Category Archives: GRADED

2nd Person – pineapple488

Taxpayers often wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Upon closer examination, it becomes evident that it does. This can be confirmed by asking any parent whose child attends an expensive school. Different types of injuries occur … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Rewrite-Goat81

Artistic Integrity vs. Athletic Precision: The Balance Debate in Olympic Ice Skating For years, Olympic figure skating has been caught in a debate over two competing priorities: technical skill and artistic expression. Critics who favor artistry argue that skating is … Continue reading →

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2nd Person-Goat81

1.) Taxpayers often question whether spending money on students makes a difference. The answer is yes, and any parent with a child in an expensive school would likely agree. 2.) Every sport comes with its own types of injuries. If … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – Unicorn

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Any parent whose child goes to an expensive school would also agree. Different sports can lead to different types of injures, would having surgery before an injury happens be a … Continue reading →

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2nd Person—Phoenixxxx23

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference.Any parent sending a child to an expensive school knows that the amount of taxpayers money spent on schools does make a difference There are different types of injuries that … Continue reading →

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2nd Person—GamersPet

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Parents whose child goes to an expensive school would agree otherwise. If we knew that surgery performed before any injury could strengthen an athlete who differs in each sport, … Continue reading →

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2nd Person- RoboFrog

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. When really thought about, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport. Would we object if it was proven that surgery … Continue reading →

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banned 2nd person – Burnbook04

The 11 Problem Sentences Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. If we really think about it, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school. There are different types of injuries that happen in each … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – student12121

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. When considered analytically the answer becomes clear, yes. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Is there … Continue reading →

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2nd person- iloveme5

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. When considered carefully, it does. Any parent whose child attends an expensive school can attest to this. There are different types of injuries that occur in each sport. It … Continue reading →

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