are multivitamins dangerous?
It seems counterintuitive that Multivitamins are dangerous. But when used responsibly and respective way as directed, they are in general safe and beneficial for most people. They can help fill nutritional gaps in the diet and prevent deficiencies at the same time so don’t rush and start consuming without limits. However, excessive or improper use of multivitamins can lead to potential health issues and problems. It’s crucial to consult with a specialist before starting any new supplement regimen, as individual needs vary, and excessive intake of certain vitamins and minerals can have adverse effects on health. In essence, multivitamins can be beneficial when used wisely, but they should not replace a balanced diet and should be approached with caution to avoid potential dangers. Always don’t forget that nothing can replace the real food so always focus on the great nutrition values has meat, chicken, vegetables, fruits, milk and always the most important advice is drinking water.
Better than fast food?
It seems counterintuitive that there is something better than fast food? Always we heard people saying that fast food is better than homemade food because it’s cheaper and easier to, but don’t forget that having this kind of food on a daily basis can end up in a big issues and impact on your health. So, all the money and time you save it you will end up spending it on your health like we say everything has a hidden cost ” A big mac doesn’t cost $3.99 it costs your health” Fast food is convenient but tends to be high in calories, saturated fats, and sodium, contributing to various health issues like obesity and heart disease. Preparing meals at home or choosing restaurants with nutritious offerings allows for better control over ingredients and portion sizes, promoting a balanced diet and improved overall health. While fast food may be tempting, prioritizing healthier food choices can lead to long-term benefits for physical well-being and overall quality of life. On the other hand, is still in each restaurant also the fast-food places they can still have some meals with good nutrients and having a good impact on the health for example Panera bread, chipotle and salad work.
Cancer sniffing dogs.
how is it counterintuitive for dogs to smell cancer? We assume that we can only detect cancer medical tests and machines to find out, but dogs can smell cancer and warn us. It counterintuitive because it’s not based on intuition but on a skill that the train k9 has. Dogs have shown remarkable potential in detecting cancer through their highly sensitive olfactory abilities. These trained dogs can identify unique odors associated with cancer cells, offering a non-invasive and potentially early diagnostic tool for various types of cancer, including breast, lung, and prostate cancer. While still in research and development stages, the use of cancer-sniffing dogs holds promise as a cost-effective and accurate method for early detection, complementing existing diagnostic approaches and potentially saving lives by detecting cancer at its earliest, most treatable stages.
Your thought process for the most part seems completely reasonable and with great effort I believe I am interpreting you correctly, Urbie, but sentences like this one cannot be graded as well as you would like. They contain far too many language problems.
Graded. Could have been improved with feedback. I’m sorry you didn’t ask.
thank you for all this feedback I did fix all the errors based on your comments and can take a look on it again please.
I gave you a grade improvement for the changes you made to the Dog paragraph, Urbie. Your language problems are deep, and I can’t advise you how to improve them without correcting all the errors myself as a model. Learning English takes years, not days, and even if it were days, we don’t have enough days left.