Category Archives: GRADED

Rebuttal Rewrite- Taco491

Posted on November 25, 2024 by taco491

Disadvantages of Encouragement Encouragement is often seen as beneficial for children, with many studies linking it to improved confidence, performance, and mental health. However, this view is misleading. While encouragement can boost short-term success, it can harm a child’s mental … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Argument-Softball1321

Posted on November 24, 2024 by Softball1321

Cell Phones and Broken Bonds It is true that the use of cell phones can be a distraction from face-to-face interactions, which can possibly ruin relationships between friends, family, partners, or any person that we have a shared connection with. … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Argument Rewrite—GamersPet

Posted on November 24, 2024 by GamersPet

A Daily Dose of Caffeine Addiction I firmly believe that my statement about caffeine being a psychologically addicting substance based on researchers’ reports about how caffeine does to our brains is factual. Of course, there is no surprise that there … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Rewrite – LoverofCatsandMatcha

Posted on November 24, 2024 by loverofcatsandmatcha

The Impacts of Surroundings on Our Mental Wellbeing What shapes us into the people we become? Childhood and early adolescence are the most formative periods of our lives– and they are responsible for forming the people that we become. They … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – SkibidySigma

Posted on November 24, 2024 by SkibidySigma

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Upon closer consideration, it certainly does. Ask any parent whose child attends an expensive school. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport. Would anyone object … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Rewrite-phoenixxxx23

Posted on November 24, 2024 by phoenixxxx23

Your Smartphone Could Be Good for you My phone makes me feel empty. Despite the endless stream of notifications and the illusion of connection, it’s like trying to warm your hands at a fire that’s already burned out: “It’s a … Continue reading →

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Robust Verb – Burnbook04

Posted on November 23, 2024 by Burnbook04

The huge problem in Vancouver is with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that a large crime rate due to … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – Mongoose449

Posted on November 23, 2024 by Mongoose449

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Yes it does, ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Would anyone object if they knew that a surgery … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal – KFury

Posted on November 22, 2024 by KFury205

An Argument of Integrity In the sports equipment industry, companies often prioritize profit over material quality, leading to the use of cheaper materials in products designed for teams. Critics argue that companies focus on safety and performance, using high-quality materials … Continue reading →

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banned 2nd person- lil.sapph

Posted on November 22, 2024 by lil.sapph

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference, but any parent whose child goes to an expensive school would positively agree.  There are different types of injuries that can happen in each sport, yet there is a … Continue reading →

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