Category Archives: Authors

Definition Rewrite – yardie

American Obesity: A Consequence of Exploitation We are a fat country. Americans are continuing to contribute to the rising rates of obesity. Still, even after knowing about the problematic disease, we choose to spend thousands every year on “weight loss … Continue reading

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Reflective-Elongated Lobster

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. My work demonstrates this core value by incorporating peer feedback and instructor feedback within … Continue reading

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Robust very rewrite -Burnbook04

Heroin addicts who commit crimes to fund their addictions are a major issue in Vancouver. The “free heroin for addicts” initiative is making every effort to help the addicts stop. The issue is the high crime rate brought on by … Continue reading

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Purposeful summary rewrite – Burnbook04

The majority of Haiti’s population was wiped away by a devastating earthquake in 2010. In addition to causing widespread destruction, the earthquake also created disruption throughout Haiti. After the earthquake, desperate families turned to looting in an attempt to save … Continue reading

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Reflective—GamersPet

Core Value 1. My work demonstrates that I used a variety of social and interactive practices that involve recursive stages of exploration, discovery, conceptualization, and development. From the beginning of the semester, I wasn’t able to identify my purpose of … Continue reading

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Research-Elongated Lobster

A Potential Solution to Student Stress May be Right Outside the Window Stress in adolescents has become an ever-growing issue, affecting millions of children daily. Research conducted by Professor Jean M. Twenge of San Diego State University, published by the … Continue reading

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Reflective Statement – figure8clementine

Core Value 1: Understand that writing is a practice that involves a multi-stage, recursive, and social progress. (In particular, students should address how they have engaged in self-directed revision.)  I went through many different processes this semester when writing and … Continue reading

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How I used it – figure8clementine

For my research essay, I will explore the proposition that critical analysis of finished works of art can not be expected to explain the conditions of its making or the value to the artist.  figure8clementine’s Sources Background: This is a … Continue reading

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Bibliography – Who’s On First?

Annotated Bibliography Background: This article talks about how people turn on music because they are motivated by specific goals And how music plays an important role in human well-being and health and how it can serve as an intervention to … Continue reading

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Bibliography—figure8clementine

This is just one writer apart of putting together essays in the Art and interpretation section of the Internet Encyclopedia of philosophy. This Website was crucial in helping me understand different artists’ perspectives and the reasoning behind creating art in … Continue reading

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