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Reflective—Patrickthestar
Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. Throughout this process, I worked to develop my ideas and respond to feedback in … Continue reading
Annotated bibliography- PATRICKTHESTAR!
Bibliography—Patrickthestar1 California Health Care Foundation. (2022).Health4All: Expanding Medicaid for undocumented immigrants in California. California Health Care Foundation. Retrieved from [https://health-access.org/campaigns/health4all/] How I Used It: This source was important to show how community based programs can help a wide range of … Continue reading
Research-Patrickthestar1
The Hidden Cost of Neglect: How covid exposed a broken system When we think about how people struggle emotionally, it’s easy to assume it just “happened out of nowhere.” But just like how tears aren’t always straightforward—sometimes we cry out … Continue reading
Causal argument draft-patrickthestar1
A Crisis Exposed: How the COVID-19 Pandemic Amplified Mental Health Inequities in Marginalized Communities When we think about how people struggle emotionally, it’s easy to assume it just “happened out of nowhere.” But just like how our tears aren’t always … Continue reading
Causal Argument rewrite—PatrickTheStar
A Crisis Exposed: How the COVID-19 Pandemic Amplified Mental Health Inequities in Marginalized Communities When we think about how people struggle emotionally, it’s easy to assume it just “happened out of nowhere.” But just like how our tears aren’t always … Continue reading
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Patrickthestar-The Banned 2nd Person
1.Taxpayers often question if spending more money on education makes a difference. And it does. Ask any parent whose child attends an expensive school. 2.There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport. Would there be objection to … Continue reading
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Rebuttal Rewrite—Patrickthestar
Focusing on the Symptoms: Why Ignoring Systemic Inequities Won’t Cure this Mental Health crisis The Covid-19 pandemic not only harmed our physical health, it also created a mental health crisis. Many people felt nervous,isolated, and anxious during that time. However … Continue reading
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Rebuttal Argument- patrickthestar
Focusing on the Symptoms: Why Ignoring Systemic Inequities Won’t Cure this Mental Health crisis The Covid-19 pandemic not only harmed our physical health, it also created a mental health crisis. Many people felt nervous,isolated, and anxious during that time. However … Continue reading
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Definition Rewrite—Patrickthestar
Covid-19 Highlighted Mental Health Disparitiesin Marginalized Communities A mental health crisis in its traditional understanding can be understood as an unanticipated surge in mental health challenges that arise when the available resources aren’t enough to support demand.While this definition remains … Continue reading
Definition—Patrickthestar1
Covid-19 Highlighted Mental Health Disparitiesin Marginalized Communities A mental health crisis in its traditional understanding can be understood as an unanticipated surge in mental health challenges that arise when the available resources aren’t enough to support demand.While this definition remains … Continue reading
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