Revised 11 Problem Sentences
- Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Realistically thinking, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school.
- There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport. Would objections be made knowing that a surgery performed before any injury occurs could make an athlete stronger?
- Imagine the effects of a body being consumed by a drug. The individual being affected would do anything to get this drug without worrying about the consequences that come with it.
- By inviting Syrians in, more problems are being caused rather than solved.
- Does the idea of not actually having physical money on hand sound trivial?
- That little green piece of paper being held in a pocket holds no actual value other than the cost it took to produce it, and yet a person will work their whole life just to acquire more of those little green pieces of paper to eventually take them and stick them in a bank.
- When looking at a bank statement or a dollar bill, remember that this is a made-up value that someone decided to make up. Without it, people might still have to trade with goods like livestock and produce.
- I now understand that a dollar is only worth what is available to receive in exchange for it.
- Being able to walk around with money without holding the money physically in hand brings me back around to the idea of the stone because, just like stone currency, there is no need for physical possession of these Bitcoins to own them.
- We hear people talk about the American Dream, which requires the need to have enough of these pieces of paper to be financially stable. Deep thinking allows for the realization that many people base their whole lives on receiving the pieces of paper called money.
- Money is an adroit concept and its pursuit lasts a lifetime. The goal from the moment schooling begins is to join the game of making enough of these pieces of paper to make life more fun and acceptable.
Sentences that still need work:
—Weak passive
—walking around with money without holding money?
Fine work overall, PRBlog. If you want to chase the last few grade points, make some changes and put the post into Regrade Please.