Purposeful Summary – imaginary.persona

Its seems counterintuitive for photographers to rush to take pictures of Fabienne’s lifeless body instead of participating in the humane act of correctly taking care of the deceased body.

Fabienne Charisma’s aspirations was to help others by becoming a nurse that is until she fell victim to a police shootout. After the earthquake that took place in Haiti, Fabienne Charisma saw this as an opportunity to help only for her to be shot down by police. Photographers rushed to take pictures of her lifeless body in hopes to show the devastation that the earthquake caused even though her death was unrelated. Instead they could have reached out to authorities and the local in order to help find this girls family and put her fully to rest.

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1 Response to Purposeful Summary – imaginary.persona

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:

    This post is appropriately Purposeful, imaginary-persona, but it fails to provide readers with enough information to understand the context of your Summary. You start with photographers around Fabienne’s body as if your readers were looking at that picture of them arched around her . . . but they’re not. You have to provide the summary.

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