Category Archives: GRADED

Rebuttal Argument – Mongoose449

Posted on December 2, 2024 by Mongoose449

Humans are good little squirrels that bury their nuts then forget about them. Humans do not have the mental foresight to prepare a long-term future. Squirrels, like many mammals, prepare for the winter by stashing food in dugouts, and fattening … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite – KFury

Posted on December 2, 2024 by KFury205

Are Baseball bats being tampered with for Profit?  In Major League Baseball, the durability of baseball bats plays an important part in player safety, equipment performance, and the integrity of the sport. With improvements in technology and materials, baseball bats … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal rewrite – KFury

Posted on December 2, 2024 by KFury205

An Argument of Integrity In the sports equipment industry, companies often prioritize profit over material quality, using cheaper materials to cut costs. Critics may argue that this happens in MLB bat manufacturing, suggesting that profit-driven decisions lead to the use … Continue reading →

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Definition Rewrite – KFury

Posted on December 2, 2024 by KFury205

Professional Baseball Bats Tampered with for a Profit?  When you are in a professional baseball game the durability of baseball bats is more than just a technical consideration it’s a crucial aspect that impacts both player safety and the integrity … Continue reading →

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Research Position Paper – student12121

Posted on December 1, 2024 by student12121

The DANGERS of Carbon-Plated Shoes TO High Mileage Runners Long distance running is evolving rapidly. Shoe technology is evolving with it, but with each new technology comes risk to the athlete. Modern race shoes have been affectionately nicknamed “super shoes” … Continue reading →

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Research – Student1512

Posted on December 1, 2024 by student1512

The Role of Mental Health and Media in Shaping Impulsive Consumer Behavior 90.42% of Gen Z and Millennials engage in impulsive online shopping, according to McDonald’s ‘Survey Reveals Top Reasons Gen Zers and Millennials Make Impulse Purchases.’ This behavior can … Continue reading →

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Research – ChefRat

Posted on November 26, 2024 by ChefRat

Why Weightlifting Is the Best Thing You’re Not Letting Your Kids Do The misconception that weightlifting is dangerous for children is one that has persisted for far too long, completely fueled by outdated beliefs and a societal lack of understanding. … Continue reading →

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Thesis–Bagel&Coffee

Posted on November 26, 2024 by Bagel&Coffee

Tragic stories are better than happy ones at making sad people happy! [Intro, how I got here] I was chatting online with two randomly assigned teammates in a Space Marine 2 lobby. All of us knew the overarching story of … Continue reading →

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Causal Rewrite- Mongoose449

Posted on November 26, 2024 by Mongoose449

Living in caves helped prevent radiation leakage To Prehistoric humans, a natural cave ticked every box for survival. It kept them sheltered against the elements, it had a natural choke-point to fend off predators or opposing tribes, was difficult to … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Rewrite- Lobsterman

Posted on November 25, 2024 by lobsterman

The Skeptic A world that is completely void of creativity, artistic expression, and any absolute definition of truth sounds horrifying to most.  No matter how drastic, no matter how imminent, an incoming threat to the human race will always have … Continue reading →

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