- Continue to the sixth floor, to where there is a down summons.
- At the sixth floor, the doors open
- After five seconds of inactivity or in response to any floor button or the Close Doors button, the doors will close.
- Proceed to the specified floor, making only one stop along the way at the lowest requested floor for down summonses.
- As the elevator goes down it will only stop if there on a floor below six and wants to go even lower
- And finally, the elevator stops at the 1st floor, doors opens and everyone that wanted to come to the 1st floor gets off
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You’ve misunderstood this admittedly confusing assignment, Unicorn.
What you’ve written here is a description of YOUR situation using the elevator. That’s not what the job requires. What you’re tasked with doing is writing a set of instructions that the elevator will follow.
A partial list that matches your example would be something like.
Your 4 and 5 don’t work as you’ve described them. The elevator will stop for others who call for it ONLY IF they’re on a floor below 6 and want to go even lower. It will ignore Up Summonses.
I will delay grading these assignments for awhile to give everyone a chance to revise their first drafts. DON’T POST A NEW VERSION. Just open this post in Edit and make improvements.
Optional, of course.
I don’t know why this post is in Feedback Please, Unicorn. It appears to suffer from the same problems I identified weeks ago. Your Revision history makes it hard to judge if you made any improvements at all following Feedback. I’ll remove it from the category now. I you want help with this, reach out, please.