Category Archives: GRADED

2nd Person– MAD ClTY

Posted on November 20, 2024 by MAD ClTY

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school, and they will say, “Yes.” There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport. Contrary to what … Continue reading →

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2nd Person – Who’s On First?

Posted on November 20, 2024 by Who'sOnFirst?

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. If you really think about it, yes it does. Ask any parent whose child goes to an expensive school. Any parent sending a child to an expensive school knows … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs- Elongated Lobster

Posted on November 19, 2024 by Elongated lobster

There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large crime … Continue reading →

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Rebuttal Rewrite – ChefRat

Posted on November 19, 2024 by ChefRat

Young Age Doesn’t Equate Immaturity A popular belief among many parents is that children are too immature to safely engage in weightlifting, that they should wait until they’re older and responsible enough. Parents often dismiss the idea of their kids … Continue reading →

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2nd Person- Lobsterman

Posted on November 19, 2024 by lobsterman

Taxpayers wonder whether the amount spent on students makes a difference. Any parent whose child is going to an expensive school would argue that it does. There are different types of injuries that happen in each sport.  Would anyone object … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs- Lobsterman

Posted on November 19, 2024 by lobsterman

Origanal paragraph- “There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs – Who’s On First?

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Who'sOnFirst?

Vancouver heroin addicts can get drugs for free, but they just can’t seem to stop stealing instead. Maintaining jobs, relationships, and friendships is nearly impossible for these addicts whose lives are perpetuated by this cycle of crime. Heroin has put … Continue reading →

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PTSD Claims—Patrickthestar

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Patrick The Star

“In 2009, it was Hovda who delivered the Pentagon the recommendation that because multiple concussions could cause serious long-term injury, concussions need time to heal.” Claim Type:Casual Claim- this is a causal claim because of the assertion that multiple concussions … Continue reading →

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robust verbs- Patrickthestar1

Posted on November 18, 2024 by Patrick The Star

revised paragraph: Heroin addiction in Vancouver is causing a crime wave as addicts commit crimes to fund their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program attempts to lessen these crimes, but it fails to address the root of the problem. … Continue reading →

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Robust Verbs – pineapple448

Posted on November 17, 2024 by pineapple488

Original: There is a huge problem in Vancouver with heroin addicts committing crimes to support their habits. The “free heroin for addicts” program is doing everything they can to stop the addicts. The problem is that there is a large … Continue reading →

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