Class 05: WED SEP 18

Agenda WED SEP 18

  Housekeeping

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Web Skills: Google Scholar

Brief demo of the value and power of Google Scholar for BOTH finding sources to explore your Hypothesis AND to help you create your Hypothesis in the first place.

That Scotch Bottle is Back

Feedback Please

    • Add your post to the Feedback Please category to solicit feedback from your Professor.
    • You’ll receive a Reply directly at your post.
    • Put yourself back into Feedback Please following any significant revisions.
    • Repeat as necessary.
    • If you think I should create a 2-minute “How To” video for Feedback Please, leave me a reminder in your Notes below this page.

My Class Notes, A Model

I’ve mocked up my own version of Class Notes for Monday’s class, MON SEP 16, for anyone interested in how I would have kept notes that day if we had covered the entire Counterintuitive Thinking lecture in class.

The Deadlines Menu

Riddle

BiPartisan
  • First, let’s define bi-partisan
    • adjective. involving the agreement or cooperation of two political parties
      that usually oppose each other’s policies.
    • Recent usage:
      • “Financial deregulation and mass incarceration became matters of
        bi-partisan agreement.”— Frank Guan, The New Yorker, 31 Jan. 2022

Lecture/Demo: Purposeful Summary

Follow the link to an explanation of the difference between Quotation, Paraphrase, and the much more useful “Purposeful Summary,” the only method endorsed by this course of incorporating large amounts of information from outside sources.

Research Help

Classwork


Writing Assignment

Purposeful Summaries

DUE 11:59PM TUE SEP 24

30 Responses to Class 05: WED SEP 18

  1. Softball1321's avatar Softball1321 says:

    Class Notes – Softball1321

    Learning about the importance of Google Scholar for finding reference sources.

    Going over the riddle for today and learning the difference between an empty bottle of Scotch and an empty Scotch bottle. This shows to pay close attention to any grammatical errors I can possibly make in hypothesis.

    Taking class notes is significant. It shows attendance.

    Class notes are purposeful summaries.

    There is no such thing as a bi-partisan legislator, but there is such thing is bi-partisan group legislators.

    Going over the purposeful summary task: due next Tuesday, 11:59pm.

    Counterintuitive thinking.

  2. phoenixxxx23's avatar phoenixxxx23 says:

    Class Notes- phoenixxxx23

    -Use google scholar for search:

    -be really specific, use the roots of the words not their forms building–build

    -use “” and – to make search more specific

    -The references list for your favorite source has its own references

    -Purposeful summary is the key to thoughtful information processing

    -Purposeful summary does not include citation, it includes your view on these words

    -You have to be logical not promoting your favorite argument but being objective and reasonable

    YOU are the AUTHOR

    -“Talk about the orange juice extract, not the packaging, production date etc; discuss the flavor” by Elizaveta

  3. MAD ClTY's avatar MAD ClTY says:

    Grammar can make a different statement true, but not pass your message. Like a track star passing the baton to the wrong person on a different path. Finding better sources using key words and removing word. Addressing the facts as if it were the news. What do you want to make your viewer understand.

  4. taco491's avatar taco491 says:

    Class Notes: 9/18

    -Always be proud of your ideas, not arrogant.

    -It will be way better to do a conference when you don’t know anything

    -Google Scholar looks for scholarly articles. It may provide journals you need to pay for, but no marketing ads. Adding quotes will narrow results. Adding negative signs with a word will take all articles out with said word.

    -the Campbell library gives you few articles, and it may be subscribed to a journal you need

    -References list for your favorite source is now your favorite sources; in other words use the articles references, this will lead to more sources and articles.

    -Nuance means there is small difference of meaning

    -Taking good class notes while absent will allow you to be marked as present; it will give you credit.

    -In order to put a source to use, don’t just quote everything. Take key points. Out of an 8,000 word article, you should only use around 100 words.

    -Discussion on Polio. When one does not see something happening in real time, they believe it is not important. In reality it is always important and why we should take action before anything bad happens.

    -Bi-partisan Legislators Riddle: This brings back to nuance. The way this is phrased, it is not true and can not happen. If it said “a bi-partisan group of legislators”, then yes this can happen.

    -It does not matter what you believe. As long as you sound logical and are able to persuade, you can make a summary. You can make an argument.

    -For Purposeful Summaries assignment, ignore the author because you are the author. Start with “It seems counterintuitive that…”

    -3 parent article: Describes a situation that promotes a kind of sympathy for the critics. This article was able to provide a small summary with a purpose. It did not include the author or title, but instead briefly summarizes and adds emotion. This is about what people should do for the purposeful summaries assignment.

    -Include in the summary what you think is the important takeaway for you. Everyone has their own ideas, so use what you want in the summary to bring your point across.

  5. ChefRat's avatar ChefRat says:

    Class Notes 9.18.24

    It was said its unlikely to choose “what?” from your first google article search.

    • When researching multiple things about your hypothesis, which obviously has to be defended multiple times. You are going to search for appropriate supporting evidence for your work with filters that resemble your actual hypothesis writing process. It really can’t be said enough that when defending your work, nothing can be taken at face value- apply even more than the amount of work into drafting your thought, to defending it.

    Why good class notes are important

    • When looking at Professor David’s previous class notes from another semester, it is clarified why purposeful summaries are important for digesting the information we’re given. As I write this now, I try to consider that the reason I’m taking note of this right now is because this is applicable everywhere, outside of this class. I don’t want to write a direct summary but to write something I can look back at, and understand why everything that was said, was said.

    Why is there no group of bi-partisan legislators?

    • Another grammatical analogy comes up, similar to the bottle of scotch. To boil it down and not make this a summary, the wording of whether there is a group of bi-partisan legislators differs a bi-partisan group of legislators. This severely affects what is being attempted to told to your audience, another reinforcement explaining why the way you write is important to conveying your message.

    The difference between a purposeful and non-purposeful summary.

    • It is important in our writing to convey a message that is counterintuitive, similar to our class notes. This aids us visualizing our own readers, who see a purposeful summary to be able to see what YOU the writer are thinking. A recount of what happened in the original work that’s being summarized doesn’t create anything in the heads of your audience.
  6. imaginary.persona's avatar imaginary.persona says:

    9/18/24

    What Happened:

    • Started off with a quote from my favorite professor 
    • How to use Google Scholar
      • “” : used for direct searches 
      •  (-) : used to take out specific information and narrow down search 
    • The “Reference list” is our new favorite source of favorite sources 
    • Revisiting Empty Bottle of Scotch Riddle
    • Feedback Please Posts
    • “Why is there no such thing as a group of bi-partisan legislators?”
      • You can only belong to one party

    What I got:

    • The reference list shows where the article got its information which we can use to get more information for our research 
    •  Focus carefully on the grammatical errors of writing, how something is written may actually be impossible spending on the wording 
    • Bi-Partisan: The agreement of two political parties that are usually against each other
    • Language is important, how something is said can be interpreted wrong 

    What I Still Have Questions About:

    • If I use a (+) in my google scholar search will everything that comes up have that exact idea in it?
  7. yardie's avatar yardie says:

    9/18/2024

    • Google Scholar: when searching use quotations to allow google search to give more specific articles.
    • Most important writing skill: to be able to summarize
    • Bi- partisan : voting with your party

    There is no such thing as a group of bi-partisan legislators because one person can’t belong to both party’s.

    (The way words are arranged changes what you are saying)

    • Purposeful Summary
    • Use 3) Read story on 14-year old Cherisma
    • Counterintuitive- Contrary to intuition or common sense. unreasonable. faulty. illogical. implausible.
  8. lil.sapph's avatar lil.sapph says:

    9/18 

    • Upload picture and make sure to schedule a conference to go over hypothesis 
    • In goggle scholar use quotation marks to narrow searches and use “- to eliminate subjects from results
    • Resources can be found under an article, and they can lead us to finding more relevant sources
    • Grammer and sentence structure is very important to express what you are trying to say, using the scotch bottle example again
    • My writing and sources should be important to me , purposeful summary 
    • Hes very passionate about diseases like polio that paralyze children and many other things that can be prevented which is part of the sad reality of this world too and thinking about it for long would make me sad too
    • Again with sentence structure, there can’t be a group of bipartisan, but instead a bipartisan group 
    • Follow rhetoric rules exactly for summary, or else WILL GET FAILED 😦
    • Daughters having two different mitochondrial DNA sounds interesting and it sounds a little Jurassic park-y where instead of gaps in DNA it replaces the defective one to create a healthier child. This could also maybe be seen in the way that the child could be genetically superior to others as there is no “chance’ of them having any kind of defects or abnormalities that could occur from natural conception w original mitochondrial DNA. Also made me think, would their female offspring also have “perfect” mixed mitochondrial DNA as her mother would have or what effect would that have on her. 

    Persuasion is important and telling the truth in the story

  9. Starfire04.blog's avatar Starfire04.blog says:
    • Scheduling a conference without knowing much about topic is way better than knowing
    • Google scholar is a great source for research
      • narrow down the info specifically
      • narrowing down provides more specific sources
    • Being able to summarize is very important
    • feedback please posts
    • words and use of language plays a huge part in clarity of what is being said
    • getting your audience to engage with you is important
    • Empty bottle of Scotch riddle
  10. Mongoose449's avatar Mongoose! says:

    Mongoose! Notes – 9/18/24

    Discussed

    • Add a picture to your profile, allows more easily to recognize.
    • Started off with a quote from himself, about arrogance in your ideas.
    • Discussed about defending your hypothesis, if you have any idea about it or not, it’s not that big of a deal.
    • Google Scholar, we learned about the nuances of the search bar and how we can lower the number of searches and specify it.
    • Rowan Library Database gives you access to journals that may be paywalled.
    • Sources found will often have their own sources, which can be used.
    • Scotch bottle riddle, nuances of words and placements to imply and influence the way someone can understand the way you intend them to do. Using implications, you can persuade someone to read it the way you intend them to and reach the answer on their own rather than telling them everything you intend them to discover.
    • Feedback Please, discussed about how to respond to feedback and how to work with the category list.
    • Notes Mock up
    • Bi-partisan legislators, similar to bottle of scotch riddle.
    • Counterintuitive Information and ideas.
    • Purposeful summary, shows how to find and make an effective summary of a story

    Learned

    • Do whatever idea you want to defend, but don’t be arrogant in thinking it’s the best in the world.
    • Your hypothesis can be whatever, you just need evidence.
    • Google Scholar is a good way to find sources, and what source you may find might not be the one you need. Though, you may use this source to find something that you might actually need, finding the pheasant on the fox hunt.
    • Nuance with words lets you funnel a reader into the way you want them to think and understand, rather than attempting to convince them to understand your point of thinking. It’s easier to have someone change their opinion based on their own volition rather than forcing them to understand something.
    • Portfolio writing, along with how we’re going to do things.
    • How to write effective notes.
    • Using grammar properly to convey the message and understand if something is wrong or right.
    • Learned to be persuasive, even if you aren’t sincere, no matter what conclusion you make.
  11. iloveme5's avatar iloveme5 says:

    Class notes 9/18- iloveme5

    Notes 9/18: 

    • Science of suggestibility: I wonder if when I eat cilantro now it will taste like soap? 😣
    • Google scholar results: I just bookmarked the website. Hopefully it will help for this class and other classes when I have to use scholarly references/resources. 
    • I have yet to go to the library but I did not know if Rowan was subscribed I have access to it too.
    • Revisiting the empty scotch bottle assignment.
    • Why is there no such thing as an empty bottle of scotch? If it’s empty there is no scotch. You have to be grammatically correct when referring to something as vague as “An empty bottle of scotch.” A response like “she hit me with an empty bottle of scotch” is wrong because there could still be some scotch inside. In a literal sense there will still be scotch inside the bottle.  A response like “She hit me with a bottle of scotch she had emptied.” 
    • If you want to be persuasive you have to trust in being persuasive of your own views. 
    • Class notes should be a sentence or two / your own takeaway not just notes.
    • Significance of the counterintuitive photo/background.
    • Polio is back in gaza. We have gotten to 100 cases a year in the whole world. :/
    • No more smallpox in the world. No need for the vaccine anymore. 
    • Why is there no such thing as a bi-partisian legislator? You can only belong to one party. It is a grammatical error. 
    • Counterintuitive topics
  12. student1512's avatar student1512 says:

    Notes

    • Connotation influences how our words are perceived

    Google Scholar

    • -word to get rid of that in searches
    • Use “ “ to specify in google scholar 
    • If a website is blocked bring it to rowan library to check

    Scotch bottle riddle

    • Things can be implied and can lead to persuasion. Show don’t tell. Allude.
    • Get readers to draw your own conclusions. Lure reader to insinuation.

    Feedback please

    • If you want more feedback or grades choose feedback please or grade please. Or regrade.
    • Two times in a semester when a new post is called rewrite, you need to put in a causal argument and a casual rewrite. Definition argument and definition rewrite.

    Good notes

    • Make notes concentrated in a way they have purposeful meaning to you. Highlight YOUR understanding.

    Riddle

    • Can be part of a bi-partisain “group”
    • To be bi partisan legislature you have to be both, yet you can not.

    Purposeful Summaries

    • Think other ways of thinking of a topic
    • Make it persuasive
    • Make it your own argument/demonstration for a purpose
    • take a point of view
    • write with a purpose
  13. loverofcatsandmatcha's avatar loverofcatsandmatcha says:

    9/18 Notes:

    Google Scholar:

    • “…” to specify results
    • “-…” to omit results
    • if source behind paywall, employ rowan database to see if accessible
    • if source too long, reference their sources

    Scotch:

    • you don’t always need to lay out everything for your reader. make them work- let them discover the intention behind your writing.
    • their initial reaction will always be to disagree and want evidence. get them on your side. provide adequate backing to make them believe you.

    Feedback Please

    • twice in semester, will do a rewrite. other times, edits will be made directly on post

    Notes on Notes:

    • be concise
    • note everything that could hold value and look for the meaning behind the riddles and exercises
    • ex: the card riddle was meant to explain the amount of pointless information present in research papers, and that it is something we should avoid.

    Bipartisan Legislators:

    • think about the wording of what you write
    • despite intent, if worded wrong, meaning changes
  14. chaoslol's avatar chaoslol says:

    Class Notes 9-18-24chaoslol

    • Google scholar allows the user to refine all sources found even greater than a normal Google search. This makes research a lot easier and gives better sources for writing
    • Paying close attention to grammar allows the reader to fully comprehend and understand what a sentence is saying. The more attentive you are to your reading, the better you will be able to grasp different writing concepts to strengthen your writing. 
    • Effective writing leads to more reader retention, and allows the reader to stay interested and involved. When creating our hypotheses and ultimately writing our papers, it’s important to keep this in mind so that the readers will be more persuaded and willing to listen by whatever hypothesis is chosen.
    • After talking about the sample good class notes, I need to do better with condensing and picking out the most important things to takeaway from class.
    • Polio should have been dealt with, yet due to politics, war, poor sanitation conditions, and other human intervention, we haven’t been able to get rid of it. While it may not have anything to do with the hypothesis, I thought it was interesting.
    • Purposeful summary should be written completely from my own perspective based on what I learned and took away from the article.
  15. waffles121's avatar waffles121 says:

    Class notes 9/18

    • Google scholar is very helpful because it can broadly search for scholarly works and literature that will be necessary for research.
    • It is important to take sufficient class notes in order to develop a strong comprehension of the materials discussed as well receive credit.
    • Purposeful summary should begin with “It seems counterintuitive that…”
      • Take a POV
  16. Burnbook04's avatar Burnbook04 says:

    Notes 9/18/14

    • empty bottle of scotch riddle. (She hit me with a bottle she had emptied of scotch )
    • slight change with words/tone ( indirectly) having reader draw conclusion is a good way of writing
    • Get the reader on your side to draw your conclusion ( insinuation )
    • Bi-Partisan cans be because a side much be picked ( red or blue )
    • write as if you are the author, argue and persuade ( purposefully assignment)
  17. Andarnaurram's avatar Andarnaurram says:

    Class Notes- 9/18

    -When having ideas always be proud of them even if they’re ridiculous

    -Add avatar and make appointment to discuss hypothesis

    -When using Google Scholar, if you are not subscribed to a site type it into the Rowan Library because if they are subscribed to that site so are we as students

    -If you find gold on Google Scholar when looking for paper continuing to look at the authors sources that they used

    -Effective writing is best when the reader works for it the right way and the right amount

    -Must be persuasive in writing so reader won’t immediately discredit your opinion

    -A scotch bottle is only considered a bottle of scotch when scotch is in the bottle. Without the scotch in the bottle it is no longer a bottle of scotch and now just an empty bottle

    -When writing notes it is necessary that they get to the heart of the topics that are discussed and writing one or two sentences each topic can be sufficient 

    -Polio has broken out in Gaza once again 

    -There is no such thing as a group of bi-partisan legislators because legislators are not able to be in both parties they can be partisan but not bi-partisan

    -Purposeful Summary must be made persuasive and we must make a good case for it

    -Begin with “It seems counterintuitive that…”

  18. Robofrog's avatar Robofrog says:

    Class notes 9/18:

    Quote- Don’t get carried away with your ideas

    Rat story- Learned about how to change perceptions with suggestions and framing questions in a certain way.

    Google Scholar- It is a good place to start research, we went over how to use it efficiently by using “” and -.

    Empty bottle of Scotch- uses it to show how to convince someone of the argument you are making by implying things.

    Class notes- take notes on useful stuff that can help me later.

    Riddle bi-partisan legislators – This is not possible because you cannot be part of two different partisan groups at the same time.

    Purposeful summary- Make your summary persuasive and interesting to convince people of your viewpoint of the article.

    Assignments-

    Purposeful summary by 9/24

    Conference by 9/25

  19. Bruinbird's avatar Bruinbird says:
    • Notes: September 18, 9:30 am Class
      • Be proud of ideas, not arrogant. Be comfortable being ridiculous
      • Don’t fall too in love with ideas, and let them burn you
      • Suggestibility – even if words have similar meaning, they can have different implications. Bump vs Crash, Kick vs Nudge, etc.
      • Google scholar – a good place to start (and better than your HS database….ugh)
      • There are things you can imply with language, without explicitly stating it
        • Back to the Scotch Bottle, or, the bottle of scotch 😉
          • She emptied the scotch bottle into a glass and drank it down. Then she hit me with the empty bottle. 
          • She hit me with an emptied scotch bottle.
        • The key to effective writing, is making the reader to the right amount of work. Set up the reader to draw the correct (my) conclusion
      • Smh, asking us to get feedback from him. Let us stay delusional please
      • Notes on taking notes. If i were a better student, i would apply it. Ultimately, it’s about applying and finding the ways to express the terms that are most relevant, 
      • Note: make sure to keep laptop on charger UP UNTIL THE POINT OF CLASS. Seriously, thought charging overnight was enough smh.
      • Purposeful summaries!
        • When it comes to the writing, sincerity isn’t necessary, you just need to exemplify, or at least indicate an understanding of the counterintuitive nature of the topic.
          • DO NOT begin by citing the article you’re summarizing
          • DO NOT say that the author “talks about” a topic
          • YOU ARE THE AUTHOR! THIS IS YOUR SUMMARY
        • Begin the summary with “it seems counterintuitive that. . . .”
        • Use what you’ve learned, to make an argument of your own.
        • Suppress the identity of the article and its author(s)
        • Make sure to follow the rules to a T. Don’t get caught out slacking cause you didn’t read properly
  20. Who'sOnFirst?'s avatar Who'sOnFirst? says:
    • Google Scholar is a better place to search for information. Just searching google will present you with lots of information and ads. When searching Google scholar, use quotation marks to search up that exact phrase and subtracting phrases will only search for articles that don’t have those phrases.
    • Empty bottle of Scotch. There is no such thing as an empty bottle of Scotch. Insinuating that she emptied a bottle of scotch and then hit me with it and getting the reader to make the conclusion themself, is more likely to convince the reader to your point of view.
    • The scarier roller coaster is the one that the safety features seem less up to date. This is counterintuitive thinking.
    • Purposeful summary rules – you don’t need to be sincere, you need to be persuasive. Don’t begin by citing the article you’re summarizing. We don’t care what the author says. “It seems counterintuitive that…” take a point of view.
  21. What happened

    • Talked about the empty bottle of scotch
    • Talked about note taking
    • Google scholar
    • counterintuitive topics
    • purposeful summary

    what I learned

    • There can’t be an empty bottle of scotch but there can be an empty scotch bottle
    • I learned a right way on taking notes and how its important
    • I learned how the write the summaries
    • not to address the author just to summarize the main points but not to the point were rewording the whole thing
  22. pinkduck's avatar pinkduck says:
    • Google scholar is a good to use/start with when looking for information for your research.
    • Using quotations and (-) allows to limit the amount of information shown to you.
    • Bottle of scotch – Even though it was never said directly it can be interpreted that she had drank the bottle of scotch before she threw it. A good writer has their reader do most of the work. You should be able to write your claim without saying it directly and rather implying it.
    • Bi-partisan : The agreement of two political parties that are usually against each other.
    • There cannot be a group of bi-partisan legislators because one person can’t belong to both parties.
    • Be careful with your wording when writing.
    • Polio is still around, every time we get close to having it be gone it just comes right back.
    • If you were to go on a roller coaster you would less likely choose the roller coaster that’s not up to date and not in the best condition because it’s “scary.” The more up to date roller coaster seems “safer.” Don’t be afraid to view information that seems like the least “safe” option.
    • “Don’t be sincere be persuasive.”
    • Be able to make a claim that you can back up, no matter how “silly” that claim may be.
    • Write what you read through your own views on it.
  23. ChickenNugget's avatar ChickenNugget says:
    • Today it was reemphasized that the Class Notes are very important, as they are our opportunity to reorganize the information taught to us and highlight the important topics and details of the class. We only need a sentence or two for each point, and it’s good to be concise and straight to the point.
    • We talked about the importance of grammar and sentence structure, using the example of how there cannot be a “group of bi-partisan legislators” because that implies that each individual is bipartisan and that is not possible.
  24. pineapple488's avatar pineapple488 says:

    Class notes:

    • It is important not to be too arrogant, but rather to doubt yourself and let others believe in you.
    • Outcomes can be influenced by suggestion, when asked about the speed at which a fender bender happened, using a word like “crash” would make a person assume the cars touched at a higher speed than if a word like “bump” was used.
    • Nudging a dog has a very different connotation than kicking a dog, even though both involve a deliberate act of contact between the dog and a person’s foot.
    • Use Google Scholar to find sources. By using quotation marks, you can narrow down your search. You can also remove certain words from the results by using a minus sign in the search.
    • If the Rowan library database is subscribed to a journal, you may also access it. When looking at a source, you may look at the original sources for that article. 
    • Of the six slightly differently worded sentences, only one implies that she drank the scotch and then hit someone with the empty bottle. 
    • You can make the reader do the right amount of work by hinting at things and allowing them to make assumptions rather than telling them everything directly. By luring them to insinuation and allowing them to draw their own conclusions, they are much more easily persuaded. 
    • You don’t need to make a new post to request feedback, just edit the original post. 
    • Class notes should be more simplistic, simply the important takeaways rather than summaries. 
    • Polio is difficult to eliminate because people don’t trust the vaccine and have numerous conspiracy theories against it. Smallpox was eradicated, polio could be too if it got down to zero cases. 
    • There is no such thing as a group of bi-partisan legislators, because a person can’t be bi-partisan. You can however have a bipartisan group of legislators, meaning the group is made up of some people from one party and some from the other party, not people who represent both parties. Wording is important.
    • Make a good persuasive case, it does not have to be sincere. Do not cite the article, you are the author, summarize and write the ideas as if they are first hand.
  25. GamersPet's avatar GamersPet says:

    From what I got was that I never actually heard about google scholar for my entire life until todays lecture. I’m glad that I don’t have to stress out over what sources I need to find to support my claims. Another thing was that I may have or not encounter articles that is paywalled until now, but it was nice to know that there are some articles which I can use the Rowan library to help me gain access to those sources. The use of word choices to surf the google scholar gave me a brief understanding of what it means narrow it down to a specific article by using quotation marks, and minus signs in front of words that I don’t want. The biggest tip I got was that if an article have references pages then I should definitely check them out to see if those references articles would actually be part of my sources to support my claims.

    I was finally be able to get the answer I wanted to figure out what that picture was in the counterintuitive website from the very beginning about polio disease.

    I got the gist of why a person can’t be a bi-partisan legislator whereas they can be a bi-partisan group of legislator because the meaning of a bi-partisan legislator is where a person is agreeing on both side of the parties that are opposing each other. A person can’t describe themselves as a bi-partisan legislator but if there more than one person in a group of legislator that are from different parties then that’s when it can be called a group of bi-partisans.

    To not summarized the article, but to get the main idea, and giving out important details than wasted words to give to the people who don’t know about that certain article. It is a way to interpret than to summarized an article to show purposeful meaning, and getting to the main point.

  26. 9/18/24

    Class notes – Figure8clementine

    • Google scholar, how to be specific with your searches and how to include or exclude certain details. Also discussed how to run those sources Into rowan’s library database online so you don’t have to do so in person.
    • Schedule a zoom conference with professor Hodges to discuss your hypothesis
    • The topic of the bottle of scotch was brought up again, and we talked about what the difference is in what you’re saying depending on your word choice. For example, the woman could not throw an empty bottle of scotch because an empty bottle of scotch does not exist. It does not exist because what makes the bottle of scotch a bottle of scotch, is the fact that there’s scotch in it. However, if i’m understanding it correctly, the woman could have emptied the bottle of scotch and thrown a scotch bottle instead, because the bottle was made for holding scotch. The difference in what these words are saying makes the statement more interesting, and completely shifts its connotation.
    • the previous point led us to discussing counterintuitive topics
    • brief discussion on the background of the image used on the blog of the little boy (discussed polio, medical injustices displaced people face, etc.)
    • Riddle: “Why is there no such thing as a group of bipartisan legislators?”- because bipartisan means you belong to one of the two sides, meaning someone cannot be both at once.
  27. unicorn45678's avatar unicorn45678 says:

    Google scholar

    • Google scholar is a great  tool to use for finding sources and to also explore different topics 
    • I never really knew about google scholar until my meeting with the professor yesterday 
    • By finding out about google scholar, it would be a huge help for when im writing an essay for any of my classes 

    Empty Scotch bottle vs Empty bottle of Scotch 

    • The difference between an empty bottle of scotch vs an empty scotch bottle is that there’s no such thing as an empty bottle of scotch.
    • By reading the riddle almost 4 times and hearing the professor repeat the question I didn’t really understand until I took my time to read it 
    • The main idea behind this riddle is to read more careful and use proper grammar 

    Why is there no such thing as a group of bi-partisan legislators

    • You can’t be a member of both parties
    • You either on the blue team or red 
    • It’s not illegal 
    • However there can be a bi-partisan group of legislators 

    Class Notes 

    • Class notes should be your own summary of what you learned during class time 

                  *ex:    Red and blue together + bi- partisan legislators = no

                            Red and blue group + bi-partisan group = yes

    *To maintain your health you have to drink 2 liters of water 

    • Why is this a statement?
    • Why should we believe this?

    Purposeful summary tasks 

    • It doesn’t matter what u believe you, you have to promote your ideas 
  28. Bagel&Coffee's avatar Bagel&Coffee says:

    Today we read a quote by myfavorteprofessordavidbdale: “Be proud of your work but not arrogant.” It was emphasized that we should be discreetly proud of our work and assume by the default we are ridiculous. However, is it not thought provoking to ask yourself why is this the paradigm being set up? Of course, I already know I am absolutely ridiculous, as I regularly do and write things others do not. Pride with out fanfare? Sure. But still, why? The answer I think, is to prime us for the gut punch called criticism; might I add on a website public enough to receive from many directions. Critical thinking demands much in the resources of nuance and perspective. There conceivably could be criticisms of vastly different views or that plunge deeper into topics. Criticism should be met with humility.

    Today we looked at Google Scholar. Lovely offspring of Google, which enables a user to filter the firehose of information that is the internet to only scholarly sources. Though a potential downside of this kind of information is that it is often behind a subscription paywall. This, as we have been informed, can be remedied in the library. Not just any library. Colleges often have subscriptions to academic to the resources we are finding in Google Scholar. I plan to secure the urls of interest to my hypothesis and then, use the college library go down the rabbit holes.

    Do not only look at the abstract, read the actually read the paper, is up next. We were instructed to get into the “heart of a paper”, or “body” as its officially called. But “heart” as is more specific implies getting to the meaning of a matter. A meaning which may be absolutely separate for our interests from the abstract or executive summaries that will be presented to us at the beginning of these scholarly articles.

    Linking with the paragraph from above, we were instructed that we should not quote from the abstract but should instead quote from the body of the paper. I trust I will better understand this practice one I get into the trenches. My experience of scholarly papers so far usually starts with a somewhat understandable abstract, then goes into to statistical jargon and variables that are meaningless without any meaningful context in which to orient them. Not to mention the ones I have come across are usually so dry of a read. Time will tell how this will unfold.

    Use the reference list of articles and papers you like. What a great tip! I understood this immediately as I do this often with news articles. Another way of saying, I find some new articles lacking in the information I actually want often due to oversimplification of a study, obscuration of contextual middle-ish events that led up to the headline, or sometimes outright omission of information! The cure is sometimes just using all the hyperlinks relating to the article for fuller pictures of a story to parse though. After reflecting briefly, perhaps our professor has encountered the same inconveniences and thus why he is emphasizing that we should scour the body of a paper to unravel its mysteries.

    Revisiting the scotch riddle, now with hidden text! I have not seen this technique used in a while. Using white text on against a white background is a popular practice on not popular websites. The popular websites like X allow for text to be hidden by an overlay that says “spoilers”. When reading the hidden text I noticed 6 sentences, each a slightly different variation of the phrase “She hit me with an empty scotch bottle.” Within THIS CONTEXT, I immediately grasped the distinction between “empty bottle of scotch” and “bottle of empty scotch” and all the other variations that was not readily apparent by simply reading “scotch bottle” in a vacuum. I am well accustomed to analyzing the precision in words in a sentence and exercise regularly saying things a precise and unambiguous way. It is strange and intriguing to me as to why the concept was so much more palatable, that I griped it at an instinctual level with the fast-think part of my brain upon seeing 6 sentences lined up with slightly different variations.

    How to use Feedback. Easy, post something in Feeback. The instructor will respond, and then move it to elsewhere. You may post in Feedback as many times as you like (I bet no one has tested this as a prank), and he will respond back to each one each time.

    Why are class notes important? The simple answer is that they are for attendance. Though secretly I think it’s also for engagement. What better way to learn materials than to engage with them?!

    We must take potentially 8,000 words and condense them into 3,000 words in our own paper. That is to say the academic papers we will be reading will be longer than our own paper in all likelihood. The skill that we must exercise is to distil the academic paper for our own use. To “betray” it into our own language while also never lying.

    It is important to write notes purposefully. This is just as I mentioned earlier in “getting to the heart” of the matter we are researching. I do not need to rehash here what has already been elaborated earlier.

    The banner and wallpaper of this blog is of a child with a drip, presumably medicine, but in hindsight could be some kind of vaccination, going into his mouth. Either way it apparently has to do with the fight against polio. Polio has almost been eliminated like smallpox, but after billions of dollars and numerous smarter people than I, it has never fully gone away due to people not vaccinated. In some cases it is due to upheaval and chaos forcing people into conditions where such an unusual disease is less unusual. In other events it is due to questing, doubt, or outright unwillingness to get vaccinated. The notorious “Anti Vaxers” have become more prominent in recent years as have their various efforts. Might I also add there is finical incentive for some in the Veen Diagram of Anti Vaxer and Supplement seller.

    The riddle of the day: You cannot have a bipartisan legislator. This is because such a circumstance would mean that you have one person who is a member of two separate parties. In the U.S. politics we have a two-party system. You are a member of team read or team blue. It should be noted however that you can pass bipartisan legislation or have a situation involving a bipartisan committee. Reflecting further, one might be able to make the argument that bipartisan legislator could exist, borrowing from definition of a double agent or double crosser like (un)seen in spy-craft. Could you imagine if someone in our politics was not just a member of his party but also that of a foreign government too?! Hey, two parties are all you need to check off both of the boxes for “bi” in bipartisan.

    Headline: Don’t just say in your paper you need sleep and water and food to be healthy, tell me why. If you tell me that sleep is overrated and we are getting too much of it, and you have my attention. I think what he is looking for are that our final thesis is strange, alien, or against the grain of our social conventions. You could almost say something that is…”Counter Intuitive”!

    This just in: I am looking for counter intuitive thinking here in these papers. Yea, this just spells out what I mention above and takes away my cheesy thunder. No need to retread this water.

    On summaries, it is not just a summery but purposeful writing that is perhaps the key. I would surmise that by making a conclusion that you would by default be making a meaningful assertion, and therefore making your paper meaningful. We will see if this hypothesis holds true in the future.

    You cannot mention the writer or the article itself. Why? I do not know. However, I do not mind. It should not be too hard to write in a passive way. It is ok mention people in the articles. Well, that’s good, so I do not have to utilize a bunch of unwieldly pronouns all over the paper to hide identities. As to why I can mention names if the names are already out of the bag in the article but not the author, I do not know. I don’t care that much either since it won’t get in my way.

  29. student12121's avatar student12121 says:

    Class Notes – 9/18/24

    Suggested responses can be hidden in questions. Questions should be open ended and without suggestion if the response is to be truly uninfluenced.

    Google scholar is a way better source then regular google. You can use “” to make sure a phrase is searched for together rather than independently. If you are trying to exclude results you can use the – symbol to remove all articles with that word in it.

    Nearly identical sentences can be very different in meaning and can be filled with implications.

  30. Class notes:

    • google scholar
    • it can help you find good resources and help find different topics
    • its good to help you start your research and minimize all of the “fake sources”
    • we also learned the importance of class notes and how they can help us keep up with the class
    • its important to talk about what we learned to help understand better then to just copy everything

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