Causal Argument – yardie

4 Causes to Why We Have Become a Fat Country

References

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Definition Rewrite – yardie

American Obesity: A Consequence of Exploitation

We are a fat country. Americans are continuing to contribute to the rising rates of obesity. Still, even after knowing about the problematic disease, we choose to spend thousands every year on “weight loss solutions.” Weight loss pills, gym memberships, surgeries, expensive equipment, and personal trainers are encouraged now more than ever. People are constantly exposed to the algorithms and expectations of having a healthy lifestyle, where social media displays the enticing lifestyles of thin, active, and healthy celebrities. Taking advantage of this, weight loss programs conspire to addict us to an endless cycle of gaining and losing the same weight over and over again. The real solution is to eat healthier.

The lack of knowledge about diet contributes more significantly to the obesity epidemic in America than the lack of exercise. While physical activity is an important factor in maintaining a healthy weight, the overwhelming commonness of misinformation on nutrition pushed on us by exploiters who want our money plays a crucial role in the rising rates of obesity. 

According to the National Institute of Diabetes and Digestive and Kidney Diseases, “1 in 3 adults are overweight” and “more than 2 in 5 adults have obesity.” Obesity described by the World Health Organization is “a chronic complex disease defined by excessive fat deposits that can impair health.” Obesity is said to likely lead to higher risk of type 2 diabetes, heart disease, cancers, and bone health and reproduction issues. The diagnosis for obesity is done by dividing a person’s weight by their height to get their BMI, body mass index. Body mass index is a surrogate marker of fatness and additional measurements that help indicate whether or not a person has obesity.

The number one cause of this obesity epidemic is said to be the consumption of processed foods. Processed foods are a significant contributor to the obesity epidemic and it doesn’t help that these options are addictive, easily accessible, and cheaper in price. While this issue exists, it’s essential to consider the broader context, including lifestyle, socioeconomic status, and education about nutrition. 

A person’s food choices are often influenced by cultural, behavioral, environmental, and socioeconomic influences. Today, there is less concern of what Americans necessarily put into their mouths, but instead if you go to the gym, or participate in a physical activity or not. We are programmed to this lifestyle by societal costumes, influenced heavily by the media. It is normal to see people online participating in mukbangs, or food reviews. The common pattern in these videos however, is that the food being consumed is almost always fast food, or processed foods and excessive amounts of it. 

Processed foods today are all around Americans, everywhere we go. It is portrayed as something not necessarily healthy, but not completely bad for US either. Everyday we are met with ads, videos, images that promote processed foods, which subtly promotes obesity and unhealthy consumption. Based on the WebMD article, What Are Processed Foods, “Processed foods refers to any food that’s changed from its natural state. This can include food that was simply cut, washed, heated, pasteurized, canned, cooked, frozen, dried, dehydrated, mixed, or packaged. It also can include food that has added preservatives, nutrients, flavors, salts, sugars, or fats.” 

The cause of obesity goes back to a person’s insulin resistance and how well their body is able to control it. Insulin is a peptide hormone that is released in the body every time a person consumes food, according the Cleveland Clinic article, Insulin Resistance, “Insulin resistance is a complex condition in which your body does not respond as it should to insulin, a hormone your pancreas makes that’s essential for regulating blood sugar levels.” The American diet however, has no respect for insulin control and has neglected their bodies. The truth is society and world rulers want us in a cycle to exploit and control humans. The cycle of consuming unhealthy foods, gaining weight, wanting to lose it or become healthy, and then going to the gym and paying more money when the temporary results don’t last.

The popular, new culture, created by humans is to look good, and feel good. How is this attained? They tell you to get surgeries, go to the gym, take certain medications, or get on weight loss plans. America is very quick to look at the outer appearance to want to start making changes when they don’t meet the stereotypical expectation of a healthy lifestyle. Exercise is often the first recommendation for those looking to lose weight. Many are advised that the most effective strategy for rapid weight loss is the “calories in, calories out” approach. While experts typically advocate for incorporating some form of physical activity, the question remains: how should one go about it? According to the Weight Loss Resources article, What is Exercise?exercise is “any movement that works your body at a greater intensity than your usual level of daily activity. Exercise raises your heart rate and works your muscles and is most commonly undertaken to achieve the aim of physical fitness.” 

These easy and simple approaches to fitness often provide only temporary solutions, addressing the symptoms rather than the underlying issues. A more effective way to tackle the obesity epidemic is to change the food industry and how we consume food. Embracing a diet that prioritizes whole, unprocessed foods, where what we eat is as close to its natural state as possible and offers a healthier, more sustainable solution. To do this we have to better understand what a whole foods diet entails. According to the Mayo Clinic article, Choose a whole-foods diet for a healthier you, “A whole-foods diet simply means choosing foods that are minimally processed. Think fresh fruits and vegetables, nuts, seeds, oils, and whole grains. Meat and dairy are perfectly acceptable, but the idea is to choose those foods in moderation (a few times a week as opposed to every meal) and focus instead on fueling up with unprocessed plant foods for most of your meals.” 

In conclusion, we should start to think more and have a mind of our own. It is very easy to get drawn in and submit to the controls of the world. Addressing the obesity epidemic requires a comprehensive approach centered around improved dietary plans. We must limit our exposure to processed foods and prioritize whole, natural options that nourish our bodies. The human body thrives on natural nutrients, and it’s essential that we return to these foundational choices. Additionally, we should reduce the advertising of processed foods and raise awareness about their negative impacts on health. By making these changes, we can foster a healthier future for everyone.

References

https://www.who.int/news-room/fact-sheets/detail/obesity-and-overweight World Health Organization

https://www.niddk.nih.gov/health-information/health-statistics/overweight-obesity#:~:text=Adults,-Age%2Dadjusted%20percentage&text=the%20above%20table-,Nearly%201%20in%203%20adults%20(30.7%25)%20are%20overweight.,obesity%20(including%20severe%20obesity).National Institute of Diabetes and digestive and Kidney Diseases

https://www.webmd.com/diet/what-are-processed-foods WebMD What Are Processed Foods?

https://my.clevelandclinic.org/health/diseases/22206-insulin-resistance Cleveland Clinic Insulin Resistance

https://www.weightlossresources.co.uk/exercise/questions-answers/what-is-exercise.htm Weight Loss Resources, What is Exercise?

https://communityhealth.mayoclinic.org/featured-stories/whole-foods-diet-030421Mayo Clinic, Choose a whole-foods diet for a healthier you

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Reflective-Elongated Lobster

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development.

My work demonstrates this core value by incorporating peer feedback and instructor feedback within the stages of my writing in order to better refine my ideas. Through researching the topics for my essay, I actively looked for new perspectives and insights in order to better synthesize information from multiple sources. This process enabled me to conceptualize and find solutions to the issues outlined in my hypothesis and allowed me to develop more thoughtful outcomes and support to back it up. One way that I did this was by looking at each of my sources and the ideas for my essays and talked to my peers regarding each one to see if they would help me achieve what I was setting out to achieve with my essays. This was done in my proposal +5 assignment to help me start off my research for the final paper. These practices helped to enrich my learning but also contributed what I believe to be meaningful, well-rounded results. https://wordpress.com/post/rowancomp2.com/24590

Core Value 2. My work demonstrates that I read critically, and that I placed texts into conversation with one another to create meaning by synthesizing ideas from various discourse communities. 

My work demonstrates these through thoughtful analysis and engagement with diverse sources. I actively sought connections between ideas, drawing from various sources and viewpoints in order to create a full perspective on the topic at hand, adding a nuanced aspect within the writing. I explored how differing perspectives can challenge and inform a reader and open the floor for them to reflect on their own views and why they think in such a way. This also allowed for me to have deeper insights in the end by comparing contrasting viewpoints in order to evaluate the validity of each argument and synthesized them to present a more comprehensive understanding of them. This was done in my final paper where I synthesized two different ideas together from multiple sources while also addressing any arguments against my viewpoint to prove why my argument was not just feasible, but could have a large positive impact. Ultimately, my work on this essay reflected a commitment to thoughtful and critical inquiry into different view points and how I was able to synthesize them together. https://wordpress.com/post/rowancomp2.com/28201

Core Value 3. My work demonstrates that I rhetorically analyzed the purpose, audience, and contexts of my own writing and other texts and visual arguments.

My work demonstrates this by critically examining how these elements shape both my writing and texts or arguments I engage with. I took the time to carefully consider the intended audience for each piece, as well as attempting to create a structure that I felt would resonate the most effectively with whoever happened to be reading my essays. Similarly, I analyzed the purpose behind my own writing in order to ensure that my arguments aligned with my objectives and addressed the potential questions that the audience may have. When reading through other texts or visuals, I explored the rhetorical strategies that were being used and how these strategies contributed to achieving the desired result of the author, which allowed for me to evaluate the effectiveness of their arguments within their specific context. I did this within my own assignments in the visual rhetoric assignment. This assignment allowed for me to look at a visual without sound to see how the rhetorical devices that were used visually can contribute to the meaning and the feeling portrayed within the video. https://wordpress.com/post/rowancomp2.com/25716

Core Value 4: My work demonstrates that I have met the expectations of academic writing by locating, evaluating, and incorporating illustrations and evidence to support my own ideas and interpretations.

My work demonstrates this value through extensive research and thoughtful integration of credible sources. I was able to locate evidence by looking through peer-reviewed journals, books, and other reliable websites online. This allowed for me to ensure that the information that I included was accurate and relevant to my arguments. I looked through each of the sources that I chose for validity, reliability, and connection to my arguments. Additionally, I used examples, statistics, and case studies to help support ideas that I was referencing in order to show that my arguments were backed up with not just other pieces of writing, but also reliable data. I did this within my Definition essay assignment by using figures published by the American Psychological Association as well as Harvard University to support my claims. This allowed for me to enhance the overall quality of my writing as a whole while adding to my own personal understanding of the topic. https://wordpress.com/post/rowancomp2.com/25214

Core Value 5. My work demonstrates that I respect my ethical responsibility to represent complex ideas fairly and to the sources of my information with appropriate citation. 

In my writing, I consistently strive to portray nuanced concepts in a balanced and impartial manner which ensures that diverse perspectives are acknowledged and considered. To uphold this value, I ensure to cite all of the sources of information that I use in the proper formats, which allows any reader to read through the works that I cite to see if I altered the viewpoint of the original piece and simply handpicked a few sentences or if I truly represented the source that was cited. This practice allows for me to avoid plagiarism while also giving due credit to original authors to show who and how my ideas were influenced throughout my writing. I did this within my proposal +5 by properly citing all of the sources that I intend to use while also outlining what they are talking about and how I plan on using them in my own writing. https://wordpress.com/post/rowancomp2.com/24590

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Robust very rewrite -Burnbook04

Heroin addicts who commit crimes to fund their addictions are a major issue in Vancouver. The “free heroin for addicts” initiative is making every effort to help the addicts stop. The issue is the high crime rate brought on by addicts. It is difficult for addicts to go about their daily lives. Because they are used, daily activities including relationships, employment, and encounters are challenging to maintain. Addicts who are addicted to heroin will stop at nothing to obtain the drug. The offenses that have been committed include theft breaking and entering. They will go to any lengths to obtain this drug to satisfy their addiction.

This program’s drawback is that it won’t assist in weaning these heroin addicts off of the drug. merely attempting to protect the city from the escalating rates of crime they are causing. Giving these addicts the drug will keep them off the streets and stop them from committing small-time crimes. Additionally, this will prevent heroin users from visiting hospitals. It is useless for hospitals to deal with patients who wish to use dirty needles or harmful medications, can’t afford hospital bills, and find it difficult to live without the drug. This initiative provides heroin to people in the most hygienic manner imaginable. The city will be fixed as a result, but the addiction these people suffer from won’t.

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Purposeful summary rewrite – Burnbook04

The majority of Haiti’s population was wiped away by a devastating earthquake in 2010. In addition to causing widespread destruction, the earthquake also created disruption throughout Haiti. After the earthquake, desperate families turned to looting in an attempt to save what they had left. Most people would consider this to be a small matter, but in Haiti, it was so significant that a 15-year-old child’s life had to be sacrificed for a painting that could have been simply replaced. Fabienne Cherisma was shot and killed by police on January 19th while she was out stealing. Blood covered the streets, she was left there alone as if she meant nothing, and the bullet struck her in the head, killing her and forcing her to collapse on top of the paintings she had stolen. For the media, photographers would enter and snap different pictures of her dead body. denying the young girl who just lost her life any space to grieve or even a modicum of dignity.

Fabienne’s parents wrote a post on January 26th, reminiscing about their daughter’s life, her bright future, her favorite things, and her dream of becoming a nurse. A humble reminder that it wasn’t just any youngster but rather a daughter, sister, cousin, niece, friend, and sufferer of the fallout from discrimination, the message was brief and pure. The loss of Fabienne affected individuals all across the world. Her death stands out from the thousands of other deaths that occurred in Haiti because it was not caused by natural selection or money. The photographer’s main goal was to capture the tragedies occurring in Haiti to raise awareness and possibly raise money to assist the country’s recovery. However, many of the photographers received criticism for simply showing there and doing nothing. What more are they capable of doing but endanger themselves and increase the death toll? All things considered, Fabienne’s passing and the deaths of the other thousands of Haitian residents are awful and ought to be memorialized in some way.

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Reflective—GamersPet

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development.

From the beginning of the semester, I wasn’t able to identify my purpose of what to write about my 3000-word research essay until I found an idea as time went on. I was in the dark until I discovered my definitive argument by seeking guidance from my professor through Zoom meetings and gaining feedback from the people at my workplace. I was relieved that my first definitive topic about caffeine being a psychological drug was superior to my second topic about online and traditional classes. I used my chance to implement this course for my other assignment in a different class where I had to gather interviews from people to gain feedback on the project based on what my team and I were working on.

Core Value 2. My work demonstrates that I read critically, and that I placed texts into conversation with one another to create meaning by synthesizing ideas from various discourse communities. 

I believe that I have obtained the goals of critically reading, and analyzing other people’s work to fully understand where their argument stands. I admired the method of acknowledging your “enemies”, and settling a dispute where you would have to stand firm and strong to your argument. The idea of noticing your “enemies” will be part of my routine thinking since there will always be two sides that will clash with each other. I’ve used real-life examples for my rebuttal rewrite like the pandemic of COVID-19 where their opinions about using caffeine can act like a chemical drug when my argument is that caffeine is psychological. Another example is how I can confirm that there is more than one author who shares the same idea of caffeine being a physical drug so that I’m not trashing or curbstomping just one person.

Core Value 3. My work demonstrates that I rhetorically analyzed the purpose, audience, and contexts of my own writing and other texts and visual arguments

I had experienced analyzing the purpose, audience, and context before my visual rewrite which I was looking forward to doing the assignment. Before this assignment, I took the rudiments of art class where I was assigned to identify the meaning and purpose of why the artist chooses a specific color or why a certain object is in the frame. By doing the visual rewrite exercise, I felt that this assignment enhanced my analysis skills on a video that I’ve selected. I analyze the video in as much detail as possible by pointing out the smallest things that could make a huge difference. In the first paragraph of my visual rewrite, I identified the use of color and the theme that the director was going for to shift our focus onto the subject that is in front of us.

Core Value 4: My work demonstrates that I have met the expectations of academic writing by locating, evaluating, and incorporating illustrations and evidence to support my own ideas and interpretations.

I met this goal by searching for sources related to my argument and comparing my sources to verify that their reports align with each other. I’ve checked their references to further dive into their own sources to see if their claims aren’t made-up or fake for my bibliography. I even studied and gained background information from my sources to fully understand what I wanted to inform my readers by sharing my knowledge on what I have found. I specifically studied caffeine effects, heroin, drug addiction, and drug abuse to give myself a firm idea for my argument that my findings aren’t all bluff, or fake and the sources are verified and are credible to my cause. Without these sources, I wouldn’t validate or explain my ideas to my readers without solid proof to support my argument.

Core Value 5. My work demonstrates that I respect my ethical responsibility to represent complex ideas fairly and to the sources of my information with appropriate citation. 

In my research essay, I demonstrate my ethical responsibility of giving credit to my sources by acknowledging their studies for their theories through their test results. I made sure I didn’t fully take credit for the information I gained from my sources by stating that I solely got the information myself. I paraphrase and cite my sources by acknowledging that I have used certain words from my articles that I intend to share with my readers. I genuinely try to formulate my own words and knowledge from articles that act as a guideline for what I want my readers to know about my personal, supporting, and opposing arguments. It was a difficult task to find enemies that opposed my argument, but a simple conversation with people can help me get a reaction of how I feel, and be mindful of their opinion to that subject.

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Research-Elongated Lobster

A Potential Solution to Student Stress May be Right Outside the Window

Stress in adolescents has become an ever-growing issue, affecting millions of children daily. Research conducted by Professor Jean M. Twenge of San Diego State University, published by the American Psychological Association (APA), highlights that modern children experience significantly higher stress levels than previous generations, including post-World War II children of the 1950s and Cold War-era children of the 1980s Today’s stress levels among students are escalating at an alarming rate, largely driven by academic pressures and the persistent presence of schoolwork. To address this growing concern, society can look to the past, particularly to the philosophy of Henry David Thoreau as expressed in his memoir, Walden, which emphasizes the restorative power of connecting with nature. Applying Thoreau’s ideas may offer a much-needed reprieve for today’s overwhelmed students. 

Historically, the primary sources of stress for adolescents were often linked to existential threats as well as societal pressures that were outside of their immediate control. In the 1950s and 1980s, for example, children were concerned with the looming threat of nuclear war. These fears were largely shaped by global events and political tensions that were far removed from the everyday lives of children and teenagers. While these fears were significant and had profound impact on the way children viewed the world, they were largely external and irregular in nature, occurring sporadically based on political climates or international relations. These stressors were also more temporary as there were periods of heightened tension and periods of lessened tension. This is in contrast with the sources of stress for today’s adolescents as they are not only more immediate, but also more persistent, with much of the stress being internalized. The modern stresses that the youth face today are deeply embedded within the fabric of their personal lives, particularly revolving around their academic performance and social expectations. The pressures associated with succeeding in school, maintaining good grades, and meeting social standards have become ever-present, with students often feeling the wait of these concerns on a daily basis. 

The rise of digital technology, particularly in the realm of education, has amplified these challenges. In today’s world, the line between time for school work and personal time is increasingly blurred, leaving students with little opportunity to fully disconnect and relax. The widespread use of digital platforms such as Google Classroom and Canvas has dramatically changed the educational landscape, making it easier for students to access assignments, submit work, and receive feedback at all hours of the day. While these platforms were initially introduced with the intention of improving accessibility to learning, especially during the pandemic, they have inadvertently contributed to heightened stress levels. Students no longer have a clear boundary between school and home, as assignments and deadlines can now follow them wherever they go, creating a sense of constant pressure and expectations. Rather than being confined to the classroom, academic obligations now extend far beyond the school day, leaving students to juggle multiple responsibilities around the clock. 

A study conducted by the APA revealed that a significant portion of adolescents, 45% to be exact, report feeling stressed “all the time” about school. The results of this survey reflect how academic stress has evolved into a pervasive issue, affecting nearly half of all students. However, academic pressure is not the only source of stress in the modern world. The APA’s study also highlighted the role of other factors such as social media and extracurricular demands, which add additional layers of strain to adolescents already struggling with school-related pressures. Social media, in particular, has introduced a new set of expectations for young people, from maintaining a curated online persona to navigating the complex dynamics of virtual friendships. These pressures compound the stress of schoolwork, creating an environment where students feel as though they are constantly juggling competing demands for their time and energy. 

The omnipresence of technology has only worsened this cycle, making it more difficult for students to find relief from the stresses they face. The ability to assign homework, projects, and quizzes at any time of day or night has created a culture of perpetual deadlines. With the introduction of online platforms, teachers now have the capability to set strict deadlines, often as late as 11:59 p.m., and expect students to submit work over weekends. What was once a two-day break from academic responsibilities has now become an extension of the school week, where students are expected to be constantly available and engaged. As a result, students no longer have the luxury of a full weekend to decompress, relax, or participate in extracurricular activities without the looming pressure of unfinished assignments or upcoming deadlines. This shift in the educational systems has further eroded students’ ability to manage stress and maintain a healthy work-life balance. 

As previously mentioned, one of the major drawbacks of the shift to the increased use of technology in school is the rise of 11:59 p.m. and weekend deadlines. Supporters for this argue that these deadlines offer flexibility for students involved in extracurricular activities and encourage productivity by creating a sense of urgency; however, these arguments often fail to recognize the fact that students will procrastinate and have to deal with burnout and stress. An article titled “Why Do Students Procrastinate? Teachers Confirm That 11:59 is the Magic Hour” highlights that while some students find the late-night deadlines motivating, many others feel overwhelmed by the constant pressure. One high school AP in the article argues that, “When you have no other choice, you do it.” This very statement underscores the issue at hand: students feel as though they have no choice but to comply, even at the expense of their mental health. 

It would be naive to suggest that this is something that can be changed as stress and large workloads have always been a part of the education system and are unavoidable. It would also be difficult to move away from the 11:59 p.m. deadline as this has become a routine for many teachers and students and does give students more flexibility to get the work done after class hours, so many people would not want to get rid of this. So the question becomes, if the roots of stress in students is unavoidable, how can the education system help to reduce stress back down to the levels of prior generations? 

The answer to managing stress in today’s high-pressure environment can be found within the wisdom of Thoreau’s Walden; or, Life in the Woods. This memoir offers a timeless perspective on the profound role that nature plays in alleviating stress and restoring balance to life. In the memoir, Thoreau recounts his two-year experiment living at Walden Pond, where he embraced solitude and simplicity, depending on nature for physical sustenance and mental clarity. For Thoreau, nature was far more than a scenic backdrop; it was a vital source of spiritual and emotional rejuvenation. His assertion, “We need the tonic of wilderness,” conveys the idea that nature serves as a remedy for the ailments of modern life-stress, monotony, and disconnection.

Thoreau observed that the repetitive routines of daily existence often lead to feelings of entrapment and a sense of alienation from one’s authentic self. He believed that immersion in nature has the power to “reawaken” the human spirit, breaking the monotony and renewing a sense of purpose and vitality. His insights are now seen in modern scientific research, which confirms the tangible benefits of spending time in natural environments. A Harvard-published study, for instance, demonstrated that as little as 20 minutes in nature can significantly lower cortisol levels, a hormone directly tied to stress responses. Reduced cortisol levels are not only linked to a decrease in stress but also to improvements in mood, focus, and overall mental health. Similarly, a study published in Frontiers in Psychology found that spending just 10 minutes in a natural setting can lead to measurable reductions in heart rate and blood pressure, both critical indicators of stress. These findings affirm that Thoreau’s insights were not only profound but scientifically grounded, even centuries after he wrote about them. 

While Thoreau was able to retreat entirely to the woods for an extended period, most people, especially students, do not have the luxury to abandon their daily lives for such an endeavor. However, his core principle, the importance of reconnecting with nature, remains accessible and adaptable to modern lifestyles. Small actions, such as sitting outside during a break, taking a walk in a park, or engaging in outdoor exercise, can provide similar benefits to those outlined in the studies previously mentioned. These brief moments of connection with the natural world serve as a counterbalance to the relentless demands of academic and personal responsibilities. For students, incorporating these simple practices into their daily routines could help mitigate stress, boost mental clarity, and foster a greater sense of well-being in an increasingly hectic world. By embracing Thoreau’s advice, even in small amounts, individuals can reclaim a measure of balance and tranquility in their lives. 

How can students find moments to connect with nature amid their packed schedules? Schools and teachers can play a critical role in addressing this challenge by integrating nature into the educational system. One practical solution is for schools to establish outdoor learning spaces, such as gardens, courtyards, or shaded seating areas, where students can engage with nature while studying or doing work. These spaces can be designed to accommodate group activities, individual study, or even informal discussions, providing  flexibility for various teaching styles and students’ needs. For high school or middle school students, who often have structured and demanding schedules, teachers could hold classes outdoors when weather permits. This approach would allow for students to enjoy the restorative effects of nature without sacrificing instructional time, making it an efficient way to blend academics with wellness. 

Another strategy to help integrate this idea could be with the introduction of “nature breaks” during the school day. These shorter, scheduled periods would give students the chance to step outside, breathe fresh air, and experience a change of scenery. Research from the APA highlights that even brief exposure to nature can enhance concentration and productivity. Such breaks would not only benefit students by reducing stress, but also provide teachers an opportunity to recharge, creating a more positive and effective classroom environment. 

Parents and communities also play a vital role in fostering a connection with nature. Families can encourage outdoor activities, such as evening walks, gardening, or playing in local parks, as a way to counterbalance the heavy screentime often accompanying schoolwork and entertainment. Community involvement could also extend to creating shared green spaces or hosting outdoor events that promote relaxation and social interaction in a natural setting. These efforts will help to reinforce the value of nature in daily life and help to establish long-lasting habits that support mental and physical health. 

In addition to these initiatives, schools could offer workshops focused on time management and stress reduction. These sessions could empower students with practical tools to handle their academic workloads more effectively, such as learning how to prioritize tasks, avoid procrastination, and set achievable goals. Combined with lesions on mindfulness and relaxation techniques, these workshops could help students build resilience against pressures of the modern education system.

By emphasizing the importance of mental health alongside academic achievement, schools can create a more balanced and supportive learning environment. Incorporating these strategies not only aids students in managing their current stress but also equips them with valuable life skills that extend beyond the classroom and into their future. 

While the idea of incorporating nature into school routines as a means to alleviate student stress is compelling, there are those who argue against it. Some might argue that the pressures of modern education are too great for such solutions to make a meaningful impact, while others suggest that nature based- interventions are not feasible or effective in the context of a high-pressure academic environment. While there is some merit behind these claims, these arguments can be addressed. 

One of the main objections to integrating nature into schools is the argument that students’ academic and extracurricular obligations are overwhelming enough already. The critics of these ideas claim that students are already stretched thin with homework, exams, and extracurricular activities, and that adding additional breaks or outdoor classes may seem like an unnecessary distraction from the already packed curriculum. An article in the Journal of Education and Development titled “Outdoor education: Challenges and opportunities in modern education systems” also asserts that given the intensity of modern education systems, the idea of incorporating nature breaks or outdoor classes should be viewed as an unrealistic luxury rather than a necessity. 

Additionally, opponents may question the effectiveness of nature in alleviating stress, especially for students who may be dealing with more profound emotional or psychological issues. While spending time in nature has been shown to reduce cortisol levels and improve the moods of many students, as previously discussed, it may not be sufficient for those experiencing more severe anxiety, depression, or other mental health challenges. This argument is mostly rooted in the belief that the emphasis on nature-based solutions could divert attention away from addressing the deeper, systemic issues within the educational system, such as lack of mental health resources and unrealistic expectations placed upon students. They may suggest that rather than focusing on short-term interventions such as outdoor classes, schools should prioritize fundamental changes in how education is structured and how students’ well-being is supported. 

Furthermore, there are logistical concerns regarding the integration of nature into school systems. In urban areas where green spaces are limited or in schools located in regions with harsher weather conditions, creating outdoor learning spaces may not be feasible. Even if outdoor spaces can be created, there are financial and time constraints that schools may face in implementing such initiatives. Teachers may also be reluctant to adopt outdoor teaching methods due to concerns about classroom management, the potential for weather-related disruptions, or the lack of proper resources to support these practices. 

While these concerns are all valid, they do not necessarily outweigh the potential benefits of reconnecting students with nature. First, it is important to note that incorporating nature into school routines does not need to be an all-or-nothing solution. Even small adjustments, such as allowing students to take short walks to spend brief moments outside during breaks, such as a lunch period, can have noticeable effects on reducing stress and improving focus. These activities can be easily integrated into existing schedules without causing significant disruptions to academic learning. 

Moreover, addressing the underlying issues of academic pressure and mental health support is critical. A nature-based solution should not be seen as a replacement for the need of systemic changes within the education system, but rather as a complementary aid that can help to enhance student resilience and coping mechanisms. By providing students with opportunities to step away from their academic responsibilities and reconnect with the natural world, teachers and administrations will help build the mental and emotional strength needed to cope with ongoing pressures. 

In regards to the logistical challenges, it is true that not all schools have the infrastructure nor the resources to create extensive outdoor space; however, even simple changes such as holding classes in existing green areas, athletic fields or the front lawn for example, can make a difference. Additionally, technology can be utilized to help to some extent in more urban areas where there are no immediate green spaces within the school grounds. Teachers could hold virtual guided walks through nature via videos and provide some sense of connection and relaxation without requiring significant changes to the physical infrastructure, along with encouraging students to spend more time outside.

So, while there are legitimate concerns regarding the feasibility and effectiveness of integrating nature into education as a solution to student stress, these challenges do not negate the potential benefits. By taking a flexible approach and combining nature-based solutions with broader systemic changes, schools can provide students with a much-needed reprieve from the pressures that they face from day to day. This will help to foster a healthier, more balanced learning environment. 

The teachings of Thoreau offer valuable insights for addressing the challenges faced by today’s students. By reconnecting with nature, students can find a sense of balance and rejuvenation that helps them cope with the demands of modern education. Schools have the opportunity to integrate these principals into their practices and daily schedules, creating a more supportive and holistic learning environment. 

Ultimately, the goal should be to foster a culture that values both academic achievement and mental health. By making small but meaningful changes, such as the incorporation of nature into daily routines, educators can help students thrive academically while maintaining their well-being. This shift in perspective could pave the way for a healthier, happier generation of students and learners.

References

American Psychological Association. (n.d.). Stress in America: Generation Z

Birkner, J. (2020). Why late-night deadlines are hurting students. Technician

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Reflective Statement – figure8clementine

Core Value 1: Understand that writing is a practice that involves a multi-stage, recursive, and social progress. (In particular, students should address how they have engaged in self-directed revision.) 

I went through many different processes this semester when writing and I feel that I have grown significantly in understanding what it truly means to even rewrite a paper. I used to just correct mistakes and move on with them, but this course helped me succeed in taking a step back and understanding everything I was writing about, with help. I was in a situation that made my writing experience this semester very difficult, but with the help and encouragement I received from Professor Hodges, I was able to write something that I felt came together in a satisfying way.

Core Value 2: Understand that close and critical reading/analysis allows writers to understand how and why texts create meaning. 

I feel as though I understand the way that critical analysis/reading is an efficient way to teach how and why texts are able to be meaningful. The in-class discussions we would have, helped me look at the assignments from a different perspective and challenged me to consider things that I would normally not have even crossed my mind when writing about something. Assignments like the Visual rhetoric analysis were very helpful in teaching me how to break something down to even the most minute details, and how those details could fully change the context of what you’re writing about.

Core Value 3: Understand that writing is shaped by audience, purpose, and context.

I understand that a writer’s audience, purpose, and context are what make up a piece of writing. If there is no audience reaction or no intended audience, there would be no purpose in writing, if there is no purpose behind something written, then its existence would be meaningless, and if there isn’t a context behind something written, it would not make any sense at all, making it unreadable and also meaningless. All of those factors tie into each other and a comprehensible/meaningful paper cannot exist if even one isn’t considered. My paper was about how an audience can never truly understand an artist’s intention when creating a piece of art. With no audience, my topic wouldn’t have a purpose, and without context, any purpose would be lost on the audience reading about what I had written.

Core Value 4: Understand the role of information literacy in the practice of writing. 

I understand the importance of information literacy when writing something. If someone is misinformed, they could potentially cause harm by misinforming their audience due to ignorance and disregard for the facts of something. Coming back to the visual rhetoric assignment we were given, every frame and every second had a different story to tell, and you could derive so much meaning just based off of the little information given at a time. Throughout the assignment, I saw how each frame’s details and timing told a story, causing me to think about how different people might understand the same visuals in different ways based on their own interpretations of what they were seeing, which was something I found very interesting.

Core Value 5: Understand the ethical dimensions of writing.

This to me ties back into core value 4, the writer must treat their work as though they have full influence over the reader and know that their words may have any kind of repercussion or consequences. It is the writer’s responsibility to their audience to stay truthful and write what they intended to write, with the audience and the possible effect their writing may have on the world in mind. Writers should be aware that their words can shape opinions, provoke emotions, or even change perspectives. By acknowledging this power, writers must be very careful in choosing how they communicate, ensuring they don’t mislead or cause harm, but instead contribute to a meaningful and thoughtful conversation.

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How I used it – figure8clementine

For my research essay, I will explore the proposition that critical analysis of finished works of art can not be expected to explain the conditions of its making or the value to the artist. 

figure8clementine’s Sources

  1. https://cmc.marmot.org/Record/.b38099548

Background: This is a link to buy/rent the book version of the play Red written by John Logan. The play centers around master abstract expressionist Mark Rothko, who just landed the biggest commission in the history of modern art. In the two years that follow the commission, Rothko works feverishly with his young assistant, Ken, in his studio on the Bowery. When Ken gains the confidence to challenge him, Rothko faces the possibility that his crowning achievement could also become his undoing. Red is a portrait of an artist’s ambition and vulnerability as he tries to create a definitive work for an extraordinary setting.

How I Intend to Use It:  I will use this story to back up most of my points in my essay and will structure most of my essay based on the events in this play. 

  1. https://artsartistsartwork.com/the-enigma-of-art-embracing-emotions-and-differences/#google_vignette

Background: This article dives into detail about art and emotion, and what the connection between the two entails. It offers perspective looking into the feeling of artists behind creating works of art.

How I Intend to Use It: I’ll be using this article to better understand and study the perspective of an artist on how they feel when creating art. 

  1. https://iep.utm.edu/art-and-interpretation/

Background: This article covers the relationship between an artist and their audience and how their artwork can/will be interpreted. It looks at different ideas about how to interpret art, focusing on whether an artist’s intentions should influence our understanding. It also explores how context and other factors can affect how we view art. 

How I Intend to Use It: I Intend to use this article to explain the disconnect between the artist and the viewer, and how that can lead to a piece of art being completely misinterpreted. 

  1.  https://philologia.org.rs/index.php/ph/article/view/philologia-2020-18-18-3

Background: This source could be useful because it focuses on how Red portrays Rothko’s struggles with his art and his values. It can help explain the conflict between an artist’s intentions and external pressures, which ties into arguments about how art is created, interpreted, and understood by others.

How I Intend to Use It: I plan on using it to show how Rothko’s decision in Red reflects the tension between an artist’s personal intentions and the external expectations of their work. It could be used to illustrate a real example of how artistic meaning can be influenced by factors beyond the artist’s control, furthering my exploration of the disconnect between creation and audience perception.

  1. https://ojs.lib.unideb.hu/hjeas/article/view/7188

Background: This source examines how Red and another Künstlerdrama combine biography with performance to explore the process of creating art. It shows how Red brings Rothko’s creative act to life on stage.  

How I Intend to Use It: I plan on using it to support my argument about the gap between an artist’s intentions and how their work is received. I also want to use it to highlight how Logan balances storytelling and artistic expression to represent Rothko’s inner struggles.

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Bibliography – Who’s On First?

Annotated Bibliography

  1. Shahram Heshmat Ph.D. “5 Reasons Why We Listen to Music | Psychology TodayPsychology Today, 14 October 2021. 14 November 2024.

Background: This article talks about how people turn on music because they are motivated by specific goals And how music plays an important role in human well-being and health and how it can serve as an intervention to reduce stress.

How I Used It: I used this in my Rebuttal argument to support how music is meant to be a leisure activity and how it can help us reduce stress. This refuted the claims of the Paris Review which claims that music is meant to be a stimulating exercise and not a way to relieve stress.

  1. How to Really Listen to Music – The Paris ReviewRachel Ament. The Paris Review, 22 August 2019. 14 November 2024.

Background: This article discusses how listening to music should be an active experience, one that if done with a lot of effort, could push us deeper into understanding the complexity of songs.

How I Used It: I refuted this article in my Rebuttal Argument. I said that, while this may be true for some, listening to music, especially unfamiliar music, to create some sort of mental stimuli, is a niche art and that the majority of people listen to music to relax and unwind.

  1. Music and Emotions in the Brain: Familiarity Matters | PLOS ONE” Salimpoor, V. N., Benovoy, M., Longo, G. L., Cooperstock, J. R., & Zatorre, R. J. (2011). Music and emotions in the brain: Familiarity matters. PLOS ONE, 6(10), e25738.

Background: This article talks about a study that was done using a listening test and a functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) experiment, to clarify the role of familiarity in the brain correlates of music appreciation by controlling, in the same study, for both familiarity and musical preferences. 

How I Used It: I used this article to show how songs that sound similar to other songs we normally listen to influences our music choice. And how others are even able to predict what we will choose to listen to by what we already do listen to. 

  1. Music Streaming Services Stats (2024)Fabio Duarte. Exploding Topics, 1 February 2024. 3 November 2124.

Background: This article talks about how music streaming has completely changed the music industry. It has graphs that support the rapid and dramatic growth of streaming music.

How I Used It: I used this article honestly for the dramatic graph, almost as a marketing strategy just to show a shocking statistic that somewhat supports my argument to get the audience to favor me and my statistics.

  1. Our Aversion to the Unfamiliar | American ScientistJudy Illes, Vivian Chin. American Scientist, 28 October 2021. 3 November 2024.

Background: This article talks about a book by Bruce Wexler called Brain and Culture that discusses a hypothesis that early wiring in the brain makes it hard for people later to accept novelty and unfamiliar experiences.

How I Used It: I used this article in the Definition Argument part of my essay to discuss how cultural differences can lead to unfamiliarity bias and how that can transfer to different musical cultures.

  1. Rapid Brain Responses to Familiar vs. Unfamiliar Music – an EEG and Pupillometry study | Scientific ReportsCurrent Opinion in Neurobiology. ScienceDirect, October 2023. 3 November 2024.

Background: This article discusses a study that used electroencephalography (EEG) and pupillometry to reveal the temporal signatures of the brain processes that allow differentiation between a familiar, well liked, and unfamiliar piece of music.

How I Used It: I used this article as scientific bases to support my argument. I talked about how we like familiarity and dislike things that are unfamiliar and how this study supports that that also transfers to musical preferences.

  1. Skin-to-skin contact – Baby Friendly InitiativeSkin-to-skin contact. 9 December 2024. 16 November 2024.

Background: This article discusses the importance of skin to skin contact right after birth and the benefits. Discusses the growing body of evidence that skin-to-skin contact after the birth helps babies and their mothers.

How I Used It: I used this article as an analogy for how we need things that are familiar to us to feel comfortable. This is shown scientifically through the importance of skin to skin contact between a mother and baby right after birth.

  1. The Contribution of Attention to the Mere Exposure Effect for Parts of Advertising Images – PMCPubMed Central. National Library of Medicine, 5 September 2018. 3 November 2024.

Background: This article discusses how repeatedly presented stimuli are effectively evaluated more positively than novel stimuli.

How I Used It: I used this article to talk more about the mere exposure effect and how just seeing something more times makes you prefer it.

  1. Bill Cates, “https://www.linkedin.com/pulse/cognitive-fluency-your-key-winning-more-clients-bill#:~:text=Cognitive%20fluency%20means%20clarity%20–%20the,process%20and%20understand%20that%20information.” Linkedin. 9 February 2023. 3 November 2024. 

Background: This article discusses what Cognitive Fluency is and how to harness it as a tool.

How I Used It: I used this article to define cognitive fluency, and to use the definition to further explain how familiarity with information means you prefer it better.

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