2nd Person – Unicorn

Posted on November 21, 2024 by unicorn45678
  1. Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Any parent whose child goes to an expensive school would also agree.
  2. Different sports can lead to different types of injures, would having surgery before an injury happens be a good idea if it could make an athlete stronger
  3. Imagine a body being taken over by a drug, it becomes the only thing that the body wants, and everything is done to get it without caring about the consequences behind it.
  4. Inviting Syrians in could lead to more problems than solutions
  5. Does the idea of not having money seem unimportant?
  6. That small green piece of paper is only worth only the cost to make it, yet people spend their whole lives trying to get more of it, just to store it in bank.
  7. Next time a bank statement is read, or a dollar bill is held always remember that it’s the value of something someone made up. Without money people might have to trade things like livestock or crops.
  8. A dollar is only worth what can be received in exchange for it
  9. Being able to carry money without physically holding it is like stone currency. Stones don’t need to be held to be owned, Bitcoin doesn’t need to be held in hand.
  10. The American Dream is often based on having enough money to be stable. In reality life is mainly built around other pieces of paper called money
  11. Money is an important idea to have it also lasts a lifetime. Just by being in school the goal in life is to make money to make life more enjoyable and fun
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1 Response to 2nd Person – Unicorn

  1. davidbdale's avatar davidbdale says:
    November 22, 2024 at 9:07 am

    Sentences that need work:

    Different sports can lead to different types of injures, would having surgery before an injury happens be a good idea if it could make an athlete stronger

    Imagine a body being taken over by a drug, it becomes the only thing that the body wants, and everything is done to get it without caring about the consequences behind it.

    Next time a bank statement is read, or a dollar bill is held always remember that it’s the value of something someone made up.

    Money is an important idea to have it also lasts a lifetime. Just by being in school the goal in life is to make money to make 

      Revise and put into Regrade Please.

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