2nd Person- Lobsterman

Posted on November 19, 2024 by lobsterman
  1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Any parent whose child is going to an expensive school would argue that it does.
  2. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Would anyone object to a surgery performed before any injury occurs that could make an athlete stronger?
  3. Drug addicts are being consumed by a drug that completely devours their mind, and makes them do anything to get more of it.
  4. Inviting Syrians in would just create more problems then solutions.
  5. Does the idea of not actually having money on-hand sound trivial?
  6. That little green piece of paper in our pockets holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet we will work our whole lives just to acquire more of those little green pieces of paper just so we can take them and stick them in a bank.
  7. If someone reads a bank statement or looks at dollar bill, they’re holding a made up value that someone decided to make up. Without it, they might still be having to trade with goods like livestock and produce.
  8. I now understand that a dollar is only worth what can be received in exchange for it.
  9. Being able to walk around with money without holding the money in hand brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, we don’t need to be in physical possession of these Bitcoins to own them.
  10. We have been told of the American Dream since we were born, which requires that we have enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. Thinking about it more deeply, we will realize, that we receive these pieces of paper called money and base our whole life on them.
  11. Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. Our goal from the moment we start school is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make our life more fun and acceptable.

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1 Response to 2nd Person- Lobsterman

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:
    November 22, 2024 at 9:50 am

    Sentences that still need work:

    None actually require work, Lobsterman, but most could be streamlined. If you’re interested in a boost for your already strong grade, remove the wordiness and put the post into Regrade Please.

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