Author Archives: yardie

Annotated Bibliography – yardie

The lack of knowledge about diet contributes more significantly to the obesity epidemic in America than the lack of exercise. While physical activity is an important factor in maintaining a healthy weight, the overwhelming commonness of misinformation on nutrition pushed … Continue reading →

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Reflective – yardie

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. The work that best demonstrates this core value would be my Definition—yardie post. Being … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Argument Rewrite – yardie

Does eating a whole foods diet and having self-control with food matter when there are easy-to-take weight loss pills, surgeries, gyms, and other quick fixes? Contrary to my argument that the lack of knowledge about healthy eating habits contributes more … Continue reading →

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Research – yardie

American Obesity: A Consequence of Exploitation We are a fat country. Americans are continuing to contribute to the rising rates of obesity. Still, even after knowing about the problematic disease, we choose to spend thousands every year on “weight loss … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Argument – yardie

The Obesity Tricks Does eating a whole foods diet and having self-control with food matter when there are easy-to-take weight loss pills, surgeries, gyms, and other quick fixes? Contrary to my argument that the lack of knowledge about healthy eating … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – yardie

The 4 Reasons We Are a Fat Country Americans don’t want to give up their Burger King’s Triple Whopper with Cheese, the Ben and Jerry’s ice cream at 2 am, and the bottomless all-you-can-eat fries, wings, and sodas at their … Continue reading →

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Causal Argument – yardie

4 Causes to Why We Have Become a Fat Country References ” https://ajcn.nutrition.org/article/S0002-9165(23)66356-7/fulltext” The American Journal, Clinical Nutrition. March 2024. ” https://www.health.harvard.edu/staying-healthy/why-people-become-overweight” ‘Why Are People Becoming Overweight?’ June 24, 2019 Havard Medical School ” https://www.webmd.com/obesity/news/20231215/what-causes-obesity-more-science-points-brain” ‘What Causes Obesity? More Science … Continue reading →

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Definition Rewrite – yardie

American Obesity: A Consequence of Exploitation We are a fat country. Americans are continuing to contribute to the rising rates of obesity. Still, even after knowing about the problematic disease, we choose to spend thousands every year on “weight loss … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – yardie

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Based on what parents with children who go to more expensive schools say, yes, it does. Different types of injuries occur in sports. Would objections arise if it were known … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs (Revised) – yardie

Addicts from Vancouver are stealing, participating in prostitution, and committing theft to support their daily dosages of heroin. Addicts have a hard time keeping jobs, interacting with people, and maintaining healthy relationships. The “free heroin for addicts” program says they … Continue reading →

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