Purposal summaries- Colibrimic

It seems incongruous that those photographers did not have a bit of humanity with that deceased girl and that they only rushed to do their job, which was photography, informing, bringing the news to the audience, but this particular case is disturbing when seeing the inert body. of that little girl who seems to none of them to care about her misfortune.

 Survivor of the Haiti earthquake, Fabienne Charisma had dreams to fulfill, such as being able to become a nurse. but, she was a fatal victim of a police shooting, which forever ended her dream of helping others.

The photographers showed the world this photograph of the body of a girl whose death was not related to the earthquake, ummm, could it be that morbidity attracts attention and sells?

If only they had done everything possible to find the girl’s relatives so they could give her a decent burial, but they didn’t, they only dedicated themselves to exercising their professional side, sadly forgetting the human side.

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  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    This does a lot well, colibrimic, but it assumes the reader knows what you’re talking about in the first paragraph. Your job as the summarizer is to provide readers at least as much information as they need to understand your take on the original story.

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