices of stock and real estate had been greatly inflated. Due to this there was many who took out loans and with the banks giving little to no regard to whom they distributed money to, they had grossly devalued the price of their yen which led to the economic struggle at the time.

Vittert goes on later to say that Microsoft had implemented a four day work week for a trial period in one of the Japanese offices. In that span, which was only for the month of August, the workers had the Friday off work, and productivity for that month was reported to have increased by 40 percent. The counter argument Vittert gave in this case was that it was due to the month having been a low productivity summer month and that if it were really to be the case then why have they not implemented this style of work week into other branches.

This claim can also be refuted by the author of “Microsoft’f Latest Innovation: The 4-Day Work Week,” Evelynn Orr. In the article Orr, states that due to the success of the trial, they will be doing more trials throughout the months due to the fact that a mone month trial is limited. Throughout the trial, it was stated that paper used for printing was down 60 percent and electric usage was down 23 percent in cost. This is further backed by the results published on an in depth analysis of the trial called “Four-Day Workweek: The Microsoft Japan Experience” written by Courtney Gatlin-Keener and Ryan Lunsford. The results spoke of are shown in a graph provided by the article.

Microsoft Work Life Choice Challenge Results

Due to results such as the increase in productivity and decrease in costs, it would be presumptuous to believe that they would have just stoped further implementation of this style of working. This further brings me back to the main issue at hand with switching to a four day work week, and that is that it would cost companies more money and eventually lead them to go bankrupt.

Most companies are not on the scale of Microsoft in terms of the amount of people they employ or the profits they bring in. Yet, in any case, it would be reasonable to assume that even if this were the case, keeping a lower cost of running the business is still in the best interest of the parties that run a company. If a company were able to cut electricity costs by nearly a quarter of the usual usage and also save on costs such as paper, this could be of great benefit to those who are in charge. In the article “25+ Warehouse Energy Consumption Statistics You Need To Know,” they state that for some companies, electricity can cost a company up to 50 percent of their yearly expenses. If that were lowered, there would be money to be able to higher employees as they see fit, and not be at risk of loosing money. For these reasons, the argument that companies could go bankrupt and effect the economy is almost laughable in comparison to what it would actually provide as benefits that the company owners would gain in return.

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