Class 06: MON SEP 23

Agenda MON SEP 23

Riddle: The Mirror Paradox

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Housekeeping

  • First Mandatory Conference Reminder and/or Follow-up
    • DEFEND YOUR HYPOTHESIS

Counterintuitive Questions

  1. Why are we citizens of the country we’re born in?
  2. Can we democratize water?

Mechanics

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In-Class Task

  • Click on My Hypothesis in the right-hand sidebar.
  • From the resulting feed, choose one or more My Hypothesis posts that intrigue you to want to read further
  • Leave feedback for 1-3 of your classmates as Replies to their posts.
    • Offer a counterintuitive angle
    • Suggest good research material
    • Assess the quality of thinking shown in the six steps
    • Make any substantive assessment that could help your classmate

32 Responses to Class 06: MON SEP 23

  1. ChefRat's avatar ChefRat says:

    Class Notes 9.23.24

    “Why are we citizens in the country we live in?”

    Something that struck me when thinking our citizenship in the country we live was you could interpret as “being owned” by that government or country through a choice that wasn’t really our own, depending on the country. Contrary to the US, if you’re born in France or Ireland for example you are not automatically a citizen.

    “Can we democratize water?”

    Water is seen something that’s seen as a human right, every person deserves it. But it seems unusual to my personal perspective that this basic right is so governed that as we discussed, we can make it illegal in certain places to collect your own rainwater.

    Discussing the mechanics of citation.

    If we wanted to add or remove certain words when quoting text we should use “…” known as ellipsis, this isn’t something I knew. But it’s something worth noting only to use this in a way to get a gist of a longer text, not to altar what the authors intention of message to the audience is. Title of an article doesn’t receive italics for reference, it’s supposed to receive quotation marks.

  2. Softball1321's avatar Softball1321 says:

    Class Notes – Softball1321

    Riddle: The Mirror Paradox

    • When you look in a mirror, it seems as if it flips things left to right. Although the mirror is not “flipping” anything, it flips front to back. The mirror flips things as if it was looking at you from behind.
    • Can you democratize water? The water that lands on your house is technically not yours. Water should have more of a value. (Counterintuitive question)
    • You use three dots to indicate there was a deletion when summzaring a site in your writing.
    • When italics are used in writing, it indicates a title of a publication.
    • Link articles that are used in the writing on the references page.
    • Choose the latest APA style for reference page.
    • Learning different examples of citations.

  3. phoenixxxx23's avatar phoenixxxx23 says:

    Class Notes – phoenixxxx23– 09/23/2024

    -a mirror flips front-to-back not left-to-right

    -we read our shirt in the mirror as people see it in real life

    -The wars would not exist, if territory did not mean anything and you could live anywhere you want without restrictions

    -water will be the next potential war

    -the title of the article gets quotes

    -the title of the publication/journal gets italics

    -New York Times uses italics because it’s a publication

    -pure paraphrase does not need quotation marks

    -we use APA format for our research paper

    -APA 7 style

    -You can turn 100 words in the sentence or two

  4. taco491's avatar taco491 says:

    Class Notes: 9/23/24

    -Holding the door open is useless because it causes un-wanted haste just to accommodate someone’s “politeness”

    -Wikipedia is the best thing?? Prof David believes it is one of the best things in the world. We can’t use it as a source, but if we look at an article on there we can go to their references below and quote it from there.

    -Grammar is a description of norms, meaning it just comes from how people talk

    -Mirror Paradox: When looking in the mirror we believe it flips things left to right. Why? it actually doesn’t… it flips front to back. With Prof going over this riddle I have realized that a mirror flips images/things as if it was looking at someone from behind. This incudes letters, symbols, etc.

    Counterintuitive Questions:

    -Why are we citizens of the country we’re born in? No one knows why this is the case for everyone. Prof David states there would be no wars if everyone were able to live where they wanted. Is the true? What about civil wars

    -Can we democratize water? The more scarce water becomes, this will most likely lead to people not being allowed to collect it. Government would want to keep the water to themselves to help rivers/ keep it to spread as little water as they want.

    -Citations/quotes: Get quotes right the the source, if you want to cut some words out add ellipses(3 dots) if want to add a word or two so the reader does not have to read a whole other paragraph we can add brackets

    -Title of an article gets quote, title of a publication gets italics; ex. New York Times. A section will be put in quotation marks, but the journal with be in italics

    -APA style: We should put “References” at the top of the page, not works cited because that is for MLA. Prof David likes when the link is involved in the citation, so that people can go straight to the source from the page. Use latest APA style.

    -Examples of APA style citations could be (Publisher and Title, plus quote), (Publisher plus quote), (Name of Journal, plus paraphrase), Name of Journal, Title of Article, plus paraphrase), (Author, Name of Journal, plus paraphrase)

  5. unicorn45678's avatar unicorn45678 says:

    Notes 9/23 – unicorn45678

    *The most top 5 world inventions are medicine

    The mirror paradox

    • The mirror flips things left to right
    • sometimes you may think that your shirt is backwards however that’s not the case
    • mirrors are somewhat a hallucination
    • all a mirror does is flip from the front to the back

    Counterintuitive Questions

    • Why are we citizens of the country we’re born in? – because we are now, they’re territory.
    • Can we democratize water? – we can’t own land, we can never own land, however, when we sit on that land, water falls on it, is it ours?
    • many people were also arguing that water should have a price
    • why would people want to put a price on water if we need it
    • there’s also a country in Africa that relays on a river to get their water

    -quotes that are quoted in articles, mean that they are directly from the textRe

    References ex: “Childhood Obesity Causes and Consequences.” (2016, December 15). Retrieved April 16, 2018.

    • we don’t have to quote people all the time, sometimes we can use the name of the journal

    Ex 2: According to the National Center for Health Statistics, “sugary drinks consist of fruit drinks, soda, energy drinks, sport drinks, and sweetened waters

    *you can learn a lot from AI because it can come up with claims without even gathering information for what your reading

  6. imaginary.persona's avatar imaginary.persona says:

    09/23/24

    What happened:

    • Why do we hold the door open for people?
    • Why do we let people go first at stop signs instead of us going first if we arrived first? (Too many firsts in that sentence jeez). 
    • Why is Wikipedia great?
    • Don’t quote Wikipedia.
    • The mirror paradox.
      • “I’m transparent and its seeing me from behind and not from the front”
    • Defend your hypothesis
    • Counterintuitive Questions
      • Why are citizens of the country we’re born in?
      • Can we democratize water?
    • Mechanics
    • AI Usage

    What I Got:

    • People are too nice and it can cause problems that may lead to life or death
    • It’s a free website with all the information on everything but never quote it, quote the sources that are used because those have solid true information.
      • Wikipedia has good sources but the information can be eh
    • Mirrors are creepy and mysterious because who knows what is in them or behind them- I’m superstitious
    • If vague with explanation of hypothesis, you will have to defend it
    • If we lived wherever we wanted there wouldn’t be war
    • Water will be the next war
    • How to properly cite information
      • Publication is italicized
      • Article gets quotations 
  7. GamersPet's avatar GamersPet says:

    Class Notes Takeaway – 9/23/24

    So many question that were presented that never occurred to me in the slightest bit such as why people hold the door for the other person out of politeness or the mirror paradox of why it reflects that way. The act of politeness towards another person by just simply holding the door could be a nuisance to both parties because if one person holds the door for the other person and the other person is further away from the door then the one who is holding the door is wasting time waiting for that person to approach the door. On the other hand, if the walker is walking at their leisure pace and saw someone holding the door for them then the walker would have to pick up the pace so the person holding the door doesn’t have to wait for that walker to come which is a nuisances in the end.

    The mirror paradox session also flew above my head because of the question of why does the mirror would reflect from left to right, but not up or down? The answer was that it reflects what’s in front of the it. It was an illusion depending on where we look at where we misjudged the difference between where is the right or left.

    We were told to never use Wikipedia because of the lack of credibility, but by looking at the reference pages for that topic can help us expand our sources to support our hypothesis.

    For a quote to be a quote from the source is that you can’t delete or add words from the quote because it is not word to word from the author or source of the article. I understand how to appropriately use italics, and quotation marks in essays where the title of the publication gets italics while the title of the article gets quotation marks.

  8. Starfire04.blog's avatar Starfire04.blog says:

    The mirror paradox: A mirror literally reflects back to us what we look like. However, we see ourselves in the mirror differently than how we are seen in person by another. It does not flip our image but gives us a view of ourselves right back to us, reflecting us.

    Counterintuitive Questions: We are citizens of a country we are born in because we were born in that territory. However this does not go for every country. Some countries declare that just because you are born there you are not automatically a citizen contrary to the US. It is a tricky question and nobody really knows the answer.

    Water is a necessity, if water was to become an issue to get then we would not be allowed to collect water. Fresh water is increasingly scarce and we would slowly not be allowed to collect our own water. War could possibly even occur if we have an intense scarcity of fresh water.

  9. loverofcatsandmatcha's avatar loverofcatsandmatcha says:

    Class Notes 9/23

    Purposeful Summary

    • Start with “it seems counterintuitive”
    • Can break up the first sentence into parts to provide background while asserting the claim.
    • Pick a side, and use logic and passion to defend (ethos logos pathos)
    • General statement, but follow up immediately with payoff to keep reader engaged
    • Don’t over explain background- keep it on a need to know basis. Things that don’t immediately provide value to the claim are a waste of words
    • It doesn’t matter how much you write. You can achieve the point efficiently in six sentences
    • Reference Goat81 as a model for this exercise
    • AI is a valuable tool for some things, but do not overdo it or use it as a crutch

    Counterintuitive Questions

    • We are citizens because that’s just what they say
    • The rules are made by governments, but why can’t we all just live under one government and eliminate boundary lines?
    • Where does the land ownership boundary end? Can you collect rainwater, or is that the community’s resource?
    • These questions all raise more questions, creating a dilemma. Where does it end?
    • There are laws specifying what you can and cannot do with rainwater. The government can put a regulation or law on anything that may be a dilemma. 
    • These sorts of questions exist within our hypotheses, we just need to dig deeper.
      • These questions will make our papers better, and provide deeper insight

    Citation Mechanics

    • There are several essentials to proper citations
      • Author, title (could contain name of publication but not necessary), quotation/paraphrase, “said” language
    • There are multiple ways to achieve the same citation result
      • See “Boylan’s Folly” citations for examples
    • Periods and commas go inside the quotation marks ALWAYS
    • Do not overuse the colon; it should exist only once, if at all, within the 3000 word paper
  10. waffles121's avatar waffles121 says:

    Class Notes 9/23

    • Mirrors are a bit of an illusion because they can distort the way that something looks. 
    • Mirrors reflect the image of someone the way that the person is in real life. 
    • Mirrors do not flip an image and change its congruence, instead they present the image exactly as it is presented in real life.

    Counter Intuitive Questions 

    1. Why are we citizens of the country we are born into? I think we may just be citizens of the country we are born into as a way to sort ourselves into groups of similarity based upon our origins. I think it has to do with humans being inclined to express pride and the importance of a sense of self identity.
    2. Can we democratize water? The scarcer water becomes, the greater the demand for water grows. If the need for water is on the rise, disputes and conflicts between nations are likely to ensue. It is very possible that nations would begin to put restrictions and bans on water usage and transport in the hopes of maintaining their nation’s water supply.
  11. Who'sOnFirst?'s avatar Who'sOnFirst? says:
    • Common knowledge is not always scientifically accurate, as shown by the fact that people generally agree that a mirror flips your image when it actually simply shows what it ‘sees’ front to back.
    • Writing a counterintuitive piece requires going back and forth between both sides of the argument.
    • We learned that to cite properly can follow several models including what’s below
      • In Daniel Flath’s essay, “Boylan’s Folly,” Flath claims, “Boys can’t learn from women.”
      • Placing the comma and periods inside the quotation marks “,.”
      • Colons should only be used sparingly as an equal sign :
  12. student12121's avatar student12121 says:

    Class Notes 9/23/24 – student12121

    Common knowledge can often lead to mistakes. If something is accepted as common knowledge some can believe it to be above analysis. If everyone believes something true it might get by with actually being false because no one looks carefully at the knowledge.

    AI is good at answering questions that already have a lot of public opinions. If it can draw from these it does a great job. The flip side of this is that it has lots of trouble formulating a unique opinion without a wide variety of opinions generated by real people.

    Does anyone truly own anything? How does one define where ownership starts and ends? These can be applied to property but also throughout life.

    APA citations only in this class.

  13. pinkduck's avatar pinkduck says:

    Class notes 9/23

    • A mirror flips front to back not left to right.
    • We are citizens in the country we’re born in because of the territory we’re in.
    • You don’t just have the grass when you own something you also have below the grass and the airspace.
    • Can we democratize water ? – the more scarce water becomes the more likely a war could occur.
    • Water is a vital source that we need, meaning if there was little water people would start to be able to keep little to none of it.
    • The word that allows for the quote to be part of the same grammar.
    • Commas and periods always are inside the quotation marks.
    • The use of the word “that” allows you to not need a comma after it or for you to capitalize the first word in your quote when citing.
    • Proper citing is important when writing.
  14. ChickenNugget's avatar ChickenNugget says:

    Class Notes 9/23/24

    • Purposeful Summary: We read a Purposeful Summary that presented a very good example of providing only the necessary background information while also addressing the ethical dilemma journalists were facing. The writing was organized and concise.
    • Counterintuitive Questions: These kinds of questions are ones that we never really think about because they are topics that just come natural, but we can find these types of questions if we take closer looks at our hypotheses. Sometimes these questions may sound completely ridiculous until you think about it and rephrase it into a real question that sounds like it is actually worth studying.
    • Citation Mechanics: Good citations identify the author, the title of the work, a quotation, and “SAID” language. The “Informal Citations” page gives examples of proper punctuation when writing in-text citations. It was emphasized that periods and commas ALWAYS go inside the quotation marks. The page also gives examples of incorrect citations.
  15. Robofrog's avatar Robofrog says:

    9/23 class notes:

    Purposeful Summary – A balancing act of information and putting forth the author’s opinion of the information.

    Counterintuitive ? 1- We are citizens because most likely that is where we are going to grow up and live there.

    Counterintuitive ? 2- We should ensure everyone gets the water they need.

    Citations- Learned about correctly citing things. Quotes do not require capital letters at the beginning of them, periods are always inside the quotation marks

    Assignments:

    Purposeful Summary – 9/24

    In text APA citation response- 9/24

  16. iloveme5's avatar iloveme5 says:

    In class notes 9/23- iloveme5

    • The mirror paradox: Why can’t they flip things top to bottom? We believe it flips things left to right when it is actually front and back. I wonder how mirrors are built. I might watch a YouTube video on it. Professor commented that photographs don’t flip you but mirrors do. There is a feature on iPhone that allows you to flip the picture to the side of your liking. I wonder if that is why some people are so insecure because mirror/phones flip your pictures. 
    • AI can be used for good but if it is too good to be true it is obvious lol.
    • Why are we citizens of a country we’re born in? Some countries like Italy have different laws pertaining birth right citizenship. Have to go through a process for moving to another country. I was born in Puerto rico but since it is part of the US I have American citizenship. think I would stay in the U.S for the rest of my life but maybe move to another state somewhere south. Downside of it is if someone is arrested in another country they would just be able to go to another country as a criminal and they wouldn’t have a clue.
    • I think it would attract criminals and immigrants because it would be so easy. 
    • Difference between owning land vs owning a house/property. The rain that falls on the land, who would it belong too? I don’t think water belongs to anyone. If it falls on your land maybe in a pool or if collected in barrels is rightfully your water because you collected it in your property. 
    • Informal citation exercise: a good citation identifies the author, identifies the title of the article, doesn’t contain name of publication, contain a quotation, they have SAID language. 
    • Professor showed us examples of goof citation and how to use quotations correctly. 
    • Never a case where a comma or a periods should be outside the quotation marks. 
    • If you don’t understand use of a colon, don’t use it. 
    • “according to” IS said language.
    • Professor showed us examples correct citations and use of correct commas in sentences. 
  17. Andarnaurram's avatar Andarnaurram says:

    Class Notes-9/23

    -Mirrors do not flip things from left to right but from front to back

    -Why are we citizens of the country we’re born in? We now are part of the territory.

    -Can we democratize water? You are not allowed to collect rain water that falls on your property in many states and this is because fresh rain water is more rare then we believe and could one day start a war for

    -Never a case where comma or period end outside the quotation mark

    -not every beginning to a quote needs to be capitalized

    -A colon is like an equal sign, everything on either side of it must be the same

    -Learning different citations and how to write them is important

  18. pineapple488's avatar pineapple488 says:

    Class Notes:

    • Mirrors don’t flip things left to right like most people believe, they actually flip things front to back.
    • AI is a very powerful tool but it must be used carefully and correctly.
    • There would be no need for international borders if people could move to any country they wanted, and many wars would not take place.
    • The idea of owning property is kind of stupid, the Earth doesn’t care who “owns” the land.
    • There are laws against collecting rain water that falls on your property because fresh water is valuable to the community. Water becomes increasingly scarce, and there may one day be a war over it.
    • If you walk a mile in 5 minutes versus walking a mile in 15 minutes, do you get the same amount of exercise? Although there are difference in heart rate and muscle usage, I think that you would burn about the same amount of energy.
    • When citing a source, if you use a word like “claims” or “says” right before the quote, you would need a comma and the first word of the quote would need to be capitalized. But if you threw in a word like “that” before the quote, you would not need a comma and the first word of the quote could be lowercased, because it flows with the grammar of the sentence.
    • Commas and periods always always always always always go inside the quotation marks.
    • A colon is like a very narrow equal sign, what is on the left is the same as what is on the right, so you don’t need any sort of transitional language.
    • When saying someone’s name and who they are, commas are sort of like parenthesis, what is between them could be left out and the sentence would still flow.
    • The Fiction That Makes The World Go Round – book review by Richard Davies
    • Money: The True Story of a Made-Up Thing – book by Jacob Goldstein
  19. yardie's avatar yardie says:

    9/23/24 Notes

    Grammar is descriptive

    Mirror don’t flip images they reflect them

    Can we democratize water?  Is the water that falls onto the land we own ours to keep?

    • There are laws that prohibit us to collect the rainwater that falls onto our properties

    In-text citation

    Use (…) to indicate you have left something out 

    By using the terms “sugary drinks” instead of just “soda” you can broaden the categories to “fruit drinks, soda, energy drinks, sports drinks, and sweetened waters.” 

    Italicize titles when using them- because it’s the publication

    Use quotation marks for the “article”

    Example: “Advice for Patients” section of the journal Nutrients.

    References are in MLA format  title References, center it and list references below.

    Mirror Reply

    Yardie

    I learned that mirrors don’t flip images, they mirror them, reflecting the images straight back.

  20. MAD ClTY's avatar MAD ClTY says:

    Mirror Flip front to back.

    Citizens of the country you were born in just to be given a title like I’m from here.

    Water is given the value we the people give it. Title gets italics, the publication gets put in (” “).

  21. lobsterman's avatar lobsterman says:

    Class notes 9/23

    Mirrors flip front to back not side to side.

    Why are we automatically a citizen of where we are born. Would wars exist is there were no borders?

    Water could become less available and eventually become regulated by the government.

    Covered correct use of citations.

    Use quotation marks for the title of an article.

  22. 9/23/24 – figure8clementine

    class notes

    -the importance of wikipedia

    -Mirror paradox: Mirrors don’t reflect things up and down or left-to-right, but reflect them front to back.

    -Why do we hold doors open for people out of politeness when in reality, you’re ignore the other persons intentions to satisfy your own selfish needs to be polite? At intersections, why do some people let every other car go, despite being there first and despite the pandemonium letting everyone else go can cause.

    -Why is someone who’s born in America automatically an American citizen, but in other places this wouldn’t be the case? Why do we as people, make it so that you can’t just live anywhere you want just because you want to?

    -Should rainwater that falls on someones property be legally theirs? Some places it’s illegal to collect that rainwater due to the scarcity of it in that area. Does it become that person’s obligation to contribute the water to the community, regardless of the fact that it fell on their property and can be argued as being rightfully theirs?

    -Quotes should be used on a title that you’re fully naming and not changing anything about, italics should be used when you shorten a title but are still referencing it.

  23. student1512's avatar student1512 says:

    Class notes:

    Mirror riddle: you see front to back, as if you’re looking behind yourself. “Common knowledge” can be somewhat unreliable. 

    Purposeful summaries– show differences as to why the article is counterintuitive.

    Logical intro-then give more detail-more detail- balance both extremes.

    Counterintuitive Questions: 

    Why are we citizens of the country we’re born in- Can’t always be true. Just because you have a baby in Italy doesn’t mean it’s an Italian baby. There are prospects that need to be followed in order to ensure populations throughout the world. Boundaries are needed to keep us humans contained and organized.

    Can we democratize water?- Fresh water is scarce=more valuable, and could fight wars over it. 

    Important to ask these questions directed towards your hypothesis to dig deeper.

    Informal Citation– not every quote needs to be capitalized, nor a comma before the claim

    Never an expectation, commas go inside quotation marks. Always, always, always. : is kinda an = sign. Whatever is before is the same as whatever is after.

  24. Mongoose449's avatar Mongoose! says:

    Notes – 9/23/2024

    What was covered:

    • Began with the mirror paradox, and how perspective plays a role.
    • Went over the Hypothesis and Zoom meeting wise.
    • We went over the Purposeful summary.
    • Discussed about AI
    • Talked about deep questions
    • Exercise about informal citation
    • APA citation review, examples and information.

    What I learned:

    • Mirror paradox put into perspective both things that make sense, and things that don’t. Even if things seemingly make sense, it might not.
    • AI and purposeful summary merely show how you should both format and write something, along with some insight into the future.
    • Things that make sense can be argued that they may or may not be right.
    • Citation information: How things are formatted, how punctuation is used.
  25. colibrimic's avatar colibrimic says:

    Class notes:

    -Mirror riddle paradox: The image is reflected in a symmetry that is opposite to what we recognize in the real world.

    -Defend your hypothesis, and make an appointment.

    -The image is reflected in a symmetry that is opposite to what we recognize in the real world.

    -the next big war could be over water.

    -use 3 points to indicate that something in the reading was summarized.

    -The use of italics indicates that it is the title of the topic.

    -The articles used in writing should be placed on the reference page

    -Use APA style for reference pages.

    _use different citation styles

  26. Bagel&Coffee's avatar Bagel&Coffee says:

    Today was surprisingly less wide across topics and more deep into one topic.

    More riddles to start the day with, this time about mirror images and flipping. I have my guard up as usual when it comes to riddles for those gotcha moments. The answer to this one was ok. I think the answer of “front to back” to a good way to explain mirrors.

    Why are we citizens of the country we are born in? Because the U.S. says so. I would go further and guess we are resources for our country, and what better way to get resources than to simply claim someone? “You there, hop on this hamster wheel and make my economy go around till I need you in a war.” is a somewhat irreverent way to look at things, but has a bit of truth to it. In a greater context the government does provide to make the people on its land “happy”; like transportation, firefighters, police, and politicians that can invent rules that our neighbors cannot be having loud outdoor parties keeping me up at night to 4am in the morning.

    Can we democratize water? Can we vote on what to do with water? Or do you mean to own water? Like lakes and oceans maybe, and if there wasn’t any crime. It only takes one person to ruin it for everyone else and disobey the strategy voted upon. If water falls in your yard, is it yours? Well, do you have city water or well water? I believe anyone could collect rainfall without the police taking interest in you. The exception to this being in areas of drought. Then again if there is an AI uprising or something equally depressing, who will stop you? Might as well enjoy while you can.

    The focus of this class was largely a Q&A on understanding how to express some of the more meta elements outside of a paper in an APA style paper. Specifically, a research or thesis paper. Stuff that someone would not have to worry about if they were writing the next Harry Potter novel for example.

    The title of an article you are referencing gets quotes. (The author or company is just written normally.)

    The publication (think science journal) gets italics (Journal of public health dentistry).

    A section of a newspaper sections “sports” “Advice for patients” are put in quotes.

    If you want to emphasize something you can use italics. (fruit flavored drinks such as Kool aid)

    We are using APA style for our thesis. The references page must be in APA format

    It is preferred if the articles are linked in our references via hyperlinking the name to be clickable.

    There seems to be many situations, and it is important to know what to do in each situation depending on if we are paraphrasing, quoting, using journal names, or the title of article. I will probably need to spend three afternoons on the APA website.

  27. lil.sapph's avatar lil.sapph says:

    NOTES 9/23

    • began talking about how some people being overly kind, inconvenience other people. It has definitely happened to me before trying to run towards the door someone opened for me 
    • the references list under any article in Wikipedia, are top tier. I was always told no Wikipedia and that its just 
    • grammar is not a set of rules, but a description of norms
    • The mirror discussion was pretty interesting in the way that perspective really determines what you are looking at and how you see it. The mirror just reflects and diffuses the light that it receives, but when you said you don’t show up upside down do you I thought about looking at yourself like in a spoon or on a concave surface where you do end up upside down
    • Water wars was also pretty interesting in the way that I never really thought about how water falling on your property wouldn’t be yours, but then technically your land cant owned by you because its US territory meaning the US owns it but then again like you said in class, who thinks they can even own part of the earth? 
    • We went over different ways to incorporate sources which I did know most of them but definitely have to go over how to do the resources and make sure I do everything right
    • Went over someone purposeful summary which I also saw the nice seesaw balance which made it really cool
    • Have another assignment to do, cite a source which doesn’t seem too hard, but I feel like it is. 
    • Went over notes and I feel like I didn’t really write that many notes today, the blog website wasn’t loading the whole time and kept logging me out 😦 
  28. Elongated lobster's avatar Elongated lobster says:

    9/23-

    Notes-

    Go to the bottom of a wikipedia page for valuable sources for research. In order to become a well-rounded person, you must continue to question everything and try to find another way to think about something. When making an addition to a quote, you can add with either brackets or add the word in, in the case that the author has implied intention that he meant or later expanded on this idea. When writing, italicizing can be used as a method of grouping. Meaning you italicize the main group name and follow it with members within that group. Remember to use APA and not MLA. 

  29. Bruinbird's avatar Bruinbird says:

    I realize I never posted my notes

    Notes: September 23, 9:30 am Class

    First paragraphs can generally put the main idea together of what the reader needs to know, without too many excess details.

    AI, is a tool. To utilize and help guide your writing. However it is a dangerous tool, it can trap students and, could fall under plagirism.

    Counterintuitive questions can be figured out if you look really hard at a hypothesis.

    When quoting someone, the way you phrase the quote, with commas, conjunctions, etc, change how someone can perceive what you’re saying because it sounds different.

    Commas and periods ALWAYS! (no exceptions) go inside the quotation marks.

    Except when NEVER!!

    Quick link to the citations .(fourth citation is rare)

    Appositives – defining a noun and descriptor as equivalent

    Bingle, the trader, 

    Can identify the trader as either “the trader”, or “Bingle”

  30. Class notes:

    the opening paragraph can really tell the reader what its going to be about but it shouldn’t bore the reader

    don’t include unnecessary detail

    we reviewed how to properly cite our sources:

    always put the punctuation inside of the quotation marks

    remember to use APA not MLA

    The publication (ex.science journal) gets italics (ex.Journal of public health dentistry)

  31. Class notes

    the first paragraph should tell people the main idea without giving a bunch of extra details

    remember to use APA not MLA

    we reviewed how to quote and cite our sources properly (ex. always put the punctuation inside of the quotation marks)

    Always italicize the name or publication

    A section of a newspaper sections are put in quotes

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